Kareeb Rehkar Bhi Ab Zaroor Faasla Sa Hoga "Khwahish"

by khwaish on March 24, 2013, 06:37:17 PM
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«Reply #15 on: March 25, 2013, 01:49:07 AM »
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Quote from: khwahish on March 24, 2013, 06:37:17 PM
Kal Raat Darwaaze Ke Dastak Par Dhyaan Naa Diya..!!!!
Subeh Uske Pairon Ke Nishaan Dekhe To Bahut Roye..!!!!


Woh Bichadkar Mujhse Kuch Khafa Sa Hoga
Yakeenan Uske Dil meN Kuch Daba Sa Hoga

Chaahe Kitna Bhi Gham Apna Chupana Chaahe
Dil meN Kaanch Jaisa Kuch Chuba Sa Hoga

Mujhko Uskee Berukhi Se Koi Shikayat Nahi
Saath Rehkar Bhi Ab Woh Mujhse Juda Sa Hoga

Kaat Ne De Woh Zindagi Apni,Khud-Parastii Mein
Tufaano Se Ladne Wala Diya Aaj Bujha Sa Hoga

Keh Gaya Main saamne Uske Dil Ki Har Baat..!!
Kareeb Rehkar Bhi Ab Zaroor Faasla Sa Hoga

Uske Kitab Ke Har Panne MeN "Khwahish" Ka Naam Tha
Aaj Yeh Naam Bhi Uskee Kitaab MeN Mita Sa Hoga



        ~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~

achcha kalaam hai Applause Applause Applause

khawahish sahab 2nd sher ke pahle misre mein CHAAHE ko delete kat dein kyon ki wo aakhir mein aap ne likha hai. KITNA BHI GHAM APNA CHHUPANA CHAHHE Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #16 on: March 25, 2013, 02:05:18 AM »
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Bahut Khoob
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«Reply #17 on: March 25, 2013, 01:05:19 PM »
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bahut hi lajwab peshkash khwaish ji...
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«Reply #18 on: March 25, 2013, 04:40:25 PM »
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Khawahish Jee Aadaab!


WaaH janab waah kia kahne behad khoobsurat aur behad umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne...
Bade hi umdaa aur gehre ahsaas O khayaal ko khoobsurat lafzoN meiN dhalaa hai.. Usual Smile


Sabhi ashaar hume behad khoob lage janab... Is khoobsurat kalaam par humari
dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #19 on: March 25, 2013, 09:44:06 PM »
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waah waah waah waah Khwaish ji, kyaa kehne, bahut hi khoob, bahut pyaaraa likhaa hai aapne.....!!!
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«Reply #20 on: March 26, 2013, 06:04:03 AM »
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Original post ki shuruwat main jo shaer hai, woh do lines bahaut bahaut gehri hai..shaer main jo soch doobi hai usko tahe dil se daad.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kalam bahaut acha hai Khwaish dost.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Anu di aur Khwaish dost ki jugalbandi kay kya kehne..
Wah wah wah..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #21 on: March 28, 2013, 03:06:40 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on March 24, 2013, 07:20:15 PM
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Waaaaaah. Khwaish ji kya khoobsurat ehsaas hai. behad umda ghazal kahi hai aapne. Dil khush ho gaya padhke. Dil se mubarakbad qubool kare.


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«Reply #22 on: March 28, 2013, 05:26:07 AM »
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«Reply #23 on: March 28, 2013, 07:05:03 PM »
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Quote from: Rajnish.raaj on March 24, 2013, 08:21:46 PM
Waah kya baat hai,

khwish ji,

bahoot khoob


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«Reply #24 on: April 01, 2013, 02:47:06 AM »
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bahut khubsurat peshkash khwahish ji... bahut din baad aaj mauka mila YO par padhne ka aur aap ki peshkash saamne aagayi bahut khoob... yuhi likhte rahiye khush rahiye...

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Quote from: sksaini4 on March 24, 2013, 08:26:24 PM
waah waah waah bahut khoob


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«Reply #26 on: April 10, 2013, 07:35:34 PM »
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very very good
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on March 24, 2013, 08:33:57 PM
waahhhhh kamaal ka reply khwaish .........
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teri yaadon se sajaye baithi hu duniya apni
ab inse main door reh jee paungi bhi to kaise

ek inhi ka to sahara hai iss toote bebas dil ko
iss jaageer ko kisi aur pe lutaaingi bhi to kaise .....


Bahut Bahut Khoooob Annnu...

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