Karz teri wafa ka...............................................Aqsh

by aqsh on December 11, 2012, 06:38:53 AM
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«Reply #15 on: December 11, 2012, 08:26:55 AM »
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Quote from: sahal on December 11, 2012, 07:30:21 AM
WONDERFUL ,,,AMAZING GHAZAL ,,AQSH JI
ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
thnx sahal jee
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«Reply #16 on: December 11, 2012, 08:27:30 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 11, 2012, 08:04:04 AM
Aqsh Jee Aadaab!


WaaH waaH waaH kia kahne Aqsh jee behad umdaa aur behad
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WaaH jee bade hi khoobsurat khayaal aur umdaa bayaani
rahi... is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O
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Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

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thank you so much parwaaz jee
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«Reply #17 on: December 11, 2012, 08:29:52 AM »
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«Reply #18 on: December 11, 2012, 09:06:26 AM »
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Really it is a very nice creation.
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«Reply #19 on: December 11, 2012, 10:07:24 AM »
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Quote from: prashad on December 11, 2012, 08:29:52 AM
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thnx prashad jee
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«Reply #20 on: December 11, 2012, 10:07:53 AM »
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Quote from: Riyaz Ashna on December 11, 2012, 09:06:26 AM
Really it is a very nice creation.
thank you so much riyaz ashna jee
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«Reply #21 on: December 11, 2012, 11:37:58 AM »
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Bahut khoob bahut khoob kya bat hai
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«Reply #22 on: December 11, 2012, 12:02:17 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on December 11, 2012, 06:38:53 AM
Karz teri wafa ka, ada baar baar karooN
Apna dil dooN ya, jaan nisaar karooN

Dhadkane apni bicha dooN, tere kadmoN par
Kya tujhpe qurbaan, mere yaar karooN

Chaha tujhe toh, khud se mohabbat hui
Tu bait mere saamne, tera deedar karooN

Meri saansoN meiN, basi hai teri kushboo
Sab kuch bhulakar, sirf tujhe pyaar karooN

Kitni chahat tujhse hai, yeh nahi jaante
Khud se bhi jyaada, tera aitbaar karooN


waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #23 on: December 11, 2012, 02:38:00 PM »
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Waaaaah, behtareen, poori ghazal achhi lagi aur khaastaur pe matla aur 4th she'r.
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«Reply #24 on: December 11, 2012, 07:10:50 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on December 11, 2012, 06:38:53 AM
Karz teri wafa ka, ada baar baar karooN
Apna dil dooN ya, jaan nisaar karooN

Dhadkane apni bicha dooN, tere kadmoN par
Kya tujhpe qurbaan, mere yaar karooN

Chaha tujhe toh, khud se mohabbat hui
Tu bait mere saamne, tera deedar karooN

Meri saansoN meiN, basi hai teri kushboo
Sab kuch bhulakar, sirf tujhe pyaar karooN

Kitni chahat tujhse hai, yeh nahi jaante
Khud se bhi jyaada, tera aitbaar karooN



Bahut Bahut Khooob Aqsh ji..

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«Reply #25 on: December 12, 2012, 05:33:00 AM »
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Quote from: anmolarora on December 11, 2012, 11:37:58 AM
Bahut khoob bahut khoob kya bat hai
thnx anmol jee
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Quote from: adil bechain on December 11, 2012, 12:02:17 PM

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause Applause


thank you so much adil jee
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on December 11, 2012, 02:38:00 PM
Waaaaah, behtareen, poori ghazal achhi lagi aur khaastaur pe matla aur 4th she'r.
thank you so much iftakhar jee
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Quote from: khwaish on December 11, 2012, 07:10:50 PM


Bahut Bahut Khooob Aqsh ji..

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thank you khwaish jee
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«Reply #29 on: December 12, 2012, 07:17:58 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob Aqsh ji...!!!
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