Kashti nahi Mili

by suman59 on October 22, 2012, 02:17:56 AM
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Kashti nahi mili, kabhi sagar nahi mila
Maine kabhi jo chaha vo aksar nahi mila

Jiski talash mein meri aankhein bichi rahi
Jiski thi aarzu, vohi manjar nahi mila

Mai dekhne chali mujhe raahein nahi mili
Mai doondne chali to mera ghar nahi mila

Ab sochna yahi hai ki ilzam kisko du
Apnon ke haath mein koyi patthar nahi mila

Sar ko jhukati mai jis jagah
Tumhare shehar mein vo dar nahi mila
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«Reply #1 on: October 22, 2012, 02:44:50 AM »
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Quote from: suman59 on October 22, 2012, 02:17:56 AM
Kashti nahi mili, kabhi sagar nahi mila
Maine kabhi jo chaha vo aksar nahi mila

very good
 
Jiski talash mein meri aankhein bichi rahi
Jiski thi aarzu, vohi manjar nahi mila
waah waah
Mai dekhne chali mujhe raahein nahi mili
Mai doondne chali to mera ghar nahi mila
wow, mind blowing, superB
Ab sochna yahi hai ki ilzam kisko du
Apnon ke haath mein koyi patthar nahi mila
waah kyaa baat hai
Sar ko jhukati mai jis jagah
Tumhare shehar mein vo dhar nahi mila

BAHUT SHAANDAAR GAZAL PARKE DIL BAAG BAAG HO GAYAA.
HAR SHER JABARDAST.
AUNYT JII ETNII ACHCHII GAZAL KE LIYE AAPKO BAHUT SAARII MUBARAKBAAD.
AUR AAPKI KHIDMAT ME EK CHOTAA SA rau
 
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«Reply #2 on: October 22, 2012, 02:51:33 AM »
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Suman ji bahut khoobsurati se dil ka dard byan kiya hai.....ye drd to mere drd se milta hai....
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«Reply #3 on: October 22, 2012, 02:55:14 AM »
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Mummy jee Aapne dhar likhaa hai. Shayad wahaaN par dar hona chahiye.
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«Reply #4 on: October 22, 2012, 03:18:42 AM »
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bahut hi khoob sumanji..
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«Reply #5 on: October 22, 2012, 04:32:38 AM »
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GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD
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«Reply #6 on: October 22, 2012, 04:35:27 AM »
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Nice One...
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«Reply #7 on: October 22, 2012, 05:42:56 AM »
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Bahot achhi ghazal kahi hai. Mubarakbaad. Lekin aakhri sher mein kuchh gadbad hai.
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«Reply #8 on: October 22, 2012, 06:18:00 AM »
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suman ji very good Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
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«Reply #9 on: October 22, 2012, 09:32:44 AM »
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bahut khoob
bahut accha likhti hai aap
badi sahajta se. Applause
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«Reply #10 on: October 22, 2012, 03:06:30 PM »
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Quote from: suman59 on October 22, 2012, 02:17:56 AM


Ab sochna yahi hai ki ilzam kisko du
Apnon ke haath mein koyi patthar nahi mila

Waah Bahut Khoob  Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: October 22, 2012, 05:47:16 PM »
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bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal Suman jee. Dheron daad aur mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #12 on: October 22, 2012, 05:58:03 PM »
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very nice.......  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: October 22, 2012, 06:42:14 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Suman ji....!!!
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«Reply #14 on: October 23, 2012, 01:46:45 PM »
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on October 22, 2012, 02:55:14 AM
Mummy jee Aapne dhar likhaa hai. Shayad wahaaN par dar hona chahiye.

beta jii thank you aapne mujhe DHAR ka galati dikhlaya. jaldi mein typing error hogaya hai. dar (दर) hi hai
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