"khaab masoom tasavvur mai"..................

by aaina on February 25, 2009, 01:31:07 PM
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khaab masoom tasavvur mai sajane lage
wo aah bharne lage muskurane lage

socha na tha tum you.n aao ge
kuch na bola gaya lab kapkapne lage

pehle bas chand mulaqatai.n huii.n
baat badne lage aane jaane lage

teri aankho ki maykash ada pe hum
jaam bharne lage, dagmagane lage

ik to waise hi unke sitma kam na the
roothne ki ada aur dikhane lage

khud nigaho.n se qatl kia, aur phir
hayratan daanto mai ungli dabane lage

ye ada bhi zalim rahi unki "aslam"
bas nigahai.n jhuki muskurane lage
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«Reply #1 on: February 25, 2009, 02:18:22 PM »
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Wah janab Aslam bade romantic modh pe ghazal khatam ki hain  DOH Just kidding bada dilkash kalam likha hain tumne Bohat khoob.  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: February 25, 2009, 04:19:02 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on February 25, 2009, 01:31:07 PM
khaab masoom tasavvur mai sajane lage
wo aah bharne lage mukurane lage

socha na tha tum you.n aao ge
kuch na bola gaya lab kapkapne lage

pehle bas chand mulaqatai.n huii.n
baat badne lage aane jaane lage

teri aankho ki maykash ada pe hum
jaam bharne lage, dagmagane lage

ik to waise hi unke sitma kam na the
roothne ki ada aur dikhane lage

khud nigaho.n se qatl kia, aur phir
hayratan daanto mai ungli dabane lage

ye ada bhi zalim rahi unki "aslam"
bas nigahai.n jhuki muskurane lage

Bahut Khoob Aslam Bhai..Bahut Hi Khoobsurti Se Aapne Yeh Ghazal Likhi.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: February 25, 2009, 10:07:01 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 25, 2009, 02:18:22 PM
Wah janab Aslam bade romantic modh pe ghazal khatam ki hain  DOH Just kidding bada dilkash kalam likha hain tumne Bohat khoob.  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

shukriya sajid sahab...................apko ghazal pasnd aayi
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«Reply #4 on: February 25, 2009, 10:18:40 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 25, 2009, 04:19:02 PM
Bahut Khoob Aslam Bhai..Bahut Hi Khoobsurti Se Aapne Yeh Ghazal Likhi.. Applause Applause Applause

thnx so much khwaish...........................
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«Reply #5 on: February 26, 2009, 01:57:28 AM »
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Bahut khoob Aslam ji...  Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: February 26, 2009, 01:59:26 AM »
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NICE LINES AAINA JEE...
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«Reply #7 on: February 26, 2009, 05:57:29 AM »
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wah wah wah wah...bahaut acha likha hai apne.... Applause Applause

padkar tujhe hume purane din yaad ane lage,
unn dino ki yaad main hum ansuon main doob jane lage,
kabhi roya karta tha Rahim uski mohobat bhari baatein sunke,
aaj toh uske diye dard pe hi muskurane lage...
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«Reply #8 on: February 27, 2009, 02:23:17 AM »
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Quote from: dead heart on February 26, 2009, 05:57:29 AM
wah wah wah wah...bahaut acha likha hai apne.... Applause Applause

padkar tujhe hume purane din yaad ane lage,
unn dino ki yaad main hum ansuon main doob jane lage,
kabhi roya karta tha Rahim uski mohobat bhari baatein sunke,
aaj toh uske diye dard pe hi muskurane lage...

Wah DH ji simply good  Applause
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«Reply #9 on: February 27, 2009, 04:48:31 AM »
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Shukriya Roja jee...
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«Reply #10 on: February 28, 2009, 04:28:21 PM »
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awwwww... Bahut hi umda..
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«Reply #11 on: February 28, 2009, 04:56:22 PM »
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Bahut khoob Aaina Ji
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«Reply #12 on: February 28, 2009, 04:57:10 PM »
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Quote from: dead heart on February 26, 2009, 05:57:29 AM
wah wah wah wah...bahaut acha likha hai apne.... Applause Applause

padkar tujhe hume purane din yaad ane lage,
unn dino ki yaad main hum ansuon main doob jane lage,
kabhi roya karta tha Rahim uski mohobat bhari baatein sunke,
aaj toh uske diye dard pe hi muskurane lage...
Nice response Rahim Ji
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«Reply #13 on: March 01, 2009, 11:26:49 AM »
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shukriya Rajesh jee
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Quote from: Roja on February 26, 2009, 01:57:28 AM
Bahut khoob Aslam ji...  Usual Smile

thnxxxxx roja...................
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