"khaab masoom tasavvur mai"..................

by aaina on February 25, 2009, 01:31:07 PM
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«Reply #15 on: March 20, 2009, 03:54:49 PM »
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Quote from: pandit on February 26, 2009, 01:59:26 AM
NICE LINES AAINA JEE...

shukriya pandi ji........................
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«Reply #16 on: March 20, 2009, 03:56:00 PM »
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Quote from: dead heart on February 26, 2009, 05:57:29 AM
wah wah wah wah...bahaut acha likha hai apne.... Applause Applause

padkar tujhe hume purane din yaad ane lage,
unn dino ki yaad main hum ansuon main doob jane lage,
kabhi roya karta tha Rahim uski mohobat bhari baatein sunke,
aaj toh uske diye dard pe hi muskurane lage...

thnxxxx so much heart....................apka bhi jawab nhi dear
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«Reply #17 on: March 20, 2009, 03:58:17 PM »
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Quote from: angel4u on February 28, 2009, 04:28:21 PM
awwwww... Bahut hi umda..


thnxxxxxxxx angel ji.................
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«Reply #18 on: March 20, 2009, 04:02:22 PM »
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kaise apne haalaat ki tarjumaani hogi
baat you.n hi khtm ho gayi to nadani hogi

chehra uska kuch kcuh kehta dikhta hai
dil mai uske bhi chupi koi kahani hogi

aise kaise tumne uska chehra pad liya
iske peechay koi to ru daad purani hogi

sucha ishq agr hai to ye bhi kyaal rakhna
ye khushboo hwaao.n se bachani hogi

khaabo mai mujhse milne aa to rhe ho
naino ne daikh liya to badi badnami hogi

"aslam" dil mai jo rakhoge to pachtao ge
ye baat ek din to duniya ko batalani hogi
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«Reply #19 on: March 20, 2009, 05:00:44 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on March 20, 2009, 04:02:22 PM
kaise apne haalaat ki tarjumaani hogi
baat you.n hi khtm ho gayi to nadani hogi

chehra uska kuch kcuh kehta dikhta hai
dil mai uske bhi chupi koi kahani hogi

aise kaise tumne uska chehra pad liya
iske peechay koi to ru daad purani hogi

sucha ishq agr hai to ye bhi kyaal rakhna
ye khushboo hwaao.n se bachani hogi

khaabo mai mujhse milne aa to rhe ho
naino ne daikh liya to badi badnami hogi

"aslam" dil mai jo rakhoge to pachtao ge
ye baat ek din to duniya ko batalani hogi


wah bahut khoob Aaina

jasbir singh
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Roja
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«Reply #20 on: March 21, 2009, 03:01:41 AM »
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Quote from: aaina on March 20, 2009, 04:02:22 PM
kaise apne haalaat ki tarjumaani hogi
baat you.n hi khtm ho gayi to nadani hogi

chehra uska kuch kcuh kehta dikhta hai
dil mai uske bhi chupi koi kahani hogi

aise kaise tumne uska chehra pad liya
iske peechay koi to ru daad purani hogi

sucha ishq agr hai to ye bhi kyaal rakhna
ye khushboo hwaao.n se bachani hogi

khaabo mai mujhse milne aa to rhe ho
naino ne daikh liya to badi badnami hogi

"aslam" dil mai jo rakhoge to pachtao ge
ye baat ek din to duniya ko batalani hogi


Wah dear Asalm... Bahut accha likha hai aapne. Esp 2nd and 3rd para..bahut achha likha hai. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #21 on: March 21, 2009, 07:48:33 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on March 20, 2009, 03:56:00 PM
thnxxxx so much heart....................apka bhi jawab nhi dear
ur welcome Alsam jee...
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«Reply #22 on: March 21, 2009, 07:52:29 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on March 20, 2009, 04:02:22 PM
kaise apne haalaat ki tarjumaani hogi
baat you.n hi khtm ho gayi to nadani hogi

chehra uska kuch kcuh kehta dikhta hai
dil mai uske bhi chupi koi kahani hogi

aise kaise tumne uska chehra pad liya
iske peechay koi to ru daad purani hogi

sucha ishq agr hai to ye bhi kyaal rakhna
ye khushboo hwaao.n se bachani hogi

khaabo mai mujhse milne aa to rhe ho
naino ne daikh liya to badi badnami hogi

"aslam" dil mai jo rakhoge to pachtao ge
ye baat ek din to duniya ko batalani hogi

Applause Applause bahaut acha likha hai apne Aslam jee...
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«Reply #23 on: March 21, 2009, 09:49:43 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on March 20, 2009, 04:02:22 PM
kaise apne haalaat ki tarjumaani hogi
baat you.n hi khtm ho gayi to nadani hogi

chehra uska kuch kcuh kehta dikhta hai
dil mai uske bhi chupi koi kahani hogi

aise kaise tumne uska chehra pad liya
iske peechay koi to ru daad purani hogi

sucha ishq agr hai to ye bhi kyaal rakhna
ye khushboo hwaao.n se bachani hogi

khaabo mai mujhse milne aa to rhe ho
naino ne daikh liya to badi badnami hogi

"aslam" dil mai jo rakhoge to pachtao ge
ye baat ek din to duniya ko batalani hogi

Wah! Bahut Khoob Aaina Ji
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«Reply #24 on: March 24, 2009, 10:14:35 AM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on March 20, 2009, 05:00:44 PM
wah bahut khoob Aaina

jasbir singh
bhut bhut shukriya jasbir sahab................
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«Reply #25 on: March 24, 2009, 10:17:05 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on March 21, 2009, 03:01:41 AM
Wah dear Asalm... Bahut accha likha hai aapne. Esp 2nd and 3rd para..bahut achha likha hai. Thumbs UP



thnxxxxxxx roja................thnx so much...
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«Reply #26 on: March 24, 2009, 10:18:16 AM »
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Quote from: dead heart on March 21, 2009, 07:52:29 PM
Applause Applause bahaut acha likha hai apne Aslam jee...
bhut bhut shukriya heart...........................
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«Reply #27 on: March 24, 2009, 10:19:34 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on March 21, 2009, 09:49:43 PM
Wah! Bahut Khoob Aaina Ji

shukriya harish ji is hosla afzaaii ka.................
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«Reply #28 on: March 24, 2009, 10:38:48 AM »
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Quote from: aaina on March 20, 2009, 04:02:22 PM
kaise apne haalaat ki tarjumaani hogi
baat you.n hi khtm ho gayi to nadani hogi

chehra uska kuch kcuh kehta dikhta hai
dil mai uske bhi chupi koi kahani hogi

aise kaise tumne uska chehra pad liya
iske peechay koi to ru daad purani hogi

sucha ishq agr hai to ye bhi kyaal rakhna
ye khushboo hwaao.n se bachani hogi

khaabo mai mujhse milne aa to rhe ho
naino ne daikh liya to badi badnami hogi

"aslam" dil mai jo rakhoge to pachtao ge
ye baat ek din to duniya ko batalani hogi


bhut hi khoob likha hai Aaina dear
too good!!! Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #29 on: March 24, 2009, 10:42:46 AM »
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Quote from: diya786 on March 24, 2009, 10:38:48 AM
bhut hi khoob likha hai Aaina dear
too good!!! Applause Applause Applause

thnxxx so much diya.............
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