Khaab-e-Zulekha (by vb)

by vb on November 07, 2013, 09:26:58 PM
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Us ki khata thi koi na mera qasoor tha
RaahoN men raahiyoN ne bicharna zaroor tha

Mujhko junoon-e-aashqi pay naaz tha buhat
Wo bhe tha husn-e-taam usay bhe gharoor tha

Shola nigaah, rukh pe dhuli chandni ka aks
Soorat say aaftaab, badan maah-noor thaa

HontoN ki silvatoN men muzmahil thay do-jahaaN
Lab haayay asl-e-khuld-o-badan misl-e-hoor tha

Aariz pay us k til, mataa-e-husn k liyay
Jaisay koi darbaan wahan maamoor tha

Meray lahoo main ghul sa gaya tha wo ake shakhs
Seenay main dharakta tha nigaahon say door tha

Moosa nahi tha main, na taab-e-deed pashemaN
Na wo Khuda tha, na ye jigar Koh-e-Toor tha

Dushvaar raah dekh k yaad aa gaya wo shakhs
Wo tha tu zindagi ka safar pur-saroor tha

Likhta tha meray haath say wo ake ake lafz
Meri sukhan-gari pay usi ko aboor tha

Kuch dushmanoN ki bhe tu nazar lag gai hameN
Kuch chaahnay walon k bhe dil men fatoor tha

Us ki bhe manziloN ka sahaara tha qaafila
Main bhe thaka huva tha badan choor choor tha

Kaisay bawaqt-e-hijr usay roktay ye lab
Us shakhs ka jo faisla tha, manzoor thaa

Kya aur kareN tum say zikr-e-khaab-e-Zulekha
Yusuf tha waqt ka wo shakhs, majboor tha


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«Reply #1 on: November 07, 2013, 09:31:36 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: November 07, 2013, 09:36:38 PM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah bahut hi khoob janaab, ye ash'aar bahut pasand aaye:

Us ki khata thi koi na mera qasoor tha
RaahoN men raahiyoN ne bicharna zaroor tha

Shola nigaah, rukh pe dhuli chandni ka aks
Soorat say aaftaab, badan maah-noor thaa

HontoN ki silvatoN men muzmahil thay do-jahaaN
Lab haayay asl-e-khuld-o-badan misl-e-hoor tha

Meray lahoo main ghul sa gaya tha wo ake shakhs
Seenay main dharakta tha nigaahon say door tha


Lekin baad meN behr toot gai.
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«Reply #3 on: November 07, 2013, 09:38:18 PM »
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Veryy niceee..
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«Reply #4 on: November 07, 2013, 09:41:19 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on November 07, 2013, 09:31:36 PM
waah waah bahut khoob

shukriya aap ka...
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«Reply #5 on: November 07, 2013, 09:45:15 PM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on November 07, 2013, 09:36:38 PM
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah bahut hi khoob janaab, ye ash'aar bahut pasand aaye:

Us ki khata thi koi na mera qasoor tha
RaahoN men raahiyoN ne bicharna zaroor tha

Shola nigaah, rukh pe dhuli chandni ka aks
Soorat say aaftaab, badan maah-noor thaa

HontoN ki silvatoN men muzmahil thay do-jahaaN
Lab haayay asl-e-khuld-o-badan misl-e-hoor tha

Meray lahoo main ghul sa gaya tha wo ake shakhs
Seenay main dharakta tha nigaahon say door tha


Lekin baad meN behr toot gai.

shukriya aap ka Iftakhar Ahmad sahab!

aap ne kaha k beher toot gai tu yaqeenan toot gai ho ge... hum waqe'atan ramooz haayay-sukhan-gari wa ilm-e-arooz say naa-balad hen.... aisay he agar hamaari tas'hee hoti rahi tu may be hum bhi kuchh behtar likh saken...
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«Reply #6 on: November 07, 2013, 09:53:01 PM »
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Quote from: Saman Firdaus on November 07, 2013, 09:38:18 PM
Veryy niceee..

thanx... :]
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«Reply #7 on: November 07, 2013, 10:06:54 PM »
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Us ki khata thi koi na mera qasoor tha
RaahoN men raahiyoN ne bicharna zaroor tha

Mujhko junoon-e-aashqi pay naaz tha buhat
Wo bhe tha husn-e-taam usay bhe gharoor tha

Shola nigaah, rukh pe dhuli chandni ka aks
Soorat say aaftaab, badan maah-noor thaa

HontoN ki silvatoN men muzmahil thay do-jahaaN
Lab haayay asl-e-khuld-o-badan misl-e-hoor tha

Aariz pay us k til, mataa-e-husn k liyay
Jaisay koi darbaan wahan maamoor tha

Meray lahoo main ghul sa gaya tha wo ake shakhs
Seenay main dharakta tha nigaahon say door tha

Moosa nahi tha main, na taab-e-deed pashemaN
Na wo Khuda tha, na ye jigar Koh-e-Toor tha

Dushvaar raah dekh k yaad aa gaya wo shakhs
Wo tha tu zindagi ka safar pur-saroor tha

Likhta tha meray haath say wo ake ake lafz
Meri sukhan-gari pay usi ko aboor tha

Kuch dushmanoN ki bhe tu nazar lag gai hameN
Kuch chaahnay walon k bhe dil men fatoor tha Applause Applause wah wah wah VB jee

Us ki bhe manziloN ka sahaara tha qaafila
Main bhe thaka huva tha badan choor choor tha

Bahut badhiya VB jee
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«Reply #8 on: November 07, 2013, 10:38:28 PM »
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Kya aur kareN tum say zikr-e-khaab-e-Zulekha
Yusuf tha waqt ka wo shakhs, majboor tha


bahot acchii peshkash hai.. waaahhhh


 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: November 07, 2013, 10:44:39 PM »
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bas alfaaz nahi tareef ke liye, bemisaal lagi hamen aapki peshkash...
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«Reply #10 on: November 07, 2013, 10:48:23 PM »
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Behad khubsurat ghazal hai . kya kya mazmoon nazm kar diye . waah waah . Qafiyon aur bahr mein chook ke bawujood yeh eik qabil e fakhr takhleeq hai . Yaqeenan ramooz ke dayere mein aa jaaye to eik shaahkaar hai ye ghazal .vb saheb aapko bahut mubarakbaad aur dheron daad.
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«Reply #11 on: November 08, 2013, 03:06:05 AM »
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Laajawaab !!!!!! Baakamaal!!!! Pur-fusoon!!!!

 Is beintehaayee khoobsurat ghazal par sad-hazaar-laakh daad aap ko VB ji ....behr ka zikr ho chuka hai jo ki ek waajib baat hai ... par in aashaar ka takhayyul aisa karishmaatee hai ki padhnewaalaa usmein kho sa jaata hai !

Ek baar phir aap ko dher saaree daad

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«Reply #12 on: November 08, 2013, 02:12:25 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on November 07, 2013, 10:06:54 PM
Us ki khata thi koi na mera qasoor tha
RaahoN men raahiyoN ne bicharna zaroor tha

Mujhko junoon-e-aashqi pay naaz tha buhat
Wo bhe tha husn-e-taam usay bhe gharoor tha

Shola nigaah, rukh pe dhuli chandni ka aks
Soorat say aaftaab, badan maah-noor thaa

HontoN ki silvatoN men muzmahil thay do-jahaaN
Lab haayay asl-e-khuld-o-badan misl-e-hoor tha

Aariz pay us k til, mataa-e-husn k liyay
Jaisay koi darbaan wahan maamoor tha

Meray lahoo main ghul sa gaya tha wo ake shakhs
Seenay main dharakta tha nigaahon say door tha

Moosa nahi tha main, na taab-e-deed pashemaN
Na wo Khuda tha, na ye jigar Koh-e-Toor tha

Dushvaar raah dekh k yaad aa gaya wo shakhs
Wo tha tu zindagi ka safar pur-saroor tha

Likhta tha meray haath say wo ake ake lafz
Meri sukhan-gari pay usi ko aboor tha

Kuch dushmanoN ki bhe tu nazar lag gai hameN
Kuch chaahnay walon k bhe dil men fatoor tha Applause Applause wah wah wah VB jee

Us ki bhe manziloN ka sahaara tha qaafila
Main bhe thaka huva tha badan choor choor tha

Bahut badhiya VB jee


mkv jee... buhat shukriya aap ka..
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«Reply #13 on: November 08, 2013, 02:14:16 PM »
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Quote from: sidra04 on November 07, 2013, 10:38:28 PM
Kya aur kareN tum say zikr-e-khaab-e-Zulekha
Yusuf tha waqt ka wo shakhs, majboor tha


bahot acchii peshkash hai.. waaahhhh


 Applause Applause Applause Applause

shukriya aap ka sidra04 jee! k is khasta haal beher k qaabil-e-aetraz sher ki bhe taareef farma gaeen aap...
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«Reply #14 on: November 08, 2013, 02:15:00 PM »
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Quote from: Iqtedar on November 07, 2013, 10:44:39 PM
bas alfaaz nahi tareef ke liye, bemisaal lagi hamen aapki peshkash...
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

shukriya Iqtedar jee aap ki hosla afzaai ka..
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