Khaab-e-Zulekha (by vb)

by vb on November 07, 2013, 09:26:58 PM

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Zaif

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«Reply #15 on: November 08, 2013, 02:18:35 PM »

Pur kashish, bemisaal, lajawab ghazal. Wah wah !! happy9


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Re: Khaab-e-Zulekha (by vb)

«Reply #16 on: November 08, 2013, 02:19:30 PM »

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on November 07, 2013, 10:48:23 PM

Behad khubsurat ghazal hai . kya kya mazmoon nazm kar diye . waah waah . Qafiyon aur bahr mein chook ke bawujood yeh eik qabil e fakhr takhleeq hai . Yaqeenan ramooz ke dayere mein aa jaaye to eik shaahkaar hai ye ghazal .vb saheb aapko bahut mubarakbaad aur dheron daad.

F.H.SIDDIQUI sahab! buhat shukriya aap ka... yakeenan agar ye beher or qafion k masla hal ho jayay tu ye ghazal qaabil-e-tehseen ho sakti ho ge...


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Re: Khaab-e-Zulekha (by vb)

«Reply #17 on: November 08, 2013, 02:21:45 PM »

Quote from: zarraa on November 08, 2013, 03:06:05 AM

Laajawaab !!!!!! Baakamaal!!!! Pur-fusoon!!!!

Is beintehaayee khoobsurat ghazal par sad-hazaar-laakh daad aap ko VB ji ....behr ka zikr ho chuka hai jo ki ek waajib baat hai ... par in aashaar ka takhayyul aisa karishmaatee hai ki padhnewaalaa usmein kho sa jaata hai !

Ek baar phir aap ko dher saaree daad

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zarraa jee! buhat shukriya aap ka... hamara tu ilm ye kehta hay k jo beher main nahi, wo shaairi nahi, usay nasar kehtay hen..


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Re: Khaab-e-Zulekha (by vb)

«Reply #18 on: November 08, 2013, 02:27:18 PM »

wo kya gaya, k bhool gaya behr-o-wazan tu
vb! suna tha tujh ko ghazal par aboor tha


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Re: Khaab-e-Zulekha (by vb)

«Reply #19 on: November 08, 2013, 03:47:09 PM »

Zaif jee! buhat shukriya aap ka...


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ParwaaZ

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«Reply #20 on: November 08, 2013, 09:25:31 PM »

VB Jee Aadaab....!

Wallaah Janab Mashaa Allaah kia kahne waah badi hi dilkash aur nafeez kalaam kahi hai janab... dilshaad ho gaya is khoobsurat kalaam se rubaru hokar...
Gazab ke ahsaas O khayaal gazab ki bayaani, bahut umdaa kalaam huyi hai janab... is khoobsurat aur laa jawaab kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... apne kalaamoN se bazm ko roshan karte rahiye.
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...


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«Reply #21 on: November 08, 2013, 09:28:59 PM »

ParwaaZ sahab! shukriya aap ka...

hum hayran hen k aap ne behr-o-qaafia par ungli nahi uthai...


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Saavan

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Re: Khaab-e-Zulekha (by vb)

«Reply #22 on: November 08, 2013, 09:56:31 PM »

Beautiful..
No words to explain dear..
Par ke milne ki khwaish si ho gayi apke us Shakhs se.


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«Reply #23 on: November 08, 2013, 10:04:59 PM »

Saavan sahab! shukriya aap ka...

is ghazal k ye do sher yehi bata rahay hen k us shakhs say hum khud kabhi nahi mil sakay...

Meray lahoo main ghul sa gaya tha wo ake shakhs
Seenay main dharakta tha nigaahon say door tha

Moosa nahi tha main, na taab-e-deed pashemaN
Na wo Khuda tha, na ye jigar Koh-e-Toor tha

may be aap mil saken...


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SURESH SANGWAN

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Re: Khaab-e-Zulekha (by vb)

«Reply #24 on: November 09, 2013, 12:07:02 AM »

bahut pasand aaya ye kalaam vb ji.


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«Reply #25 on: November 11, 2013, 02:03:45 PM »

SURESH SANGWAN jee! buhat shukriya aap ka..


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ParwaaZ

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Re: Khaab-e-Zulekha (by vb)

«Reply #26 on: November 11, 2013, 08:37:17 PM »

VB Jee Aadaab...!

VB jee! jab kalaam ke ahsaas O khayaal aur andaaz e bayaaN itna pyaara rahe ke qari bhi uske lutf meiN gum ho jaaye toH kia nuqs nikaale....
aur waise bhi Janab jab Ustad fankaar ne bher ke liye nishaan dehi kar dii toH humari kia majaal ke hum bher ka zikr bhi nikalte jab ke hum khud be behar likhne waale thahre...

Lekin sach kah rahe haiN, aapke is kalaam ki jitni bhi tareef kareNge kam lageNgi hume... behad umdaa khayaaloN ko sameta hai aapne...

Likhte rahiye... Bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...