Khaak Men Mil Gaye...Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb' / ख़ाक में मिल गए....सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

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ख़ाक में मिल गए हम अगर देखिए
होने पाए न उनको खबर देखिए
 
आप देते रहे हैं दुआएँ हमें
अब दुआओं का अपनी असर देखिए

रेगजारों में भी फूल खिल जाएँगे
मुस्कुराकर फक़त इक नज़र देखिए

अब लहू दिल में बाकी नहीं, जो बहे
खोलकर, मेरा ज़ख्मे-जिग़र देखिए
 
देखकर गाल पर तिल, तड़क ही गया
हुस्न का आइने पर असर देखिए

आग लग जाए न तन बदन में कहीं
छू न अधरों से जाएँ अधर देखिए

उसने हँसकर कहा, फिर मिलेंगे 'रक़ीब'
अब तो होने को आई सहर देखिए

          --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'  

khaak meN mil gaye hum agar dekhiye
hone paaye na unko khabar dekhiye

aap dete rahe haiN duaayeN hameN
ab duaaoN ka apni asar dekhiye

regjaaroN meN bhee phool khil jaayeNge
muskurakar faqat ik nazar dekhiye

ab lahoo dil meN baakee naheeN, jo bahe
kholkar, mera jakhme - jigar dekhiye

dekhkar gaal par til, tadak hee gaya
husn kaa, aaine par, asar dekhiye

aag lag jaaye na tan badan meN kaheeN
chhoo na adhroN se jaayeN adhar dekhiye

us ne haNskar kaha fir mileNge 'Raqeeb'
ab to hone ko aayee sahar dekhiye

             --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #1 on: October 18, 2011, 06:15:24 AM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on October 18, 2011, 06:11:13 AM


ख़ाक में मिल गए हम अगर देखिए
होने पाए न उनको खबर देखिए
 
आप देते रहे हैं दुआएँ हमें
अब दुआओं का अपनी असर देखिए

रेगजारों में भी फूल खिल जाएँगे
मुस्कुराकर फक़त इक नज़र देखिए

अब लहू दिल में बाकी नहीं, जो बहे
खोलकर, मेरा ज़ख्मे-जिग़र देखिए
 
देखकर गाल पर तिल, तड़क ही गया
हुस्न का आइने पर असर देखिए

आग लग जाए न तन बदन में कहीं
छू न अधरों से जाएँ अधर देखिए

उसने हँसकर कहा, फिर मिलेंगे 'रक़ीब'
अब तो होने को आई सहर देखिए

          --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब' 


Waaaaaah! Waaaaa......h! Raqeeb ji, Kya khoob kalaam kaha hai apne.Bhai Wah!

Dili daad kabul farmaiye.
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«Reply #2 on: October 18, 2011, 06:29:49 AM »
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priy satish ji  AApki gazlon ka badi bechaini se intzaar rahtaa hai.mauzoodaa gazal ek shaandaar gazal hai.Nihayat apnepan se kah rahaa hoon. aakhiri sher men sahr kafiyaa jiskaa wazn(s1 or 21 )hai. lakin baakee sab kafiye (1s or 12)wazn ke hain.is liye ye aapse shaayad chook hui hai. maine is liye aap se ye guzaarish ki hai ki ham to hindi waale hain. magar gazal kaa grammar jaanne waalon ko aur urdu waalon ko yeh baat khatakti hai. muaafi ke saath tumhaaraa bhai  Dr.Surendra Saini.
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«Reply #3 on: October 18, 2011, 07:09:12 AM »
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Satish ji
Bahut khoob kaha hai apne...
Maaf kijiyega...par jara ek baar vakyaati silsilo par gaur farmaiyega. Apne ap me vaise ye bahut sundar gajal hai.
daad kubool kare
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«Reply #4 on: October 18, 2011, 08:48:15 AM »
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Waah Satish ji,Kya khoobsurat ghazal inayat ki hai.....Uss sitamgar til ka jawaab nahiin.Aina to tootna hi thha.Tah e dil se daad haazir hai.HASAN
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«Reply #5 on: October 18, 2011, 09:42:47 AM »
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"रुख़ पे ठहरे न ,फिसल जाये नज़र|
 जो न  रुख़सार  के अटके तिल में || "

अच्छी ग़ज़ल के लिए इस शेर के साथ मेरी शुभकामनायें|
-अरुण मिश्र.
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«Reply #6 on: October 18, 2011, 10:08:05 AM »
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bahot ache janaab Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: October 18, 2011, 12:31:48 PM »
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usha rajesh ji,

hausala aafzai ke liye
bahut bahut shukriya.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #8 on: October 19, 2011, 05:19:15 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on October 18, 2011, 06:29:49 AM
priy satish ji  AApki gazlon ka badi bechaini se intzaar rahtaa hai.mauzoodaa gazal ek shaandaar gazal hai.Nihayat apnepan se kah rahaa hoon. aakhiri sher men sahr kafiyaa jiskaa wazn(s1 or 21 )hai. lakin baakee sab kafiye (1s or 12)wazn ke hain.is liye ye aapse shaayad chook hui hai. maine is liye aap se ye guzaarish ki hai ki ham to hindi waale hain. magar gazal kaa grammar jaanne waalon ko aur urdu waalon ko yeh baat khatakti hai. muaafi ke saath tumhaaraa bhai  Dr.Surendra Saini.

sksaini4 ji,

Respected Surendra Bhai,

Sab se pahle to ghazal padne aur jawab dene ka
shukriya aur is baat ke liye ki itne dhyaan se
padha, ek baar fir se shukriya.

Aapne is ghazal ke maqte par jo aitraaj kiya hai
woh mere hisab se galat hai, waise main koyee
"urdudaaN" to naheeN, aapki jaankaaree men koyee
ho to ek baar fir se masvira kar leejiyega.

Yahaan par sahar ka istemaal subh ke liye kiya gaya
hai na ki City yaa magic ke liye, fir us ka
prononciation aur spelling bhee different hai, Aap to
Doctor hain aur main Compounder bhee naheen.

Gustaakhee ke liye muaafee chaahoonga.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 
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«Reply #9 on: October 19, 2011, 05:56:32 AM »
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Bahut Aachi Gazal Hai Satish Ji

Bahut Bahut Mubarak Ho
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«Reply #10 on: October 19, 2011, 03:20:35 PM »
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gazal achi  hai  bahut mubarak ho
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«Reply #11 on: October 19, 2011, 05:17:36 PM »
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हिज्र  की  रात  काटने वाले

क्या करेगा अगर सहर न हुई
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«Reply #12 on: October 21, 2011, 04:44:29 AM »
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mkv ji,

Hausala aafzai ka bahut
bhaut shukriya.

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«Reply #13 on: October 21, 2011, 10:56:40 AM »
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Hasan Sahab,

Hausala aafzai ka tahe dil
se shukriya.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #14 on: October 21, 2011, 04:23:14 PM »
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Bahot khoob Shukla ji. Ek aur khubsurat ghazal aapne forum ko ataa farmaai. Daad pesh karta hun.

Riyaz Ashna
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