" KHAK HO GAYEY SITAREY " @ Advo.RavinderRavi'Sagar''

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Kali ghatao sy chand nikla,
                  Zulfo ko chehrey sy jo tumney hataaya //
Pather bhi aah-bhar rah gye,
                  Tabassum ko hamdam jo tumne banaya ”
Khaak ho gye falaq ke sitare,
                   Dil   mey   muze   jo  tum  ney   basaya  //
Khawab adhurey rahai gyey jahaan ke ,
                   Palak   par   muze   jo tum  ney   sajaya  //
Har tarf much gyi duwahi  tumarey naam ki ,
                    Hal-e-dil   sabko  jo  hum  ney sunaaya //
Payaar mey hai bhut dam sab khai uthey,
                    Nagma-e-wafa ” Ravi “jo tumney gayaa //
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«Reply #1 on: March 11, 2013, 12:01:10 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: March 11, 2013, 06:26:01 PM »
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Quote from: anmolarora on March 11, 2013, 06:26:01 PM
very nice
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«Reply #4 on: March 12, 2013, 01:32:08 AM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on March 10, 2013, 09:58:11 PM
love9 love9
Kali ghatao sy chand nikla,
                  Zulfo ko chehrey sy jo tumney hataaya //
Pather bhi aah-bhar rah gye,
                  Tabassum ko hamdam jo tumne banaya ”
Khaak ho gye falaq ke sitare,
                   Dil   mey   muze   jo  tum  ney   basaya  //
Khawab adhurey rahai gyey jahaan ke ,
                   Palak   par   muze   jo tum  ney   sajaya  //
Har tarf much gyi duwahi  tumarey naam ki ,
                    Hal-e-dil   sabko  jo  hum  ney sunaaya //
Payaar mey hai bhut dam sab khai uthey,
                    Nagma-e-wafa ” Ravi “jo tumney gayaa //




khoob Applause Applause Applause
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thanks,,,,,,,,,
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaah WAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah buht khoob kya kehnay
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Shuqriya.



Waaaaaaaaaaaaah WAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah buht khoob kya kehnay
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