Khali hathon mein kismet ki, rekhayen bhar doge kya

by livingbytheday on June 29, 2012, 04:21:53 PM
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Khali hathon mein kismet ki, rekhayen bhar doge kya
aaj main kuch mangna chahu, apna mujhko kar doge kya

in raton ki tanhayee ko, tanha hi rehne do beshaq
lekin jisme tum ho aisi, subah nazar kar doge kya

bus ik kachee yaad mein simtey, adhe adhure jeete hain
tum ek puree yaad ko mere, lamho mein bhar doge kya

phool bhi teri judayee mein, kaaton ke jaise chubtey hain
badle mein katon ke apna, makhmal ka bistar doge kya

lout raha hain bechara dil, tooti kashti mein houshla harey
rok ke awara lehron ko,  shant samandar doge kya

iss dubtey suraj mein saari, umeed wafa ki duub gayi
ub koi chaah nahi subah ki,, usko khabar kar doge kya

Tum se suru sab baatein huee, tumhi khatam kar do inko
Seesha –e-dil hum todtey hain, hathon mein pathar doge kya

Jaatee saansein ruk ruk kar, kehti jaati hain “Deepak”
dubtey palko ko akhiri ek , mulaqat ka manzar doge kya
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«Reply #1 on: June 30, 2012, 12:47:19 AM »
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bahut  badhiya deepak ji bahut hi umda likha hai. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: June 30, 2012, 01:23:23 AM »
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waah waah depak ji bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: June 30, 2012, 02:24:00 AM »
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wonderful  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: June 30, 2012, 04:10:37 AM »
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Quote from: soudagar on June 30, 2012, 12:47:19 AM
bahut  badhiya deepak ji bahut hi umda likha hai. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

thank you sir for kind words
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«Reply #5 on: June 30, 2012, 04:11:08 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on June 30, 2012, 01:23:23 AM
waah waah depak ji bahut khoob

thank you saini sir
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«Reply #6 on: June 30, 2012, 11:19:26 AM »
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waah...waah...bahut khoob Deepak Ji, bahut hi umda khyaal hai, dheron daad
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«Reply #7 on: June 30, 2012, 12:13:54 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooob Deepak ji..

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Quote from: suman59 on June 30, 2012, 02:24:00 AM
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thank you suman ji
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«Reply #9 on: June 30, 2012, 05:24:46 PM »
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Bahut khoob Deepak jee
Behatreen peshkash.. laajavaab ghajal.
likhte rahiye..
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«Reply #10 on: June 30, 2012, 07:16:44 PM »
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Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on June 30, 2012, 11:19:26 AM
waah...waah...bahut khoob Deepak Ji, bahut hi umda khyaal hai, dheron daad
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thank you amitji
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Quote from: khwaish on June 30, 2012, 12:13:54 PM
Bahut Bahut Khooob Deepak ji..

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thank you
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«Reply #12 on: July 01, 2012, 04:23:25 AM »
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very good keep it up    Applause    Applause    Applause   Applause
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«Reply #13 on: July 01, 2012, 04:34:48 AM »
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Nice , Deepak ji . Going  Great .
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«Reply #14 on: July 01, 2012, 05:18:40 AM »
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bahut hi badiya likha hai deepak ji badhai
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