khawaab.sheba

by Sheba on May 21, 2010, 06:49:45 PM
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                           hai koi jo meri mohabbat ka sila de,
                           khoye huey ishq se mujhey mila de,

                           aagosh mein kal tak thee khushian bahut,
                           aashiyane ko phir koi roshni dila de,

                           arzoo kal tak kartey rahey parwaaz merey,
                           gulshan ko phir koi merey khila de,

                           shahar mein zinda nahin koi jo meri suney,
                           insaniyat ko inki phir koi jila de,

                           mar kar bhi ho jaaon gi zinda  sheba,
                           gar fiza mein koi mohabbat mila de.............!!
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«Reply #1 on: May 21, 2010, 07:30:34 PM »
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aankho mai na janey kyu dhudhlahat chaayi...
meri bhi ahmiyat hai,koi kano mai hi sahi,yeh ittila de......
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«Reply #2 on: May 21, 2010, 10:58:24 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob Sheba ji... bahut sundar likha hai aapne...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 22, 2010, 01:24:22 AM »
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BUJHATE CHIRAGON KI KOI LOU KO BARHA DE
KARTI HOON DUA RAB SE TERA YAAR MILA DE


WAAAH !BAHUT KHOOB SHEBA JI!
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«Reply #4 on: May 22, 2010, 05:39:05 AM »
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Indeed a beutiful creation Sheba Jee........and a very beautiful addition by Mamta Jee, aap shayrao ne kya mehfil jamaiee hai Masha_allah.
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«Reply #5 on: May 24, 2010, 01:10:52 PM »
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Quote from: adnan_adnan on May 21, 2010, 07:30:34 PM
aankho mai na janey kyu dhudhlahat chaayi...
meri bhi ahmiyat hai,koi kano mai hi sahi,yeh ittila de......

nice adnan ji
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«Reply #6 on: May 24, 2010, 01:11:37 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on May 21, 2010, 10:58:24 PM
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bahut bahut khoob Sheba ji... bahut sundar likha hai aapne...!!!

thanx klaskar ji
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«Reply #7 on: May 24, 2010, 01:12:15 PM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on May 22, 2010, 01:24:22 AM
BUJHATE CHIRAGON KI KOI LOU KO BARHA DE
KARTI HOON DUA RAB SE TERA YAAR MILA DE


WAAAH !BAHUT KHOOB SHEBA JI!

thanx mamta ji
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«Reply #8 on: May 24, 2010, 04:48:34 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on May 21, 2010, 06:49:45 PM



                           hai koi jo meri mohabbat ka sila de,
                           khoye huey ishq se mujhey mila de,

                           aagosh mein kal tak thee khushian bahut,
                           aashiyane ko phir koi roshni dila de,

                           arzoo kal tak kartey rahey parwaaz merey,
                           gulshan ko phir koi merey khila de,

                           shahar mein zinda nahin koi jo meri suney,
                           insaniyat ko inki phir koi jila de,

                           mar kar bhi ho jaaon gi zinda  sheba,
                           gar fiza mein koi mohabbat mila de.............!!

bahut khoob ghazal likhhi hai sheba ji aur sabne bhi bahut acha sath diya hai sheba ji kaa...
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«Reply #9 on: May 27, 2010, 05:24:42 PM »
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Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on May 22, 2010, 05:39:05 AM
Indeed a beutiful creation Sheba Jee........and a very beautiful addition by Mamta Jee, aap shayrao ne kya mehfil jamaiee hai Masha_allah.

THANK YOU GHAYEL JI
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«Reply #10 on: May 27, 2010, 08:45:08 PM »
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Wah Sheba ji ,very touching gazal.lovely creation.excellent ,beautiful lines by Mamta ji and Adnan ji:hatsoff: icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: May 28, 2010, 07:10:05 PM »
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sheba ji,
Very nicely written !!!
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«Reply #12 on: May 28, 2010, 07:33:19 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on May 24, 2010, 04:48:34 PM
bahut khoob ghazal likhhi hai sheba ji aur sabne bhi bahut acha sath diya hai sheba ji kaa...

thanx broken ji
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«Reply #13 on: May 28, 2010, 09:17:30 PM »
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bhut khoob........


aslam
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«Reply #14 on: June 02, 2010, 01:00:49 PM »
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Quote from: Bharat on May 28, 2010, 07:10:05 PM
sheba ji,
Very nicely written !!!

thank you bharat  ji
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