khawaab.sheba

by Sheba on May 21, 2010, 06:49:45 PM
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«Reply #15 on: June 02, 2010, 01:01:43 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on May 28, 2010, 09:17:30 PM
bhut khoob........


aslam

thank you aslam ji
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«Reply #16 on: June 08, 2010, 12:39:35 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on May 27, 2010, 08:45:08 PM
Wah Sheba ji ,very touching gazal.lovely creation.excellent ,beautiful lines by Mamta ji and Adnan ji:hatsoff: icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

thank you madhuwesh ji
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«Reply #17 on: June 10, 2010, 10:21:47 AM »
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Wah Sheba Ji! Bahut achchhi tahreer hai. Daad hazir hai, qubul kijiye.

Quote from: Sheba on May 21, 2010, 06:49:45 PM



                           hai koi jo meri mohabbat ka sila de,
                           khoye huey ishq se mujhey mila de,

                           aagosh mein kal tak thee khushian bahut,
                           aashiyane ko phir koi roshni dila de,

                           arzoo kal tak kartey rahey parwaaz merey,
                           gulshan ko phir koi merey khila de,

                           shahar mein zinda nahin koi jo meri suney,
                           insaniyat ko inki phir koi jila de,

                           mar kar bhi ho jaaon gi zinda  sheba,
                           gar fiza mein koi mohabbat mila de.............!!
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«Reply #18 on: June 28, 2010, 06:46:18 PM »
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Quote from: waquif ansari on June 10, 2010, 10:21:47 AM
Wah Sheba Ji! Bahut achchhi tahreer hai. Daad hazir hai, qubul kijiye.


shukria waquif ji
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«Reply #19 on: August 16, 2011, 07:27:31 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on May 21, 2010, 06:49:45 PM



                           hai koi jo meri mohabbat ka sila de,
                           khoye huey ishq se mujhey mila de,

                           aagosh mein kal tak thee khushian bahut,
                           aashiyane ko phir koi roshni dila de,

                           arzoo kal tak kartey rahey parwaaz merey,
                           gulshan ko phir koi merey khila de,

                           shahar mein zinda nahin koi jo meri suney,
                           insaniyat ko inki phir koi jila de,

                           mar kar bhi ho jaaon gi zinda  sheba,
                           gar fiza mein koi mohabbat mila de.............!!


Bahut bahut Khoooooob Shebaji..Lajawaab!!!

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«Reply #20 on: August 16, 2011, 07:53:08 PM »
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Shebaa Saahibaa Aadaab!


Khub kalaam kahi hai aapne... Ahsaas o khayaal
kafi gehre hai daad Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar khub rahe... Usual Smile           


Quote from: Sheba on May 21, 2010, 06:49:45 PM



                           hai koi jo meri mohabbat ka sila de,
                           khoye huey ishq se mujhey mila de,

Kia baat hai janab bahut khoob Usual Smile

Kar tuu duaa woH ajar e silaa dega
Tujko teri mohobbat se milaa dega ... Usual Smile         

                           aagosh mein kal tak thee khushian bahut,
                           aashiyane ko phir koi roshni dila de,

Achcha hai daad Usual Smile         

                           arzoo kal tak kartey rahey parwaaz merey,
                           gulshan ko phir koi merey khila de,

Kia kahne daad.. par aarzu aur ummid kabhi khatam nahi hoti janab Usual Smile         

                           shahar mein zinda nahin koi jo meri suney,
                           insaniyat ko inki phir koi jila de,

Achcha khayaal hai daad.. Par Jilaa ke kia mayne hote hai?Huh? hume nahi pata ?         

                           mar kar bhi ho jaaon gi zinda  sheba,
                           gar fiza mein koi mohabbat mila de.............!!

Waah waah waah kia khub sher kaha hai Shebaa Sahibaa ... Badi khub shayari ki hai aapne daad Usual Smile         


Is khubsurat kalaam par phir se daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.. Khush O aabad rahiye.. Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         
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«Reply #21 on: August 16, 2011, 10:05:46 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on May 21, 2010, 06:49:45 PM



                           hai koi jo meri mohabbat ka sila de,
                           khoye huey ishq se mujhey mila de,

                           aagosh mein kal tak thee khushian bahut,
                           aashiyane ko phir koi roshni dila de,

                           arzoo kal tak kartey rahey parwaaz merey,
                           gulshan ko phir koi merey khila de,

                           shahar mein zinda nahin koi jo meri suney,
                           insaniyat ko inki phir koi jila de,

                           mar kar bhi ho jaaon gi zinda  sheba,
                           gar fiza mein koi mohabbat mila de.............!!


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aap ki ghazal pe nigaah partey hi chasonk gayaa kiun ki aap me jadeed labo lehjaa paayaa jataa hai main is ki bahr w aozaan se qate nazar jab is ki fikree gahraayi ko chashm e nam se dekhtaa hun to roshnee ka eyk daayerah nazar aata hai jis pe aap ko daad detaa hun
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«Reply #22 on: August 16, 2011, 10:29:47 PM »
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Wah bahut gaherai hai aapke ghazal mein Sheba ji,bahut khoob.excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #23 on: September 17, 2011, 11:31:11 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on August 16, 2011, 10:29:47 PM
Wah bahut gaherai hai aapke ghazal mein Sheba ji,bahut khoob.excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause

shukria
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«Reply #24 on: September 17, 2011, 12:17:12 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Bahut Hi Khoob surat Sheba Ji

Dil Se Daad Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #25 on: September 17, 2011, 12:31:20 PM »
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Samajh nahi aata is ghazal ko humne miss kaise kiya tha...

Bahut khubsoorat likha hai Sheba Ji....Daad..!!
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«Reply #26 on: September 29, 2011, 08:05:09 AM »
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Quote from: masoodhassaas on August 16, 2011, 10:05:46 PM

aadaab
aap ki ghazal pe nigaah partey hi chasonk gayaa kiun ki aap me jadeed labo lehjaa paayaa jataa hai main is ki bahr w aozaan se qate nazar jab is ki fikree gahraayi ko chashm e nam se dekhtaa hun to roshnee ka eyk daayerah nazar aata hai jis pe aap ko daad detaa hun


shukriya. bahr ki tangi hai. maloom hi nahin kaise compose karein
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«Reply #27 on: December 22, 2011, 05:02:15 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai Sheba ji apne
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