KHOOBSURAT HAI , KHOOB SEERAT HAI .................HASAN -Panna 3:Ghazals

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«Reply #30 on: November 28, 2012, 10:35:50 AM »

Qais saheb , bahut shukriya .


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Re: KHOOBSURAT HAI , KHOOB SEERAT HAI .................HASAN

«Reply #31 on: November 30, 2012, 09:40:16 AM »

Mahutram FH Siddiuee Saheb ....Aadab

Apki ghazal ne dil loot liya ...har sher me juda mazmoon hai juda qasidarkari ek ek sher makhtaba-e-fikr ki hasiyat rakhta hai ....kissi ik sher intekhaab karna mushkil ho chala hai ghazal sar sa pa aapni misaal aap hai ghazal me duniya jahan ke mauzu ko ek jaa kiya giya hai is lihaz se apki ye ghazal dad o taheen ki mahutaj nahi balke salame aqeedat ki mustaheq hai ....Ghazal hai ke ankhon ke raaste dil ki zameen per apne wajood tukhm rezi kar rahi hai .....Salam apki karigari ko ...Wah Wah........Matle ke mutaliq bus itna arz karna hai ke lafz wahm ghalat jaga pe baith giya hai usko aap lafz hai se pahele bitha den uski sahi jagah wahi hai ....agar aap ko maujoda suraat me koi ayeb nazar nahi aata to meri rahenumai farmaye'n aur mazeed sikhne ka mauqa inayat farmaye'n ....Ek baar phir is pur maghaz ghazal pe beshumaar dad o mubarakbaad qubool kare'n ...Allah apko duniya jahan ki barkaton se malamal kare...

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«Reply #32 on: November 30, 2012, 02:30:59 PM »

Quote from: qadeer_junaid on November 30, 2012, 09:40:16 AM

Qadeersaheb,AOA.Bahut achha laga arse baad aapko Yoindia Shayariadab per dekh kar .Aapne ghazal pe waqt diya iske liye shukriya.Aapka aitraz aur salaah bilkul durust hai aur main bakhushi matle ko tabdeel kar ke 'Wahm hai ya koi haqeeqat hai '..kar raha hoon.Main Urdu ke aksar alfaaz ke talaffuz aur istemaal se waqif hoon .Lekin main ,shayed apni kam ilmi hi ki wajah se,is baat se convince nahi ho paata ki kuchh deegar alfaaz ki tarah jin mein chhoti / badi awaazon ki bahr ki munasibat se tabdili jaiz hai wahm , shahr , zahr etc. ko zaroorat ke mutabiq biltarteeb waham , zahar , shaher ki tarah kyun nahi istemaal kiya ja sakta hai jub ki aksar urdudaan hazraat bhi in alfaz ko aise hi bolte hain.Aapka sahi mashwire aur hausla afzai ke liye shukriya.


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«Reply #33 on: December 01, 2012, 02:41:54 AM »

waah bahut khoobsurat. Applause


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«Reply #34 on: December 01, 2012, 04:08:14 PM »

Quote from: livingbytheday on December 01, 2012, 02:41:54 AM

waah bahut khoobsurat. Applause

Deepakji , Bahut shukriya . kahaan rahe itne dinon ? dua karta hoon aap khairyat se hon.


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«Reply #35 on: December 13, 2012, 07:37:20 AM »

Ye qattaie waham nahi, haqeeqat hai
har kisi ko aap hee se muhabbat hai
iss mahfil ki shaan-o-izzat haiN aap
baakhuda, mere qaul me sadaaqat hai!!

sar-e-tasleem-e-kham janab Hasan sb, wallah..kya Khoob lubhawni ghazal hai..dheroN dher daad-o-mubaarakbaad!


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«Reply #36 on: December 13, 2012, 10:00:02 AM »

Quote from: shara63 on December 13, 2012, 07:37:20 AM

sar e tasleem ( ghalti se ) okhli mein de chuka hoon .
Ab jo bhi mizaaj e yaar mein aaye ....

'Tanz ke teer bhi gawaara hain ,
Haasil e Zakhm gar shahadat hai'

Ghazal padhne ke liye bahut shukriya.


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«Reply #38 on: February 06, 2014, 03:58:47 PM »

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