khud banke masoom,,,,ghazal,,,,jeet jainam saini

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mohhobat kee kimat  usne kiya khub lagaai hai,
khud banke masoom hamari nazarain jhukaai hai,

karke zaleel zamaane main woh  toh chala gaya,
sharmsaar mahfil main aankhe nam hoti aai hai,

yuh girft main hote gaye gamo,n ke din ba din,
sabaa louti par khushiya kahi,n chore aai hai,

din ka pahar zanji raat dhundli see hoti gayi,
zarar khaai hasti dheere dheere mitti aai hai,

zeerak e zeeq woh  zaleem  bohat khush lagee,
ghutan eysi ki zahn main saanse rukti aai hai,

uske zabah ki kiya azaab deta sochta raha jeet,
bas uskee khushi kee aksr dil sey duaa aai hai,



zeerak ---Knowing
zanji---- Negro
zarar----- Hurt, Injury
zeeq-----Anguish
zabah----Crime
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«Reply #1 on: August 08, 2015, 02:07:11 PM »
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din ke pahar zanji raat dhundli hone see lagi,
zarar khaai hasti dheere dheere mitti aai hai,
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«Reply #2 on: August 08, 2015, 03:39:49 PM »
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Quote from: jeet jainam on August 08, 2015, 01:49:55 PM



mohhobat kee kimat  usne kiya khub lagaai hai,
khud banke masoom hamari nazarain jhukaai hai,

karke zaleel zamaane main woh  toh chala gaya,
sharmsaar mahfil main aankhe nam hoti aai hai,

yuh girft main hote gaye gamo,n ke din ba din,
sabaa louti par khushiya kahi,n chore aai hai,

din ka pahar zanji raat dhundli see hoti gayi,
zarar khaai hasti dheere dheere mitti aai hai, sir i could not understand this lines

zeerak e zeek woh dekar bhee bohat khush lagi,
ghutan eysi ki zahn main saanse rukti aai hai,Huh??

uske zabah ki kiya azaab deta sochta raha jeet,
bas uskee khushi kee aksr dil sey duaa aai hai,






zeerak e zeek----meaning
zanji---- meaning
zarar-----brave


sir , my urdu is very very poor could you please clarify the meaning and the highlighted shers. thank you
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«Reply #3 on: August 08, 2015, 05:16:54 PM »
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 Applause Applause :clap:Awesome!
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«Reply #4 on: August 08, 2015, 05:29:48 PM »
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बहुत ही खूब
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«Reply #5 on: August 08, 2015, 10:42:29 PM »
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kyaa baat hai waah.
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«Reply #6 on: August 09, 2015, 06:40:46 AM »
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अति सुंदर  Applause Applause Applause icon_flower icon_flower
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beautiful creation.....but same question who mb asked ?
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhbahut khubsurat
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bohat shukriya suresh ji
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shukriya marhoom ji ap mazaak acha karte hai,n apko urdu nahi aati main nahi manta balki hame nahi aati kuch muslim dost hai qareebi unsr sikh raha hoo,n,,
apka jawaab niche likh diya,,
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