Khud ko bhi azmaya karo:Ghazals

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Khud ko bhi aazmaya karo !!
Ruq-a-aaina ho jaya karo !!

Hamare piche hi kaho ge fasane hamare !!
Kabhi aamne samne bhi aya karo !!

Badal do ye riwayaten apni !!
Hamare zabt ko na aazmaya karo !!

Maana ke tum hi munsif ho magar !!
Saza ka maqsad bhi samjhaya karo !!

Mai aunga to sub baha le jaunga !!
Samandar ko yun na bulaya karo !!

Bhed sare khul jayenge raushni ke !!
Kissi ke rah me charag to jalaya karo !!

Zindagi ka matlab bus itna raha !!
Hasso aur sub ko hasaya karo !!

Ye mooti hain pakiza sadaf ke qadeer !!
Bewajha na khud ko rulaya karo !!

________ Qadeertoopchi


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Re: Khud ko bhi azmaya karo

«Reply #1 on: April 13, 2010, 06:31:12 PM »

Qadeertoopchi ji, bahut achha likhte ho lekin rawangi ya flow mein kami hai. Meter mein bhi nahi likha hai. Albatta ashaar ke misron mein rabt achha hai.


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Re: Khud ko bhi azmaya karo

«Reply #2 on: April 13, 2010, 06:53:44 PM »

Bahut khoob Qadeertoopchi ji, kaash behar per gaur kar dete to maza aa jata..khayal bahut umda hai, zameen bhi achhi hai...


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Re: Khud ko bhi azmaya karo

«Reply #3 on: April 13, 2010, 06:55:57 PM »

Quote from: Guard on April 13, 2010, 06:31:12 PM

Qadeertoopchi ji, bahut achha likhte ho lekin rawangi ya flow mein kami hai. Meter mein bhi nahi likha hai. Albatta ashaar ke misron mein rabt achha hai.

janab a mann gaurd sahab , bilkul sahi farmaya apne .. mai bahr me nahi kaheta hon ,, apki baath se itefaq is liya bhi dikha raha hon ke shayari me maslihat nahi chalti .. jo jis tarha se sunchta hai ussi tarha kahe leta hai mere mamula bhi khuch aise hi hai .. ap isko mahefil ki nazaqath kahiye ya meri majboori baath juda nahi ,, zara taqti kariye , ye fir kissi zameen pe laiye .. to baath aage bade .. bade din howe islaah liye howe .. eak baath yaadh aayi jis jage jao wahin ke pairahan me jao .. ye fir usse haqeeq , umid hai wahin se pakdenge jahan se kahene ki koshish ki gayi hai ..

talib a ilm o qair andesh ..

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Re: Khud ko bhi azmaya karo

«Reply #4 on: April 13, 2010, 07:18:43 PM »

Quote from: drpandey on April 13, 2010, 06:53:44 PM

Bahut khoob Qadeertoopchi ji, kaash behar per gaur kar dete to maza aa jata..khayal bahut umda hai, zameen bhi achhi hai...

sahi farmaya janab ne ,, ap hi sikha den bahr kiss chidiya ka naam hai .. waise huzoor a wala mai ne aaj tak taqti nahi ki , kyun ke shayari bada hi pakiza aur khubsurath jazba hai , jis simt me baheta ho jaata wahin hai jahan jaana hota hai .. ap samjh gaye honge .. qair me bahr me kamm hi likh pata hon .. wo kissi ne qoob kaha hai ..

humne laho thos diya ghazal kahene me ........

allah subko khush rakhe ..

qair andesh o duwa go ..

qadeertoopchi


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Re: Khud ko bhi azmaya karo

«Reply #5 on: April 13, 2010, 07:21:05 PM »

Quote from: Shihab on April 13, 2010, 06:58:32 PM

Aafreen Aafreen
Har Baar Ki Tarah Ek Behtareen Peshkash Qadeer Ji
Bahut Hi Umda....Mubaarq Ho...

Aapko Phir Se Yo Par Dekh Kar Khushi Hui...
Yun Hi Mehfil Ki Raunaq Afzaai Karte Rahiye...

Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~

bahi tanhiyun se bazid ho gaye the .. ab dayar a gair me yahi to kaam hain ,, qair meri maujodgi se kissi ko khushi ho ..ye meri bhi to khushnasibi hai .. allah apko khush rakhe .. dad ke liye shukriya..

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Re: Khud ko bhi azmaya karo

«Reply #6 on: April 14, 2010, 06:29:24 AM »

Bahut Bahut Khoob Qadeer Bhai..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Aur Dil Ko Chuu Jane Wali Ghazal Pesh Ki hai Aapne..Bahut Ache..


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Re: Khud ko bhi azmaya karo

«Reply #7 on: April 14, 2010, 07:05:15 AM »

Wah wash Qadeer Sb. bahot khubsurat likha hai. Bade khoobsurat andaaz mein aapne apna kalaam pesh kiya hai. Daad qubool farmayen.


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Re: Khud ko bhi azmaya karo

«Reply #8 on: April 14, 2010, 08:14:02 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on April 14, 2010, 06:29:24 AM

Bahut Bahut Khoob Qadeer Bhai..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Aur Dil Ko Chuu Jane Wali Ghazal Pesh Ki hai Aapne..Bahut Ache..

apki pakiza nazron ka kamal hai khawish sahab ,, baaqi to bisath hi kya hai hamari .. Karam nawazi ke liye mumno hon .. issi tarha hausla dete rahiyega .. Allah apko khush rakhe ..

Khadim ..

Qadeertoopchi


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Re: Khud ko bhi azmaya karo

«Reply #9 on: April 14, 2010, 08:23:41 AM »

Wah wah Qadeer ji dil ko chu gayi aapke gazal.lajawab gazal pesh kiya aapne.bahut pasand aayi specially 2nd line,hamare piche hi kahoge fasane hamare
kabhi aamne saamne bhi aayaa karo.lovely creation.keep it up. Hats off to you!


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SURESH SANGWAN

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Re: Khud ko bhi azmaya karo

«Reply #10 on: April 14, 2010, 09:32:52 AM »

bahut khoob qadir junaid ji.

aao chalo khul ke hanse.
dheere se na muskuraaya karo.
hum rehte hain tumse milne ko bechain.
kabhi humaari gali bhi aaya karo.

Quote from: qadeer_junaid on April 13, 2010, 06:25:20 PM


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Re: Khud ko bhi azmaya karo

«Reply #11 on: April 14, 2010, 10:58:24 AM »

Abdul Qadeer saheb masha_allah kya kahe aapko har sher zindagi ka ek naya pehlu bayaan karta hai aur aapka tanz to bas subhan-allah, kash aisi khoobi mujhme bhi ho sakti.

Aur jaha tak ghazal bahr me hone ki baat hai to ghazal me sirf bahr nahi shero me wazan hona bhi bohat zaruri hota hai. Kaiee aise kalam jo bahr ke meyaar me poore utarte hai par un shero me wazan nahi hota. Aap jaisa likhte hai Qadeer saheb hamesha waisa hi likhe........aur dosto ki ray par bhi gaur karte rahe.

Apni baat ko thoda aur samjhane ke liye chend mash_hoor shayro ki ghazlein pesh_e_khidmat hai kya koi batayega yeh kis bahr me kahi gayee hai...

Kabhi Fursath me milke Jhanjod dooga usse
Jahan jahan se wo toota hai jood dooga usse

Pasine bat_ta firta hai suraj zamane ko
Kabhi haath jo lag jaye to nichod dooga usse

Wo mujhe chod gaya ye kamal hai uska
Zidd meri thi ke mai chod dooga usse

-Rahat Indori-

Apne haton ko wo fatwar bhi kar sakta hai !!
Hausla hai agar to nadi paar bhi kar sakta hai !!

Eak umr guzari jise dhoondne me
Moondh le aankh to didaar bhi kar sakta hai

Jaagte rahiye ke awaz lagane wala
lootne walon ko hoshiyar bhi kar sakta hai

Eak hukumat hai jo inaam bhi de sakti hai
Eak qalandar hai jo inkar bhi kar sakta hai

-Rahat Indori-

Bimar ko marz ki dawa deni chahiye
Mai pina chahata hon pila deni chahiye

Ye dil kissi faqir ke hujre se kamm nahi
duniya ko yahin laake chupa deni chahiye

mai phool hon to phool ko guldan ho naseeb
mai aag hon to aag bhuja deni chahiye

mai khwab hon to khwab ko tabeer ho naseeb
mai neend hon to neend bhaga deni chahiye

mai taj hon to taaj ko sar pe sajayen log
mai dhool hon to dhool uda deni chahiye

-Rahat Indori-

Aur to aur bahr ko tod ke bhi bahr me kaha jata hai .. yeh rahi misaal..

Dile Nadaa.N tujhe howa kya hai
Aakhir is dard ki dawa kya hai

Hum hi hain mushtaq aur wo bezar
ye ilahi ye maajra kya hai

-Mirza Ghalib-

Bohat achcha lagta hai jab hum is tarah ki guftugoo karte hai, ek dusre ki kami ko pakadte hai aur koshish karte hai ke hum ek dusre me sudhaar paida kare. Allah hum sabko sach kehne aur sach sunne ki taufeek de...AAMEEN


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Re: Khud ko bhi azmaya karo

«Reply #12 on: April 14, 2010, 11:23:31 AM »

Quote from: qadeer_junaid on April 13, 2010, 06:25:20 PM

Bohot hi khoobsurat ghazal hai Qadeer Bhai.....har sher behtareen....Bohot bohot khoob Bhaijan.....


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Re: Khud ko bhi azmaya karo

«Reply #13 on: April 14, 2010, 12:03:11 PM »

Qadeer ji bahut khoobsurat or dil ko sukoon dene wali shayari hai aapki .Har sher lajawaab hai. Mubarak ko aapko k itne ameer kism k insaan hai aap warna soch me itni gehraai har kisi ko hasil nahi hoti hai,par aapke paas to khazane malum padte hai.Bahut achha laga padh k.


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Re: Khud ko bhi azmaya karo

«Reply #14 on: April 14, 2010, 12:43:44 PM »

Quote from: tamanna.pt on April 14, 2010, 12:03:11 PM

Sub apki inayath hai .. Apke alfaz apki apni shiqsiyath bayan karte hain Badi hi khush mizaj baten karti hain app .. Apki karam nawazi aur tareef ko alfaz pahenana mushkil ho chala hai tamanna saheba .. yahan to sunch ka fuqdan hai Janab ..apki pakiza nazron ka kamal hai hamari kya bisath hi kya hai .. bus yunhi hausla afzai karte rahe to khuch aur kahene ko himmat mile .. Allah apko hamesha khush rakhe .. khush rahen , Abaad rahe ..

Khadim

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