~~"KHUD KO RULAYA MAINE"~~ Shally.

by k.shael on April 11, 2009, 07:38:42 AM
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«Reply #15 on: April 14, 2009, 07:01:05 AM »
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Thanks Khwaish Ji and Salma.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: April 14, 2009, 07:03:26 AM »
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Quote from: salil2002 on April 11, 2009, 08:34:20 AM
bahut achche shally ..............ek ar behtareen ghazal aapki kalam se nikli hai jisne kuch sochne ko majboor kara haqeeqat ka is khoobsurati se bayaan ,,, qasam se dil ko chhu gayi

baharon k mausam main koi bechne aaya hai patjhad ko
sambhal kar khareedna kaanton se bhara na ho daaman uska
jo de paon toh chand baharein de dena usko
do chaar phoolon se ho mahek jaayega daaman uska

Shurkiya Salil Ki aapne apna keemti wat diya aur meri ghazal ko pasandh kiya..
aur aapki 4 lines to dil ko choo gayi..

u hi apna saath har baar dete rahiyega...

Shally.
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k.shael
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«Reply #17 on: April 14, 2009, 07:05:22 AM »
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Quote from: angel4u on April 11, 2009, 09:05:37 AM
Too good shally...
bahut hi achha likha hia aapne,
ye lines sahi mein dilko chhu gayi...


Gaye wo jamane jab melo me kaanch ki gudiya bikti thi,
Aab to sare-raah masoom betiyoon ko bikta paya maine,




Ek Koshish...


Kisiki mazloomi pe kamzarfon ko haste paaya maine,
sahe jisne saare gam uspe hi ilzaam latate hue paaya maine,

tu dekha andekha chahe kar de zamane ki behayai ko,
har ek shay mein kisiko matlab nikalte hue paaya maine...

Shukriya Angel Didi,

Aapka thread pe aana hi ek dua ke barabar hai, aur aapki ye lines bahut hi pyari hai...

Shukriya inhe mere thread pe likhne ke liye.

Shally.
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k.shael
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«Reply #18 on: April 14, 2009, 07:07:06 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on April 11, 2009, 10:31:51 AM
Exellent Shael Ji Bohat Hi Umda
Khaskar Ye Lines To Kamaal Hai Ji
KitnI Aasani Se Aapne Sachai Ko Likh Diya
Bohat Khoob Ji Keep It Up...

Shukriya Shihab Ji, ki aapne ghazal ko pada aur pasandh kiya.

Shally.
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k.shael
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«Reply #19 on: April 14, 2009, 07:07:55 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on April 11, 2009, 12:52:19 PM
Too Gud Shally.. Dard ko gazal k roop mea bakoobi bayan kiya na hai tumne. keep writing....

Shukriya Sophi dear, ki tumne ghazal ko pasandh kiya.

Shally.
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«Reply #20 on: April 14, 2009, 07:09:19 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on April 11, 2009, 02:42:42 PM
Wonderful Shally dear  Applause Applause Applause
Last four lines bahut accha likha hai. Superb  Thumbs UP

Shukriya Roza didi,

aap ko apne thread me dekhna aadat si hai aur plz kabhi iss aadat ko todiyega mat.

Shukriya,
 
Shally.
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«Reply #21 on: April 14, 2009, 07:13:48 AM »
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Quote from: pandit on April 11, 2009, 02:52:26 PM
waah shael jee waah...
impressive..

Shukriya Pandit Ji,

Apna keemti waqt dene ke liye.

Shally.
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«Reply #22 on: April 14, 2009, 07:14:49 AM »
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Bohat Hi Achcha Likha Hai, Tumne, Shally..
Good Work,.
Nice One Yaar,.

Yunhi Likhte Raho,.

May Allah Bless You,.
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«Reply #23 on: April 14, 2009, 07:41:48 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on April 11, 2009, 08:03:04 PM
Bahut bahut Khoob Shally!! aapki Kalam Din Bhar Din ,Aur gehri Hoti Jaa Rahi Hai...Dard aur jazbaaton se bhari ghazal likhi hai aapne..bahut khooob.. Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut Bahut Khoob Angel!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shukriya Khawaish Ji,

Ki aapne ghazal ko pada ur saraha...aur jajbaaton ko samjhne ki koshish ki...

Shukriya

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«Reply #24 on: April 14, 2009, 07:43:23 AM »
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Quote from: salma786 on April 13, 2009, 01:59:53 PM
Bahoot khoob shally sis Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley




Shukriya Salma dear apna keemti waqt dene ke liye.

Shally.
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«Reply #25 on: April 14, 2009, 07:46:35 AM »
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Quote from: Muhammed on April 14, 2009, 04:07:06 AM
K.shael ji..Khubj saras majani Kavita Lakhi chhe Tame..mane Shabdo nathi malta ki aapni Prashansha kevi rite karun..Bahuj saras..Tamari Urdu Pan Ghani saari chhe..bas Tame Lakhta raho ne sada maate a aa dil ni dua chhe..Farithi Bahuj Sundar..Waah !!

Shukriya Ashraf Ji,

Meri Ghazal ko waqt dene aur use sarahane ke liye.

Shally.
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«Reply #26 on: April 14, 2009, 07:48:26 AM »
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Quote from: Anky on April 14, 2009, 06:52:41 AM
bohat bohat khub tumhari sari ghazal or poetries heart touching hoti hai and sab ki tarah yeh bhi best thi wonderfull Winking

Shukriya Anky,

Apna keemti waqt dene ke liye.

Shally.
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«Reply #27 on: April 14, 2009, 07:49:06 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on April 14, 2009, 07:14:49 AM
Bohat Hi Achcha Likha Hai, Tumne, Shally..
Good Work,.
Nice One Yaar,.

Yunhi Likhte Raho,.

May Allah Bless You,.

Shukriya Azeem Brother,

Aise hi hamesha sarahte rahiyega.

Shally.
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«Reply #28 on: April 14, 2009, 08:14:33 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on April 14, 2009, 07:49:06 AM
Shukriya Azeem Brother,

Aise hi hamesha sarahte rahiyega.

Shally.

Aap Yunhi Khubsurat Ghazlein Likhte Rahiye,.
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«Reply #29 on: April 14, 2009, 10:51:24 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on April 11, 2009, 07:38:42 AM

Mehfil-e-yaar men khud ko khoob bikwaya maine!
Kabhi hansa logon ki marzi se, to kabhi yaar ki khatir khud ko rulaya maine!

Ranjish-O-Gham hi hain ab pehchaan har rishte ki,
Har insaan ko khalwat-e-dil me hi jeeta paaya maine!

Muh ki baat har koi sune, dil ki baat na jane koi,
Aawajon ke bazaar men khamoshi ko bikte paaya maine!

Gaye wo jamane jab melon men kaanch ki gudiya bikti thi,
Ab to sare raah masoom betiyoon ko bikta paya maine!

Jis baat ko kehne se mazboor hain tere lab Shally,   
Usi baat ko teri aankhon se chalkata paaya maine!

Shally.

Shally ji! Clapping Smiley

Bayaan dil key, bayaan hotey hain tah-e-dil sey;
Beyjubaan baat bhi aatee hai nikal kar dil sey!
Aisey jazbaat-ao-haalaat bayaan hon gar, to,
Saaf dikhtaa hai, ki, aaye hain nikal kar dil sey!!

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