Khud Ko Tum Meri Kaaynaat....Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

by Satish Shukla on August 21, 2011, 11:54:00 AM
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ख़ुद को तुम मेरी कायनात कहो
दिल को जो छूले ऐसी बात कहो
khud ko tum meri kaaynaat kaho
dil ko jo chhoo le aaisee baat kaho

आज मौसम की पहली बारिश में
तन्हा कैसे कटेगी रात कहो
aaj mausam kee pahli baarish meN
tanha kaise kategi raat kaho

पास बैठो कभी तो पल दो पल
कुछ हमारी कुछ अपनी बात कहो
paas baitho kabhee to pal do pal
kuchh hamari kuchh apni baat kaho

आज वो बेनक़ाब निकले हैं
आज की रात चाँद रात कहो
aaj woH benaqaab nikle haiN
aaj kee raat chaNd raat kaho
  
हो गया होगा रो के दिल हल्का
ग़म से पाई नहीं नजात कहो
ho gaya hoga ro ke dil halka
gam se paaee naheeN najaat kaho
 
ज़िन्दगी को सुकून देती है
मौत को राहते-हयात कहो
zindagee ko sukoon deti hai
maut ko raahte-hayaat kaho

ख़ाक जलकर हुआ है कौन 'रक़ीब'
किसने खाई है किससे मात कहो
khaak jalkar hua hai kaun  'Raqeeb'
kisne khaee hai kis se maat kaho
  
            --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #1 on: August 21, 2011, 01:15:10 PM »
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Bahut khoob Satish Ji ....Har sher dil chhota lag raha hai...main bas itna kah sakta hoon..

Is ghazal ko jazbaat kaho..
Ya dil se nikli baat kaho..
Jo dil ko chhoo k jati hai..
Yo India ki saugat kaho..!!
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«Reply #2 on: August 21, 2011, 02:30:41 PM »
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bhai Satish ji,bahut khoobsurat ghazal pesh ki hai.Kuchh der qabl hi zikr hua thha ki ye aap ki pasandeeda behr hai.
 ' aaj wo benaqaab nikle hain........' 
                 iss he'r ka jawaab nahii.n. 
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«Reply #3 on: August 21, 2011, 02:59:53 PM »
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 Raqeeb Saheb,

 Wah! Wah! Wah!
 
 Bahut Khoob. Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: August 21, 2011, 03:39:55 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
एक बेहतरीन ग़ज़ल| बधाई एवं शुभकामनायें|
-अरुण मिश्र.
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«Reply #5 on: August 21, 2011, 05:23:53 PM »
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Raqeeb Sahaab Aadaab!

Waah waah waah kia kahne janab waah behad khub gazal bazm
ko nawaazi hai aapne... Usual Smile

Masha Allah kia khub khayaal aur kia pyaari adaygi hai aapki..
Sabhi ashaar behad khub rahe janab.. Usual Smile

Humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye Usual Smile
Likhate rahiye...

Aur In asharoN par hazaaroN daad janab Usual Smile         


aaj woH benaqaab nikle haiN
aaj kee raat chaNd raat kaho

ho gaya hoga ro ke dil halka
gam se paaee naheeN najaat kaho

zindagee ko sukoon deti hai
maut ko raahte-hayaat kaho

Likhate rahiye Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         

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«Reply #6 on: August 21, 2011, 06:04:47 PM »
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wah Shukla ji--bht khub ghazal kaha hai aapne
daad daad
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«Reply #7 on: August 21, 2011, 06:49:28 PM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on August 21, 2011, 11:54:00 AM

ख़ुद को तुम मेरी कायनात कहो
दिल को जो छूले ऐसी बात कहो
khud ko tum meri kaaynaat kaho
dil ko jo chhoo le aaisee baat kaho

आज मौसम की पहली बारिश में
तन्हा कैसे कटेगी रात कहो
aaj mausam kee pahli baarish meN
tanha kaise kategi raat kaho

पास बैठो कभी तो पल दो पल
कुछ हमारी कुछ अपनी बात कहो
paas baitho kabhee to pal do pal
kuchh hamari kuchh apni baat kaho

आज वो बेनक़ाब निकले हैं
आज की रात चाँद रात कहो
aaj woH benaqaab nikle haiN
aaj kee raat chaNd raat kaho
 
हो गया होगा रो के दिल हल्का
ग़म से पाई नहीं नजात कहो
ho gaya hoga ro ke dil halka
gam se paaee naheeN najaat kaho
 
ज़िन्दगी को सुकून देती है
मौत को राहते-हयात कहो
zindagee ko sukoon deti hai
maut ko raahte-hayaat kaho

ख़ाक जलकर हुआ है कौन 'रक़ीब'
किसने खाई है किससे मात कहो
khaak jalkar hua hai kaun  'Raqeeb'
kisne khaee hai kis se maat kaho
 
            --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'


Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Bahut Bahut Khoob Satish Ji...Umda Peshkash!!!

Har Ek A'shaar Ek Se Badhkar Ek..

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«Reply #8 on: August 21, 2011, 07:16:04 PM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on August 21, 2011, 11:54:00 AM

ख़ुद को तुम मेरी कायनात कहो
दिल को जो छूले ऐसी बात कहो
khud ko tum meri kaaynaat kaho
dil ko jo chhoo le aaisee baat kaho

आज मौसम की पहली बारिश में
तन्हा कैसे कटेगी रात कहो
aaj mausam kee pahli baarish meN
tanha kaise kategi raat kaho

पास बैठो कभी तो पल दो पल
कुछ हमारी कुछ अपनी बात कहो
paas baitho kabhee to pal do pal
kuchh hamari kuchh apni baat kaho

आज वो बेनक़ाब निकले हैं
आज की रात चाँद रात कहो
aaj woH benaqaab nikle haiN
aaj kee raat chaNd raat kaho
 
हो गया होगा रो के दिल हल्का
ग़म से पाई नहीं नजात कहो
ho gaya hoga ro ke dil halka
gam se paaee naheeN najaat kaho
 
ज़िन्दगी को सुकून देती है
मौत को राहते-हयात कहो
zindagee ko sukoon deti hai
maut ko raahte-hayaat kaho

ख़ाक जलकर हुआ है कौन 'रक़ीब'
किसने खाई है किससे मात कहो
khaak jalkar hua hai kaun  'Raqeeb'
kisne khaee hai kis se maat kaho
 
            --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'


BAHUT KHOOB RAQEEB SAHAB


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«Reply #9 on: August 21, 2011, 07:57:44 PM »
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Kya baat hai Satish jee..
Behad umda likha hai..
Applause Applause Applause
Dil se daad..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #10 on: August 22, 2011, 03:26:11 AM »
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bahut bahut bahut hi umda kalaam..... Thumbs UP Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: August 22, 2011, 05:48:22 AM »
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Gyan Prakash Ji,

Ghazal pasand karne aur jawab dene ka
bahut bahut shukriya...

Aapne bhi kya khoob she'r kaha hai
bahut umda..

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 
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«Reply #12 on: August 22, 2011, 08:18:19 AM »
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Hasan Sahab,

Apni is pasandeeda behr ki yaad
dilane aur jawab dene ka bahut
bahut shukriya.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #13 on: August 22, 2011, 10:02:26 AM »
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Satish Ji Wah Wah Bahut Hi Umda Likha Hai [/color] icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #14 on: August 22, 2011, 07:33:24 PM »
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           HAI HAAZIR 'JAAN' MERI JAB BHI CHAHO TUM.
           ALAWAA ISKE CHAHIYE KOI AUR SAUGAAT KAHO


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