Khud Ko Tum Meri Kaaynaat....Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

by Satish Shukla on August 21, 2011, 11:54:00 AM
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«Reply #15 on: August 22, 2011, 10:22:35 PM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on August 21, 2011, 11:54:00 AM
ख़ुद को तुम मेरी कायनात कहो
दिल को जो छूले ऐसी बात कहो
khud ko tum meri kaaynaat kaho
dil ko jo chhoo le aaisee baat kaho

आज मौसम की पहली बारिश में
तन्हा कैसे कटेगी रात कहो
aaj mausam kee pahli baarish meN
tanha kaise kategi raat kaho

पास बैठो कभी तो पल दो पल
कुछ हमारी कुछ अपनी बात कहो
paas baitho kabhee to pal do pal
kuchh hamari kuchh apni baat kaho

आज वो बेनक़ाब निकले हैं
आज की रात चाँद रात कहो
aaj woH benaqaab nikle haiN
aaj kee raat chaNd raat kaho
 
हो गया होगा रो के दिल हल्का
ग़म से पाई नहीं नजात कहो
ho gaya hoga ro ke dil halka
gam se paaee naheeN najaat kaho
 
ज़िन्दगी को सुकून देती है
मौत को राहते-हयात कहो
zindagee ko sukoon deti hai
maut ko raahte-hayaat kaho

ख़ाक जलकर हुआ है कौन 'रक़ीब'
किसने खाई है किससे मात कहो
khaak jalkar hua hai kaun  'Raqeeb'
kisne khaee hai kis se maat kaho
 
            --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

gham se paayee nahi nejaat kaho ......... waah waah kiya akahney badaa khoobsoorat andaaz hai is andaaz ko naye pan ki mahek ne apney andaaz me sajaa diyaa hai mobaarak ho
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«Reply #16 on: August 24, 2011, 05:06:52 AM »
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usha rajesh ji,

ghazal padhne, pasand karne aur
jawab dene ka bahut bahut shukriya..
aage bhi aaise hi hausala aafzaai karte
rahen.

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«Reply #17 on: August 24, 2011, 06:54:20 AM »
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Respected Arun Mishra Ji,

Ghazal pasand karne aur jawab dene
ka bahut bahut shukriya.

Saadar,

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«Reply #18 on: August 24, 2011, 09:25:35 AM »
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Parwaaz Ji,

Ghazal padhne, pasand karne aur jawab dene
ka bahut bahut shukriya....

Aage bhi isee tarah hausala aafzaaee karte
rahiya...

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«Reply #19 on: August 24, 2011, 09:37:32 AM »
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sarfira ji,

Ghazal padhne, pasand karne aur jawab dene
ka bahut bahut shukriya..

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«Reply #20 on: August 24, 2011, 10:39:43 AM »
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khwaish ji,

Ghazal padhne, pasand karne aur
jawab dene ka bahut bahut shukriya.

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«Reply #21 on: August 24, 2011, 11:24:37 AM »
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sheba ji,

Bahut bhaut shukriya jawab dene
aur ghazal pasand karne ke liye.

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«Reply #22 on: August 24, 2011, 11:30:47 AM »
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Rahim Sahab,

Hausala aafzai ka bahut bahut
shukriya....

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«Reply #23 on: August 24, 2011, 12:06:59 PM »
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Touhid Sahab,

Bahut bahut shukriya
jawab dene ke liye.

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«Reply #24 on: August 24, 2011, 12:11:21 PM »
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Sanjeev Ji,

Bahut bahut Shukriya
ghazal pasand karne aur
jawab dene ke liye.

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«Reply #25 on: August 24, 2011, 12:13:37 PM »
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Bechain Sahab,

Jawab dene ka bahut bahut shukriya
aapne jo she'r kaha hai achchha hai

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«Reply #26 on: August 24, 2011, 12:28:01 PM »
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masoodhassaas ji,

Jawab dene ka bahut bahut shukriya

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«Reply #27 on: August 31, 2011, 09:51:34 AM »
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bahut khoobsurat khayal hae aapka. maza aa gaya. aise hi badiya likhte rahiye.  rajan Malhotra 'Deep'
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«Reply #28 on: August 31, 2011, 10:42:56 AM »
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satish ji ye to wakai dil choo lene wali baat kahi hai aapne.
daad kubool kijiye.
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«Reply #29 on: August 31, 2011, 06:01:11 PM »
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Suresh Ji,

Ghazal pasand karne aur jawab dene
ka bahut bahut shukriya.

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