Khud Ko Tum Meri Kaaynaat....Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

by Satish Shukla on August 21, 2011, 11:54:00 AM
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«Reply #30 on: August 31, 2011, 06:05:43 PM »
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Rajan (Deep) Ji,

Ghazal padhne, jawab dene aur Hausala aafzaee
ka bahut bahut shukriya.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 
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«Reply #31 on: September 06, 2011, 03:27:05 PM »
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BAHUT behtareen shukla ji...WAH KYA BAAT HAI.....

very nice gazhal.....keep it on
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«Reply #32 on: September 07, 2011, 05:40:16 AM »
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Irshad Sahab,

Ghazal padhne, pasand karne aur
jawab dene ka bahut bahut shukriya.

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«Reply #33 on: October 21, 2011, 11:35:48 AM »
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ख़ुद को तुम मेरी कायनात कहो
दिल को जो छूले ऐसी बात कहो
khud ko tum meri kaaynaat kaho
dil ko jo chhoo le aaisee baat kaho

आज मौसम की पहली बारिश में
तन्हा कैसे कटेगी रात कहो
aaj mausam kee pahli baarish meN
tanha kaise kategi raat kaho

पास बैठो कभी तो पल दो पल
कुछ हमारी कुछ अपनी बात कहो
paas baitho kabhee to pal do pal
kuchh hamari kuchh apni baat kaho

आज वो बेनक़ाब निकले हैं
आज की रात चाँद रात कहो
aaj woH benaqaab nikle haiN
aaj kee raat chaNd raat kaho
  
हो गया होगा रो के दिल हल्का
ग़म से पाई नहीं नजात कहो
ho gaya hoga ro ke dil halka
gam se paaee naheeN najaat kaho
 
ज़िन्दगी को सुकून देती है
मौत को राहते-हयात कहो
zindagee ko sukoon deti hai
maut ko raahte-hayaat kaho

ख़ाक जलकर हुआ है कौन 'रक़ीब'
किसने खाई है किससे मात कहो
khaak jalkar hua hai kaun  'Raqeeb'
kisne khaee hai kis se maat kaho
  
            --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'


Satish ji
Vaah , Bahut khoob. dil ke tar jhanjhana uthe ,madhosh kar diya apki jubaan ne.
baar baar padhne ko dil kar raha hai.
Tah-e-dil se dad kubool kare.

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«Reply #34 on: October 21, 2011, 11:56:49 AM »
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mkv ji,

der aaye durust aaye..

kam se kam nazar-e-inayat to farmaaee
khaksaar kee tukbandi par...

jawab dene ka tahe dil se shukriya.

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«Reply #35 on: October 21, 2011, 12:17:31 PM »
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Satish ji
Maine june se start kiya hai. beech me kuch family problems ki vajah se nigaah hat gayi.
Hum to apke mureed hai. aj time mila to padhna shuru kiya. abhi bahut se baaki bhi hai. ap to jante hai vaqt ki problem har kisi ke sath hai..
aap to apne shabdo se is nacheej ke kaleje ko phaad hi dalenge. chaliye maaf bhi kar dijiye.
Hame to bas apka ashirwad chahiye.
shukriya
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«Reply #36 on: October 21, 2011, 04:17:26 PM »
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Shukla ji mubarak ho. Bahot behtreen ghazal kahi hai aapne. Parhkar bahot achha laga.Likhte rahiye.
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«Reply #37 on: October 22, 2011, 05:02:48 AM »
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mkv ji,

Ghazal padhne, pasand karne aur jawab dene ka
bahut bahut shukriya.

Aapne sahi farmaya waqt ki problem
mere sath bhi hai, fir bhi jitna bacha pata
hoon adab ki khidmat kar leta hoon.

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«Reply #38 on: October 22, 2011, 09:46:45 AM »
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riyaz106 ji,

ghazal pasand karne aur
jawab dene ka bahut bhahut
shukriya janab.

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