KHUDA DHOONDH RAHE HO....////............................////....IFTAKHAR

by Iftakhar Ahmad on October 06, 2014, 10:57:07 PM
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Sabhi dostoN aur seniors ko mera salaam. Maine Facebook pe "Main Hoon Naa" group meN kaafi pehle ek sher padhaa thaa jo k is ghazal meN matle ka sher hai. MaiN un shayar ka naam bhool raha huN, maine unse iss sher ko lekar ghazal likhne ki ijaazat li thi, pesh hai:


"Iss shahr ke  logoN  meN  wafa  dhooNdh  rahe ho
Tum zahr ki sheeshi  meN  dawa  dhooNdh rahe ho"

Jo khud  ko  mukammal  karo duniya ye haseeN hai
Bekaar  tum   auroN   ki   khata  dhooNdh  rahe  ho

Maaloom  haqeeqat   nahiN   ghaafil  ho  abhi  tum
Duniya ke nazaaroN  meN   maza  dhooNdh rahe ho

Karo khud ko fana shay wo tere dil meN nihaaN hai
Kya mandir-o-masjid meN  Khuda dhooNdh rahe ho

Iss   daur    meN     bepardagi    ki    hod    lagi   hai
Iss daur  ke  logoN   meN   haya  dhooNdh  rahe ho

Mashriq   ki  taraf   dekh   lo   k   waqt-e-seher  hai
Ab  faayda  kya  tum   jo   diya  dhooNdh  rahe  ho

Insaan   ki   mujh  jaise    tumheN   qadr   nahiN  hai
Insaan  mohabbat   se    bhara   dhooNdh  rahe  ho
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«Reply #1 on: October 07, 2014, 12:54:32 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob ek rau ke saaatha dheron daad
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«Reply #2 on: October 07, 2014, 02:22:36 AM »
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very nice creation
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«Reply #3 on: October 07, 2014, 06:23:14 AM »
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Nice!
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«Reply #4 on: October 07, 2014, 06:45:27 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut khub iftkhar sahab..... rau qubool kijiye......
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«Reply #5 on: October 07, 2014, 12:21:53 PM »
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Behad Umda.Rau kabool kijiye.
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«Reply #6 on: October 07, 2014, 03:03:45 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on October 07, 2014, 12:54:32 AM
waah waah bahut khoob ek rau ke saaatha dheron daad
Bahut shukriya Saini sir.
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«Reply #7 on: October 07, 2014, 04:27:04 PM »
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Quote from: MJF Lion Kishore Bansal on October 07, 2014, 02:22:36 AM
very nice creation
Shukriya didi.
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«Reply #8 on: October 07, 2014, 07:12:38 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: October 08, 2014, 06:32:52 PM »
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Ifteqaar Sahaab Aadaab ... !

Mashaa Allaah janab kia kahne ... behad laa jawaab khayaaloN ko tajurbe ki syaahi se utaara hai aapne ...
Waqai khoob gehre aur umdaa sher kahe haiN ...

Is khoobsurat kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
haaN ho sake to matla bhi kah dijiye ...

Likhte rahiye... bazm ko roshan o aabaad karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: October 09, 2014, 08:24:25 AM »
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Quote from: Shireen Hakani on October 07, 2014, 06:23:14 AM
Nice!
Shukriy Shireen jee.
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«Reply #11 on: October 09, 2014, 05:01:41 PM »
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Quote from: mann.mann on October 07, 2014, 06:45:27 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut khub iftkhar sahab..... rau qubool kijiye......
Shukriya Mann jee.
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«Reply #12 on: October 10, 2014, 04:57:10 PM »
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Quote from: Rajigujral on October 07, 2014, 12:21:53 PM
Behad Umda.Rau kabool kijiye.
Shukriya Gujraj jee.
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«Reply #13 on: October 11, 2014, 04:18:12 AM »
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Waah Iftakhaar Bhaii Bahut Umdaa...Badii behr ko badii khoobsurati se nibhaya hai aapne..
rau qubool karein ...
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«Reply #14 on: November 10, 2014, 04:38:43 PM »
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Shukriya Kapil jee.
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