KHUDA DHOONDH RAHE HO....////............................////....IFTAKHAR -Panna 2:Ghazals

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«Reply #15 on: November 10, 2014, 04:47:17 PM »

waah waah waaaaaaaaaah bahut umdah Janaab, dheron daad. Maloom nahin mai kaise itnee khoobsurat ghazal miss kar gayaa.
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Re: KHUDA DHOONDH RAHE HO....////............................////....IFTAKHAR

«Reply #16 on: November 11, 2014, 05:51:09 AM »


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«Reply #17 on: November 11, 2014, 02:08:05 PM »

Quote from: qadeer_junaid on November 11, 2014, 05:51:09 AM

wah iftekhar sahab achi ghazal hai ....hazaron dad apki is tilism angez ghazal ke huzoor ..darje zel sher ke misra e oola ko dekh len ...ghaleban aapne lafz karo hi likha hai agar mai sahi parh raha hun to ...

Karo khud ko fana shay wo tere dil meN nihaaN hai
Kya mandir-o-masjid meN Khuda dhooNdh rahe ho

HaaN iss sher meN Lafz 'Karo' hi likha hai.[/blue]

akhri sher ke pahle misre me lafz tujhe ko tumhe se badal den chunke radeef dhoond rahe ho jo ke jama segha hai ....aur lafz tujhe wahed ka segha hai ....ek baar dad qubool karen

HaaN maine ye sahi kar liya hai, bahut shukriya, bahut achha lagta hai jab koi itni tawajj: se ghazal padhta hai aur ghaltiyoN se aagaah karaata hai. Aap se guzaarish karuNga ke hamesha aate raheN, padhte raheN, aur koi ghalti mile to aagaah karte raheN.


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«Reply #18 on: December 05, 2014, 07:30:29 PM »

Parwaaz saheb, zarra nawaazi ka bahut shukriya.

Quote from: ParwaaZ on October 08, 2014, 06:32:52 PM

Ifteqaar Sahaab Aadaab ... !

Mashaa Allaah janab kia kahne ... behad laa jawaab khayaaloN ko tajurbe ki syaahi se utaara hai aapne ...
Waqai khoob gehre aur umdaa sher kahe haiN ...

Is khoobsurat kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
haaN ho sake to matla bhi kah dijiye ...

Likhte rahiye... bazm ko roshan o aabaad karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez...


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