Khuda Sunta Hai Fariyaad Uss Shaks Ki....

by khwaish on July 26, 2009, 11:01:41 AM
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«Reply #15 on: July 29, 2009, 03:47:20 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on July 26, 2009, 12:27:02 PM
Bahut bahut Bahut Khoob Prateekji..Har Ashaar Mein Nazrein Rukh Si gayi..Bahut Gehre Jazbaat Pesh kiye Hai Aapne..

Bahut Khooob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aarzoo Ka Koi Nishaan tak Bhi Nahi,
Teri nazrein Jo Phiri Mujhse,Ab Dil mein Koi Armaan Tak bhi Nahi...

Dil Ko Jhooti tasaali Dene Ke Liye Ab main Bhi keh Deta Hoon!!!
Ab Tujh Par Mera Koi Dhyaan tak bhi nahi....

Loot Gaya Hai Safar Mein mere Jo kuch bhi Tha!!!
Main Jaanta Hoon,Tere Dil mein Mere Liye Koi Makaan Tak bhi Nahi...

Kehte Hai log Ke Din Mein Suraj Apni Dhoop Bikherta Hai!!!
Par Itna Andhera Hai Inn Aankhon Mein,
Ke Mujhe Ab Roshni ka Koi Gumaan Tak Bhi Nahi....

Tujhse Kya Shikayat  Karega Woh shaks!!!
Jiske Mooh Mein Koi Zubaan Tak Bhi nahi....

Kuch Yuh Khud Ko Kho Baitha hai "Khwaish" Iss Gard-e-safar Mein,
Ke Ab Mehsoos Hota Hai kuch yuh,Ke Baaki Ab Koi Naam-0-Nishaan Tak Bhi Nahi...


shukria khwaish ji.

Aapki prerna hai jo kabhi kabhi tukbandi ki raah dikha deti hai.
Aapne fir se ek sashakt rachna ko janam diya hai, uski badhai.Bahut khoob likha hai janaab. Applause Applause
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«Reply #16 on: July 29, 2009, 05:49:15 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 29, 2009, 03:26:36 AM
Very nice and beautiful lines Prateek ji ,Cara ji ,Abd ji and Pooja ji. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:bahut khoob likha aap sabhi ne.
Thanks Madhu!
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«Reply #17 on: July 29, 2009, 06:00:27 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on July 26, 2009, 02:56:24 PM

Dard-e-dil ki beyzubaaniyat kaa yah bayaan-e- asliyat tah-e-dil tak ko jhakjhor gayaa! Bahut khoob khwaish ji!

Kahtey-kahtey thak gayaa:
Lafz na niklaa eik!
Aankhoun mein ghultey rahey,
Sabhee tasawwur neik!!

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Teh Dil Se Shukriya Abd Saheb ji...


Yeh Mere Liye Humesha Garv ki Baat Hoti hai Jab bhi main Aapko Apni kisi Poetry par Comment karte Dekhta Hoon...Mujhe Aap Se bahut Kuch seekhne Ka Mauka Milta hai..Thankyou soooooooooooo Much Saheb ji..

Bahut Bahut Khooob!!!  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Dil Ki Baat Aap bhi Keh jaate,
To koi Gila Naa Hota..
Woh baat Aur Hai!!! Ke Gile-Shikwo Ke Siwa,
Zindagi mein Mujhe Kuch Aur mila Naa Hota...
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«Reply #18 on: July 29, 2009, 06:27:58 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on July 29, 2009, 06:00:27 AM

Teh Dil Se Shukriya Abd Saheb ji...


Yeh Mere Liye Humesha Garv ki Baat Hoti hai Jab bhi main Aapko Apni kisi Poetry par Comment karte Dekhta Hoon...Mujhe Aap Se bahut Kuch seekhne Ka Mauka Milta hai..Thankyou soooooooooooo Much Saheb ji..

Bahut Bahut Khooob!!!  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Dil Ki Baat Aap bhi Keh jaate,
To koi Gila Naa Hota..
Woh baat Aur Hai!!! Ke Gile-Shikwo Ke Siwa,
Zindagi mein Mujhe Kuch Aur mila Naa Hota...

Thanks a lot, khwaish  ji!

Koyi shikwaa naheen, gilaa naheen zamaaney sey!
Raahrou aa key thahartaa hai, chalaa jaataa hai!
Yaad rah jaatii hai baaqee, to, yaadgaaroun mein:
Khud banaatey hain; kabhee doosaraa banaataa hai!!

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«Reply #19 on: July 31, 2009, 12:45:28 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on July 27, 2009, 09:37:40 AM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Humesha ki tarah bohot sachcha aur bohot achcha likha hai Dost...Seedha dil se nikla hua....aur dil ko chhoota hua.....Bohot bohot khoob Khwaish

Bahut bahut Shukriya Dost!!!

Thankyou Sooooo Much Dear!! icon_flower
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«Reply #20 on: July 31, 2009, 01:04:45 PM »
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bahut khubsurt likha hai aap sab ne good !!!!!!
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«Reply #21 on: July 31, 2009, 01:26:28 PM »
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bahut achcha khwahish bhai, prateek bhai pooja dear and cara ji aap sabne ek se badkar ek ghazal pesh kii hain  daad kabool kare
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«Reply #22 on: August 04, 2009, 05:22:45 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on July 27, 2009, 10:10:16 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahot bahot acha likha hai aapne Khwaish dear.

behad dil se involve hoke likha hai.

very nice creation

Thankyou Soooooooo Much Kaashji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #23 on: August 04, 2009, 05:29:33 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob Khwaish bhaiya.. Applause Applause Applause

Cara, Uncle ji.... bahut accha saat diya  Applause
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«Reply #24 on: August 04, 2009, 05:53:31 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 04, 2009, 05:29:33 PM
Bahut bahut khoob Khwaish bhaiya.. Applause Applause Applause

Cara, Uncle ji.... bahut accha saat diya  Applause


Thanks Roja!
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«Reply #25 on: August 05, 2009, 05:56:48 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on July 28, 2009, 04:22:15 PM
Awesome excellent mind blowing poetry Khwaish ji.. Dono hi sachna behad khub likha hai bahoot bahoot khoob! ..Bahoot Khoob!



Thankyou Soooooooooo Much Sophi.. icon_flower
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«Reply #26 on: August 16, 2009, 12:12:25 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on July 29, 2009, 03:47:20 AM

shukria khwaish ji.

Aapki prerna hai jo kabhi kabhi tukbandi ki raah dikha deti hai.
Aapne fir se ek sashakt rachna ko janam diya hai, uski badhai.Bahut khoob likha hai janaab. Applause Applause

Bahut Bahut Dhanyawaad Prateekji...

Aap Ko Yahan Likhte Dekh,Bahut Khushi Hui..Yuhi Hamara Saath Dete Rahiyega Prateekji Usual Smile
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«Reply #27 on: August 25, 2009, 03:57:38 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on July 29, 2009, 06:27:58 AM

Thanks a lot, khwaish  ji!

Koyi shikwaa naheen, gilaa naheen zamaaney sey!
Raahrou aa key thahartaa hai, chalaa jaataa hai!
Yaad rah jaatii hai baaqee, to, yaadgaaroun mein:
Khud banaatey hain; kabhee doosaraa banaataa hai!!

                             - abd bundeli

Thankyou Sooo Much Sir!!!

Koi Shikwaa Naheen,Gila Nahi Zamaane Se,
Par Waqt Bhi Baaz Nahi Aata Mujhe Aazmane Se..
Yaadein Hi reh Jaati hai Paas Mere Aur Kuch Nahi!!!
Kaaash Tu Mere Aa Jaati Ek Baar Bhulane Se...
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«Reply #28 on: August 25, 2009, 05:10:33 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 25, 2009, 03:57:38 PM
Thankyou Sooo Much Sir!!!

Koi Shikwaa Naheen,Gila Nahi Zamaane Se,
Par Waqt Bhi Baaz Nahi Aata Mujhe Aazmane Se..
Yaadein Hi reh Jaati hai Paas Mere Aur Kuch Nahi!!!
Kaaash Tu Mere Aa Jaati Ek Baar Bhulane Se...
Thanks khwaish ji!
Maaf keejiyegaa thorhaa 'muskuraa kar' likh rahaa huun!

Zald hee, woh bhi chalee aayegee, bulaatey hee!
Deir ho jaaye to deynaa na ulahnaa koyee!!
Neend aa jaatee hai, khat-khat key choor honey sey;
Yeh bhi ho saktaa hai, ho 'usko' sulaatey soyee!!

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Quote from: rawattanha on July 31, 2009, 01:04:45 PM
bahut khubsurt likha hai aap sab ne good !!!!!!

Bahut Bhaut Shukriya Rawattanhaji,jo aapne iss therad ko Apna waqt diya
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