"khush rahe tu"

by aaina on July 21, 2009, 05:34:57 PM
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Khush rhe tu koi gham tujhay na chu paaye
Jo bhi dard dard aaye wo mere hisse aaye

Tu mera dost bhi jaan bhi humnawa.n bhi
Mere aiyteraaf mai hain lipte tere saaye

Wo meri zindagi ka aakhri lamaha hoga
Jo meri soch tujhko kabhi bhool jaye

Tu jaisa chahata hai mujhay manzoor har shey
Mein samjh lunga wo bhi jo tu keh na paaye

Mera hai kya mai teri qasam mein ji lunga
Shurt ye hai jo tu maujhay kabhi soche, to muskaye
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«Reply #1 on: July 21, 2009, 05:58:56 PM »
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wah aaina ji kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob!!
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«Reply #2 on: July 21, 2009, 07:07:41 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on July 21, 2009, 05:34:57 PM
Khush rhe tu koi gham tujhay na chu paaye
Jo bhi dard dard aaye wo mere hisse aaye

Tu mera dost bhi jaan bhi humnawa.n bhi
Mere aiyteraaf mai hain lipte tere saaye

Wo meri zindagi ka aakhri lamaha hoga
Jo meri soch tujhko kabhi bhool jaye

Tu jaisa chahata hai mujhay manzoor har shey
Mein samjh lunga wo bhi jo tu keh na paaye

Mera hai kya mai teri qasam mein ji lunga
Shurt ye hai jo tu maujhay kabhi soche, to muskaye


 Applause Applause Applause

Mashallah......Bohot Khoob Aslam Ji


Kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai.....


Apne Hisse Ke Ghum Hain, Apne Hisse Ki Hai Khushi,
Apni Hi Zaat Ka Bojh Liye Chal Rahi Hai Ye Zindagi

Dhoond Rahe Hain Aaino Main, Shayad Ek Aks Hi Mile,
Jaane Kahan Chorh Aaye Khud Ko, Hum Ko Bhi Khabar Nahi

Har Saans Pe Thehra Hua, Koi Qarz Seene Main Dhala,
Bechaniyaan Hain Har Lamha, Har Ek Pal Koi Bebasi

Lachaar Se Hain Khade Hue, Kis Raah Pe Rakhe Qadam,
Kashmakash Se Joojhte, Manzilian Dil Ki Kaun Si !!

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«Reply #3 on: July 22, 2009, 03:57:11 AM »
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kya baat hai    aaina ji....

tu sirf haan kahede tere sang jee liyunga,
tere hisse ke har gum  main sahe liyunga.
tuje sirf khush rahkne ke liye hi main jeeunga,
teri khushi ke khaatir khuda se bhi jaa ladunga.
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«Reply #4 on: July 22, 2009, 04:05:19 AM »
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Quote from: aaina on July 21, 2009, 05:34:57 PM
Khush rhe tu koi gham tujhay na chu paaye
Jo bhi dard dard aaye wo mere hisse aaye

Tu mera dost bhi jaan bhi humnawa.n bhi
Mere aiyteraaf mai hain lipte tere saaye

Wo meri zindagi ka aakhri lamaha hoga
Jo meri soch tujhko kabhi bhool jaye

Tu jaisa chahata hai mujhay manzoor har shey
Mein samjh lunga wo bhi jo tu keh na paaye

Mera hai kya mai teri qasam mein ji lunga
Shurt ye hai jo tu maujhay kabhi soche, to muskaye


Bahut khoob Aslam ji  Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: July 22, 2009, 04:06:03 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on July 21, 2009, 07:07:41 PM
Applause Applause Applause

Mashallah......Bohot Khoob Aslam Ji


Kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai.....


Apne Hisse Ke Ghum Hain, Apne Hisse Ki Hai Khushi,
Apni Hi Zaat Ka Bojh Liye Chal Rahi Hai Ye Zindagi

Dhoond Rahe Hain Aaino Main, Shayad Ek Aks Hi Mile,
Jaane Kahan Chorh Aaye Khud Ko, Hum Ko Bhi Khabar Nahi

Har Saans Pe Thehra Hua, Koi Qarz Seene Main Dhala,
Bechaniyaan Hain Har Lamha, Har Ek Pal Koi Bebasi

Lachaar Se Hain Khade Hue, Kis Raah Pe Rakhe Qadam,
Kashmakash Se Joojhte, Manzilian Dil Ki Kaun Si !!

Wah wah... dear Celmira... Wonderful gazal likha hai aapne bi  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #6 on: July 22, 2009, 04:06:30 AM »
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Quote from: cara on July 22, 2009, 03:57:11 AM
kya baat hai    aaina ji....

tu sirf haan kahede tere sang jee liyunga,
tere hisse ke har gum  main sahe liyunga.
tuje sirf khush rahkne ke liye hi main jeeunga,
teri khushi ke khaatir khuda se bhi jaa ladunga.


Lovely lines Cara  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #7 on: July 22, 2009, 04:20:05 AM »
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Quote from: aaina on July 21, 2009, 05:34:57 PM
Khush rhe tu koi gham tujhay na chu paaye
Jo bhi dard dard aaye wo mere hisse aaye

Tu mera dost bhi jaan bhi humnawa.n bhi
Mere aiyteraaf mai hain lipte tere saaye

Wo meri zindagi ka aakhri lamaha hoga
Jo meri soch tujhko kabhi bhool jaye

Tu jaisa chahata hai mujhay manzoor har shey
Mein samjh lunga wo bhi jo tu keh na paaye

Mera hai kya mai teri qasam mein ji lunga
Shurt ye hai jo tu maujhay kabhi soche, to muskaye


Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Ehsaas Hai Aslam Bhai..

Bahut Bahut Khoob Bhai.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: July 22, 2009, 04:24:20 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on July 21, 2009, 07:07:41 PM
Applause Applause Applause

Mashallah......Bohot Khoob Aslam Ji


Kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai.....


Apne Hisse Ke Ghum Hain, Apne Hisse Ki Hai Khushi,
Apni Hi Zaat Ka Bojh Liye Chal Rahi Hai Ye Zindagi

Dhoond Rahe Hain Aaino Main, Shayad Ek Aks Hi Mile,
Jaane Kahan Chorh Aaye Khud Ko, Hum Ko Bhi Khabar Nahi

Har Saans Pe Thehra Hua, Koi Qarz Seene Main Dhala,
Bechaniyaan Hain Har Lamha, Har Ek Pal Koi Bebasi

Lachaar Se Hain Khade Hue, Kis Raah Pe Rakhe Qadam,
Kashmakash Se Joojhte, Manzilian Dil Ki Kaun Si !!



Aapka To Jawaab Hi nahi Talat!!!

Bahut Bahut Khoob Dost!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: July 22, 2009, 08:37:54 AM »
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Aarzoo ho teri aur mera imtihaan ho

Has kar teri duniya se hum vida ho jaye....
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«Reply #10 on: July 23, 2009, 06:21:32 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 22, 2009, 04:06:03 AM
Wah wah... dear Celmira... Wonderful gazal likha hai aapne bi  Thumbs UP

Thanks so much Roja
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«Reply #11 on: July 23, 2009, 06:22:09 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on July 22, 2009, 04:24:20 AM
Aapka To Jawaab Hi nahi Talat!!!

Bahut Bahut Khoob Dost!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohot bohot shukriya Dost Usual Smile
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Quote from: Pooja on July 21, 2009, 05:58:56 PM
wah aaina ji kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob!!

bhut shkukriya pooja ji........
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Quote from: cara on July 22, 2009, 03:57:11 AM
kya baat hai    aaina ji....

tu sirf haan kahede tere sang jee liyunga,
tere hisse ke har gum  main sahe liyunga.
tuje sirf khush rahkne ke liye hi main jeeunga,
teri khushi ke khaatir khuda se bhi jaa ladunga.



thnxxx so much cara ji

bhut acha likha hai aapne
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«Reply #14 on: August 18, 2009, 03:20:16 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 22, 2009, 04:05:19 AM
Bahut khoob Aslam ji  Applause Applause


thnxxxxxxxxxx roja dear
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