khuwahishai.n

by aaina on May 26, 2009, 04:18:40 AM
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Apni zindagi mujhay dasteyaab kar de
Ye chahatai.n mere naam intesaab kar de

Ek sawaal hu.n teri muskurahat par
Gunguna lai mujhay lajaawaab kar de

Nadi sukoon mai bheti hui achi na lage
Uthar ja isme saara paani sharaab kar de

Mhekna bhool chuki hai.n meri bahai.n
Mujhko choo le mera badan gulaab kar de

Tune aslam ko bakshi hai sifat e maahtaabi
Jal na jaau.n kahin mujhay maahtaab kar de
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«Reply #1 on: May 26, 2009, 11:21:09 AM »
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Very beautiful work....Bohot hi Khoob Aslam Ji
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«Reply #2 on: May 26, 2009, 01:13:30 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 26, 2009, 11:21:09 AM
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Very beautiful work....Bohot hi Khoob Aslam Ji

thnxxxxxx so much celmira ji
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«Reply #3 on: May 26, 2009, 01:49:53 PM »
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Mashallah Bohat Achche, Nice One Again Bhai,l.
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«Reply #4 on: July 15, 2009, 11:02:19 PM »
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Quote from: Azeem on May 26, 2009, 01:49:53 PM
Mashallah Bohat Achche, Nice One Again Bhai,l.

thnxx so much dear
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«Reply #5 on: July 15, 2009, 11:06:55 PM »
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Very nice and beautiful creation Aaina ji. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
excellent.
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«Reply #6 on: July 15, 2009, 11:17:10 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 15, 2009, 11:06:55 PM
Very nice and beautiful creation Aaina ji. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
excellent.

bhut bhut shukriya madhu ki aapne is adna si koshish ko saraha
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«Reply #7 on: July 17, 2009, 03:06:11 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on July 16, 2009, 02:45:11 PM
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bahot khoob Aslam ji
behatreen ghazal likhi hai aapne
bahot umda

bhut shukriya kaash
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«Reply #8 on: July 22, 2009, 10:27:15 AM »
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Quote from: aaina on May 26, 2009, 04:18:40 AM
Apni zindagi mujhay dasteyaab kar de
Ye chahatai.n mere naam intesaab kar de

Ek sawaal hu.n teri muskurahat par
Gunguna lai mujhay lajaawaab kar de

Nadi sukoon mai bheti hui achi na lage
Uthar ja isme saara paani sharaab kar de

Mhekna bhool chuki hai.n meri bahai.n
Mujhko choo le mera badan gulaab kar de

Tune aslam ko bakshi hai sifat e maahtaabi
Jal na jaau.n kahin mujhay maahtaab kar de


Wonderful Gazal dear Aslam  Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: July 22, 2009, 10:31:57 AM »
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Do chaar kadam zindagi mein saat chal ke dekh
Sab kuch bhula ke raahe-wafa mein machal ke dekh

Dunia ke bandanon mein rahe kaid tum ab tak
Rasmon ki kaid se zara baahar nikal ke dekh

Kab tak hawa mein karte rahoge mehel taamir (nirmaan karna)
Tum amal(acharan)ke maidan mein karishme-amal ke dekh

Kya lufth purani lakir peet.te rahe
Dunia ke saat-saat zara tum bi badal ke dekh

Chaho agar nijaat(chutkara)gam-e-zindagi se dost
Jo raah mein mushkile hai paav se kuchal ke dekh

Kanton pe chalne mein hai kuch ajab si maza
Kya ismein aanand hai, zara in pe bi chalke dekh..

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«Reply #10 on: July 22, 2009, 11:12:20 AM »
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Waah...Bohot Khoob Roja dear
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«Reply #11 on: August 18, 2009, 03:16:15 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 22, 2009, 10:27:15 AM
Wonderful Gazal dear Aslam  Applause Applause

thnxxxx so much roja dear
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«Reply #12 on: August 18, 2009, 03:16:55 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 22, 2009, 10:31:57 AM
Do chaar kadam zindagi mein saat chal ke dekh
Sab kuch bhula ke raahe-wafa mein machal ke dekh

Dunia ke bandanon mein rahe kaid tum ab tak
Rasmon ki kaid se zara baahar nikal ke dekh

Kab tak hawa mein karte rahoge mehel taamir (nirmaan karna)
Tum amal(acharan)ke maidan mein karishme-amal ke dekh

Kya lufth purani lakir peet.te rahe
Dunia ke saat-saat zara tum bi badal ke dekh

Chaho agar nijaat(chutkara)gam-e-zindagi se dost
Jo raah mein mushkile hai paav se kuchal ke dekh

Kanton pe chalne mein hai kuch ajab si maza
Kya ismein aanand hai, zara in pe bi chalke dekh..

 Usual Smile


bhut achay roja good work
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