Khwaab koi jal gaya....premdeep

by premdeep on May 12, 2014, 06:29:37 PM

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Khwaab koi jal gaya
dil me kuch pighal gaya

pyaar ka wo kaafila
door se nikal gaya

haanth malte reh gaye
waqt kab phisal gaya

raat der se hui
chaand pehle dhal gaya

chahaton ka bulbula
bina kahe uchal gaya

nakaab jo pehen liya
aap ko hi chal gaya

falak se jo gira tha wo
zameen pe aa sambhal gaya

nazar milayi thi abhi
pal mein kyun wo pal gaya

raat ka wo ek diya
dhunya pehen nikal gaya


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Re: Khwaab koi jal gaya....premdeep

«Reply #1 on: May 12, 2014, 06:43:21 PM »

वाह....बहुत खूब.....


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Re: Khwaab koi jal gaya....premdeep

«Reply #2 on: May 12, 2014, 07:21:20 PM »

WAAH WAAH BOHUT KHOOB
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Re: Khwaab koi jal gaya....premdeep

«Reply #3 on: May 12, 2014, 08:54:03 PM »

Khwaab koi jal gaya
dil me kuch pighal gaya Applause

pyaar ka wo kaafila
door se nikal gaya Applause

haanth malte reh gaye
waqt kab phisal gaya Applause

raat der se hui
chaand pehle dhal gaya Applause

chahaton ka bulbula
bina kahe uchal gaya Applause

nakaab jo pehen liya
aap ko hi chal gaya Applause

falak se jo gira tha wo
zameen pe aa sambhal gaya Applause

nazar milayi thi abhi
pal mein kyun wo pal gaya Applause

raat ka wo ek diya
dhunya pehen nikal gaya Applause

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Re: Khwaab koi jal gaya....premdeep

«Reply #4 on: May 12, 2014, 09:04:13 PM »

bahut khoob


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Re: Khwaab koi jal gaya....premdeep

«Reply #5 on: May 12, 2014, 11:03:44 PM »

Quote from: premdeep on May 12, 2014, 06:29:37 PM

beautiful composition,sir


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Re: Khwaab koi jal gaya....premdeep

«Reply #6 on: May 13, 2014, 04:18:02 PM »

Bahut khoob.


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Re: Khwaab koi jal gaya....premdeep

«Reply #7 on: May 13, 2014, 05:42:48 PM »

Kya Baat Hai!!! Bohat Khub!

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Re: Khwaab koi jal gaya....premdeep

«Reply #8 on: May 14, 2014, 03:08:28 PM »

bahut khub premdeepji


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Re: Khwaab koi jal gaya....premdeep

«Reply #9 on: May 22, 2014, 12:56:25 PM »

bohut hi umda peshkash waaaaaaaahhhhhhh daaaaddddddd


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Re: Khwaab koi jal gaya....premdeep

«Reply #10 on: May 26, 2014, 05:04:34 PM »


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