Khwaab koi jal gaya....premdeep

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Khwaab koi jal gaya
dil me kuch pighal gaya

pyaar ka wo kaafila
door se nikal gaya

haanth malte reh gaye
waqt kab phisal gaya

raat der se hui
chaand pehle dhal gaya

chahaton ka bulbula
bina kahe uchal gaya

nakaab jo pehen liya
aap ko hi chal gaya

falak se jo gira tha wo
zameen pe aa sambhal gaya

nazar milayi thi abhi
pal mein kyun wo pal gaya

raat ka wo ek diya
dhunya pehen nikal gaya








 
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«Reply #1 on: May 12, 2014, 06:43:21 PM »
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वाह....बहुत खूब.....
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«Reply #2 on: May 12, 2014, 07:21:20 PM »
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WAAH WAAH BOHUT KHOOB
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«Reply #3 on: May 12, 2014, 08:54:03 PM »
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Khwaab koi jal gaya
dil me kuch pighal gaya Applause Applause Applause  

pyaar ka wo kaafila
door se nikal gaya Applause Applause Applause Applause  

haanth malte reh gaye
waqt kab phisal gaya Applause Applause Applause  

raat der se hui
chaand pehle dhal gaya Applause Applause Applause  
chahaton ka bulbula
bina kahe uchal gaya Applause Applause Applause  
nakaab jo pehen liya
aap ko hi chal gaya Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  

falak se jo gira tha wo
zameen pe aa sambhal gaya Applause Applause Applause  
nazar milayi thi abhi
pal mein kyun wo pal gaya Applause Applause Applause  

raat ka wo ek diya
dhunya pehen nikal gaya  Applause Applause Applause Applause  
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«Reply #5 on: May 12, 2014, 11:03:44 PM »
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Quote from: premdeep on May 12, 2014, 06:29:37 PM
Khwaab koi jal gaya
dil me kuch pighal gaya

pyaar ka wo kaafila
door se nikal gaya

haanth malte reh gaye
waqt kab phisal gaya

raat der se hui
chaand pehle dhal gaya

chahaton ka bulbula
bina kahe uchal gaya

nakaab jo pehen liya
aap ko hi chal gaya

falak se jo gira tha wo
zameen pe aa sambhal gaya

nazar milayi thi abhi
pal mein kyun wo pal gaya

raat ka wo ek diya
dhunya pehen nikal gaya








 












beautiful composition,sir
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«Reply #6 on: May 13, 2014, 04:18:02 PM »
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Bahut khoob.
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«Reply #7 on: May 13, 2014, 05:42:48 PM »
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Kya Baat Hai!!! Bohat Khub!

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«Reply #8 on: May 14, 2014, 03:08:28 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut khub premdeepji
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