Khwaab-sey aatey hain; jaatey hain haqeeqat ban kar!:Ghazals

abdbundeli

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Unkee moujoodgii kaa ham ney bhi deykhaa hai asar!
Khwaab-sey aatey hain; jaatey hain haqeeqat ban kar!!

Deed key lamhey, masarrat sey mahak uthhtey hain;
Raat ho, din ho, dupahree ho, yaaki shaam-o-sahar!

Wo bahr-e-husn thaa, ki, husn-e-beykaraan* thaa abd**;
Jalwah-e-noor sey labreiz thee lahar pai lahar!

Na jaaney kyaa hai numaayaan uyoon mein un key:
Nazar miley bhi thhaharti nahin hai jin mein nazar?

Un ki khushboo sey labaalab hain jigar-o-dil-o-zeyhn;
Un ki har shokh adaa hai nazar mein mustahzar#!

Woh jaa raheyn hain! Deykhiye, woh jaa rahey hain chaley!!
Unhain patah hi nahin, deykhtey hain deed-ye-tar!

Jin ko har lamhey deykhney ko, ‘abd’ hai mushtaaq:
Lout jaatey hain wahee sirf do lamhey ruk kar!

* Endless glamour of beauty
**Eternal; Jaawidaan
# Totally unforgettable

- abd bundeli


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cara

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Re: Khwaab-sey aatey hain; jaatey hain haqeeqat ban kar!

«Reply #1 on: January 15, 2009, 02:18:19 PM »

adbji ----bahut hi mushkil hai aap ki ghazal ko samaj na,

kya yeh saagar ki lahere hai--kya hai.


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Asghr

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Re: Khwaab-sey aatey hain; jaatey hain haqeeqat ban kar!

«Reply #2 on: January 15, 2009, 06:00:30 PM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on January 15, 2009, 08:21:39 AM

Unkee moujoodgii kaa ham ney bhi deykhaa hai asar!
Khwaab-sey aatey hain; jaatey hain haqeeqat ban kar!!

Deed key lamhey, masarrat sey mahak uthhtey hain;
Raat ho, din ho, dupahree ho, yaaki shaam-o-sahar!

Wo bahr-e-husn thaa, ki, husn-e-beykaraan* thaa abd**;
Jalwah-e-noor sey labreiz thee lahar pai lahar!

Na jaaney kyaa hai numaayaan uyoon mein un key:
Nazar miley bhi thhaharti nahin hai jin mein nazar?

Un ki khushboo sey labaalab hain jigar-o-dil-o-zeyhn;
Un ki har shokh adaa hai nazar mein mustahzar#!

Woh jaa raheyn hain! Deykhiye, woh jaa rahey hain chaley!!
Unhain patah hi nahin, deykhtey hain deed-e-tar!

Jin ko har lamhey deykhney ko, ‘abd’ hai mushtaaq:
Lout jaatey hain wahee sirf do lamhey ruk kar!

* Endless glamour of beauty
**Eternal; Jaawidaan
# Totally unforgettable

- abd bundeli

LOVELY POETRY .ASGHR


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abdbundeli

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Re: Khwaab-sey aatey hain; jaatey hain haqeeqat ban kar!

«Reply #3 on: January 16, 2009, 03:57:12 AM »

Quote from: Asghr on January 15, 2009, 06:00:30 PM

LOVELY POETRY .ASGHR

Thanks ASGHR ji!
- abd bundeli


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salma786

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Re: Khwaab-sey aatey hain; jaatey hain haqeeqat ban kar!

«Reply #4 on: January 16, 2009, 04:06:42 AM »

Bahoot khoob abd ji Applause


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abdbundeli

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Re: Khwaab-sey aatey hain; jaatey hain haqeeqat ban kar!

«Reply #5 on: January 16, 2009, 04:27:30 AM »

Quote from: cara on January 15, 2009, 02:18:19 PM

adbji ----bahut hi mushkil hai aap ki ghazal ko samaj na,
kya yeh saagar ki lahere hai--kya hai.

cara ji!
Meyrey khyaal sey aapkaa ishaarah is sheir par hai:

Wo bahr-e-husn thaa, ki, husn-e-beykaraan* thaa abd**;
Jalwah-e-noor sey labreiz thee lahar pai lahar!

bahr-e-husn = the ocean of glamorous beauty
Jalwah-e-noor = rounaq, cheyhrey kaa aab-o-taab

It could be explained as below:

Was that an ocean of glamorous beauty or an endless ocean (an ocean which has no shores) of eternal glamorous beauty, where each wave being closely followed by another wave(and so on) was full of the glamor of beauty, right to its lips (the forward-bending top of a forward progressing wave is often called as its lip).
I hope now it will not cause you problems any more!
Thanks!
abd bundeli


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abdbundeli

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Re: Khwaab-sey aatey hain; jaatey hain haqeeqat ban kar!

«Reply #6 on: January 16, 2009, 04:29:11 AM »

Quote from: salma786 on January 16, 2009, 04:06:42 AM

Bahoot khoob abd ji Applause

Thanks a lot, salma786 ji!
- abd bundeli


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cara

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Re: Khwaab-sey aatey hain; jaatey hain haqeeqat ban kar!

«Reply #7 on: January 16, 2009, 04:55:40 AM »

thank you very much adbji,----- for explaining me in detail,
you are having very deep knowledge of writing beautiful ghazals,with beautiful words.and your writing style is also very different from others.thank you very much.


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abdbundeli

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Re: Khwaab-sey aatey hain; jaatey hain haqeeqat ban kar!

«Reply #8 on: January 16, 2009, 06:40:48 AM »

Quote from: cara on January 16, 2009, 04:55:40 AM

You're welcome cara ji! I'm happy to note that you feel so kindly about me! Thanks!
- abd bundeli


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