Khwab adhure, baat adhuri, neend hai koso door kahi

by livingbytheday on September 16, 2013, 09:04:20 PM
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Khwab adhure, baat  adhuri, neend hai koso door kahi
Geeli aankhen, paon mein baedi, wo bhi hai majboor kahi

Zakhm ko lekar jeetey rahe, na roye na cheekhe hum
Kismet ka likha humko bhi, shayad  tha manzoor kahi

Wo aa jaye, saawan aaye, mausam ki rangat ban jaaye
Uska hone ko vyaakul hai, maathe ka sindoor kahi

Pathraee aankhon se hasti, yun wo bole khamoshi se
Dil mein chubha  hua ho jaise, yaadon ka nasoor kahi

Palko mein wo shaam chupaye, raat churaa le jaati hai
Chaand ko zulf mein baandhe baithi, Hogi wo magroor kahi

Aaja apni baat suna le, mehfil, mouke sab tere hai
“Deepak” is lamhe ko thaame, waqt bhi baitha door kahi
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«Reply #1 on: September 16, 2013, 09:46:51 PM »
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waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah bahut hi khoob Deepak jee, bahut hi khoobsoorat ghazal kahi hai, maza aa gaya padh kar. DheroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kijiye meri taraf se.
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«Reply #2 on: September 16, 2013, 09:50:05 PM »
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Bahut Khoob.
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut bahut bahut khoob.. dheron daad..
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«Reply #4 on: September 17, 2013, 12:06:45 AM »
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    livingbytheday,
              Bahut umda aur bamaine ghazal hai aapki, meri daad qubool farmaiye.....................
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«Reply #5 on: September 17, 2013, 03:25:55 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Deepak ji, bahut bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne....!!!!
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«Reply #6 on: September 18, 2013, 08:40:58 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob deepak behat khoobsoorat kalaam
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«Reply #7 on: September 19, 2013, 11:07:57 AM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on September 16, 2013, 09:46:51 PM
waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah bahut hi khoob Deepak jee, bahut hi khoobsoorat ghazal kahi hai, maza aa gaya padh kar. DheroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kijiye meri taraf se.

shukriyaa iftakhar bhai, izzat afzai ke liye
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«Reply #8 on: September 19, 2013, 11:23:24 AM »
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waaah waah waah janab bohut khub
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«Reply #9 on: September 19, 2013, 01:52:41 PM »
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bahut khoob Applause
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«Reply #10 on: September 20, 2013, 12:25:05 AM »
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Bahut khoob Deepak jee
Matla behad umda hai
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«Reply #11 on: September 21, 2013, 02:02:46 AM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on September 16, 2013, 09:50:05 PM
Bahut Khoob.

thank you
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«Reply #12 on: September 21, 2013, 02:03:58 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on September 16, 2013, 10:06:58 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut bahut bahut khoob.. dheron daad..

thank you
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«Reply #13 on: September 22, 2013, 04:44:51 PM »
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Quote from: Syed Mohd Mahzar on September 17, 2013, 12:06:45 AM


 
    livingbytheday,
              Bahut umda aur bamaine ghazal hai aapki, meri daad qubool farmaiye.....................

thank you
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«Reply #14 on: September 22, 2013, 04:47:38 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on September 17, 2013, 03:25:55 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Deepak ji, bahut bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne....!!!!

thank you sir ji
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