khwab~~~ Saahil

by salil2002 on August 25, 2009, 10:48:42 AM
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jab raat taaron k aagosh main simti hogi
aur chand kankhiyo se dekh muskurayega

jab shab kehne wali hogi alvida sabse
jab suraj dastak dene k liye ghar aayega

tab tum apni aankhon main rakha khwab tod dena
warna yeh haseen khwab tujhe ummra bhar satayega

tum laut jaana haqeeqat kii duniya main
warna yeh beeta kal tujhe bahut rulaayega

zamane se toh lad loge yeh yakeen hai mujhe
par khud se ladne ka hunar tu na seekh paayega

phir yaad karna,meri baatein,mere sawalaat tujhse
mera kehna kii yeh khel tu na khel paayega

hai mohabbat badi qatil,main har waqt kehta tha
mera yeh zumla tujhe,khud se rubaru karwayega

phir jab na thame ashq tere ,laakh koshish se
tab na rokna ashq k saath tera dard bhi beh jaayega

bas karna intzaar tum oos haseen khwaab ka phir
so jaana, shayad woh khwab tumhe phir nazar aayega
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«Reply #1 on: August 25, 2009, 11:23:23 AM »
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Wah Saahil ji.....bahut behtrin ghazal likhi hai aapne.....khub piroya hai aapne alfaazon ko...khwaab ko todna aur phr se khwaab ko sjaana....khub kha aapne Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: August 25, 2009, 02:18:45 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Sahil Bhai.
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«Reply #3 on: August 25, 2009, 02:48:24 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley WAH WAH KAYA BAAT HAI SAAHIL BRO!!! GOOD JOB!!
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«Reply #4 on: August 25, 2009, 03:14:28 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Waah Waah Kya baat hai SAAHIL  Tu tho chaa gaye.. bahoot mast maane Jakkas likha hai re..Bahot hi khubsurat aur madhosh karne wali peshkash.. bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #5 on: August 25, 2009, 03:32:18 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Saahil Bhai..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Ghazal.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: August 25, 2009, 09:38:03 PM »
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bahut hi khoob sahil ji
kahan se kahan le gaya aap ghazal ko
ek nayab peshkash Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: August 25, 2009, 11:47:28 PM »
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Wah wah Saahil ji,bahut khoob,beautiful gazal.wonderful creation. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: August 26, 2009, 04:22:10 PM »
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Bohot Bohot Khoob Salil  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: August 26, 2009, 04:58:54 PM »
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achchi koshish hai





javed
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«Reply #10 on: August 27, 2009, 01:49:34 PM »
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Wah wah Bahut bahut khoob Saahil dear  Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: August 28, 2009, 06:58:16 AM »
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Wah Saahil ji.....bahut behtrin ghazal likhi hai aapne.....khub piroya hai aapne alfaazon ko...khwaab ko todna aur phr se khwaab ko sjaana....khub kha aapne Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Bahut Bahut Khoob Saahil Bhai..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Ghazal.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahut hi khoob sahil ji
kahan se kahan le gaya aap ghazal ko
ek nayab peshkash Applause Applause Applause Applause
Wah wah Saahil ji,bahut khoob,beautiful gazal.wonderful creation. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bahut bahut shukriya pooja dear...........
khwahish bhai
udit bhai
laila dear
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«Reply #12 on: August 28, 2009, 06:59:21 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Sahil Bhai.
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley WAH WAH KAYA BAAT HAI SAAHIL BRO!!! GOOD JOB!!
bahut bahut shukriya sam bhai
thank u pooja di
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«Reply #13 on: August 28, 2009, 07:01:30 AM »
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Bohot Bohot Khoob Salil  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
achchi koshish hai





javed
Wah wah Bahut bahut khoob Saahil dear  Applause Applause

thanks a lot talat di
and javed bhai pasand karne ka bahut bahut shukriya
roja dear thanks a ton
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«Reply #14 on: August 28, 2009, 07:03:05 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Waah Waah Kya baat hai SAAHIL  Tu tho chaa gaye.. bahoot mast maane Jakkas likha hai re..Bahot hi khubsurat aur madhosh karne wali peshkash.. bahoot Khoob!
sophi dear
taareef k liye bahut bahut shukriya
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