Kisee aur din, khoob sharmaaiyegaa!

by abdbundeli on January 31, 2013, 11:27:11 AM
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Hamain tark kar ab kahaan jaaiyegaa?
Jigar mein musalsal rawaan paaiyegaa!

Sadaaoun mein shaamil hai fir khush khiraamee:
Nahin aaj to kab nazar aaiyegaa?

Kinaaroun key labreyz hai aab-e-dariyah;
Safeeney pai kab rahm farmaiyegaa!

Tumhaarey liye abra aaye huye hain;
Sarey baam aa barq ban paaiyegaa?

Yeh lamhah, ‘abd’, wasl kaa hai hamaarey:
Kisee aur din, khoob sharmaaiyegaa!

          - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: January 31, 2013, 11:59:38 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: January 31, 2013, 12:03:07 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on January 31, 2013, 11:27:11 AM

Hamain tark kar ab kahaan jaaiyegaa?
Jigar mein musalsal rawaan paaiyegaa!

Sadaaoun mein shaamil hai fir khush khiraamee:
Nahin aaj to kab nazar aaiyegaa?

Kinaaroun key labreyz hai aab-e-dariyah;
Safeeney pai kab rahm farmaiyegaa!

Tumhaarey liye abra aaye huye hain;
Sarey baam aa barq ban paaiyegaa?

Yeh lamhah, ‘abd’, wasl kaa hai hamaarey:
Kisee aur din, khoob sharmaaiyegaa!

          - abd bundeli


wah wah aapka likhne ka andaz hi nirala... bahut khoob abdbundeli jee
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«Reply #3 on: January 31, 2013, 01:08:43 PM »
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Wow what a great gazal
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«Reply #4 on: January 31, 2013, 02:08:20 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: January 31, 2013, 04:37:07 PM »
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bahut khoob, abd bhai. maqte ki shokhi, Allah khair kare!
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Quote from: nandbahu on January 31, 2013, 11:59:38 AM
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Shukriyah, 'nandbahu' ji!
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Quote from: suman59 on January 31, 2013, 12:03:07 PM
wah wah aapka likhne ka andaz hi nirala... bahut khoob abdbundeli jee

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Suman ji!
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on January 31, 2013, 01:08:43 PM
Wow what a great gazal

Loads of thanks, Masoom ji!
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Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Dr. Saini ji!
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on January 31, 2013, 04:37:07 PM
bahut khoob, abd bhai. maqte ki shokhi, Allah khair kare!
Bahut-bahut shukriyah, SIDDIQUI ji! Aapkee dua hai!
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Behad hi umda kalam rahi. hamari dili mubarakbad qubool kare.
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Quote from: aqsh on February 01, 2013, 11:47:19 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Behad hi umda kalam rahi. hamari dili mubarakbad qubool kare.

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Aqsh ji!
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