Kisee aur din tumsey aakar miluungaa!

by abdbundeli on January 13, 2011, 10:32:24 AM
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Zamaaney sey nazareyn milaakar miluungaa!
Sarey bazm tumko bulaakar miluungaa!!

Bhaley hi na roushan rah-e-wasl paauun;
Andheyroun key pardey hataakar miluungaa!

Puraanaa lagey gar tumhain pairahan yeh,
To, yeh pairahan badalwaakar miluungaa!

Kayee nisbateyn mujhko gheyrey huye hain:
Habeebon sey daaman bachaakar miluungaa!

Naheen duur ab dour shahanaaiyon key;
Sabhee bulbulon ko sulaakar miluungaa!

Lagaaye hain gulbun key gulshan sarey nou;
Naye gul gulaabee bichhaakar miluungaa!

Lageygaa tumhain khouf taareekiyon sey:
Ujaaloun kee shama'a jalaakar miluungaa!

Mua'afee abhee chaahtaa huun, 'abd', fir
Kisee aur din tumsey aakar miluungaa!

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«Reply #1 on: January 13, 2011, 10:43:08 AM »
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wah...abdji kya khub likha....

jab bhi milen jaise bhi milen par milie zarur..

daad kubul karen
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«Reply #2 on: January 13, 2011, 11:37:03 AM »
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bht khoob abd ji....
specially 4th one...
supreb..
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«Reply #3 on: January 13, 2011, 11:44:40 AM »
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Quote from: manjum on January 13, 2011, 10:43:08 AM
wah...abdji kya khub likha....

jab bhi milen jaise bhi milen par milie zarur..

daad kubul karen

Shukriyah manjum ji! Zaroor miluungaa! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

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«Reply #4 on: January 13, 2011, 11:45:46 AM »
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bht khoob abd ji....
specially 4th one...
supreb..

Shukriyah 'manzil-e-ishq' ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

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«Reply #5 on: January 13, 2011, 12:03:59 PM »
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mast poem hai ABDji..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Quote from: abdbundeli on January 13, 2011, 10:32:24 AM
Zamaaney sey nazareyn milaakar miluungaa!
Sarey bazm tumko bulaakar miluungaa!!

Bhaley hi na roushan rah-e-wasl paauun;
Andheyroun key pardey hataakar miluungaa!

Puraanaa lagey gar tumhain pairahan yeh,
To, yeh pairahan badalwaakar miluungaa!

Kayee nisbateyn mujhko gheyrey huye hain:
Habeebon sey daaman bachaakar miluungaa!

Naheen duur ab dour shahanaaiyon key;
Sabhee bulbulon ko sulaakar miluungaa!

Lagaaye hain gulbun key gulshan sarey nou;
Naye gul gulaabee bichhaakar miluungaa!

Lageygaa tumhain khouf taareekiyon sey:
Ujaaloun kee shama'a jalaakar miluungaa!

Mua'afee abhee chaahtaa huun, 'abd', fir
Kisee aur din tumsey aakar miluungaa!

                           - abd bundeli
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«Reply #6 on: January 13, 2011, 01:38:59 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on January 13, 2011, 12:03:59 PM
mast poem hai ABDji..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Shukriyah 'KOYAL46' ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

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«Reply #7 on: January 15, 2011, 11:52:15 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on January 13, 2011, 10:32:24 AM
Zamaaney sey nazareyn milaakar miluungaa!
Sarey bazm tumko bulaakar miluungaa!!

Bhaley hi na roushan rah-e-wasl paauun;
Andheyroun key pardey hataakar miluungaa!

Puraanaa lagey gar tumhain pairahan yeh,
To, yeh pairahan badalwaakar miluungaa!

Kayee nisbateyn mujhko gheyrey huye hain:
Habeebon sey daaman bachaakar miluungaa!

Naheen duur ab dour shahanaaiyon key;
Sabhee bulbulon ko sulaakar miluungaa!

Lagaaye hain gulbun key gulshan sarey nou;
Naye gul gulaabee bichhaakar miluungaa!

Lageygaa tumhain khouf taareekiyon sey:
Ujaaloun kee shama'a jalaakar miluungaa!

Mua'afee abhee chaahtaa huun, 'abd', fir
Kisee aur din tumsey aakar miluungaa!

                           - abd bundeli


bahut khoob abd behtreen andaaz-e- bayan
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«Reply #8 on: January 15, 2011, 01:53:51 PM »
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Bahut Khubsurat Rachna Hai Sir Aapki Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: January 15, 2011, 02:55:13 PM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on January 15, 2011, 11:52:15 AM
bahut khoob abd behtreen andaaz-e- bayan

Shukriyah 'khamosh_aawaaz' ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

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«Reply #10 on: January 15, 2011, 02:58:15 PM »
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Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on January 15, 2011, 01:53:51 PM
Bahut Khubsurat Rachna Hai Sir Aapki Applause Applause

Bahut-bahut shukriyah Rishi ji!

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«Reply #11 on: January 16, 2011, 02:44:57 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on January 13, 2011, 10:32:24 AM
Zamaaney sey nazareyn milaakar miluungaa!
Sarey bazm tumko bulaakar miluungaa!!

Bhaley hi na roushan rah-e-wasl paauun;
Andheyroun key pardey hataakar miluungaa!

Puraanaa lagey gar tumhain pairahan yeh,
To, yeh pairahan badalwaakar miluungaa!

Kayee nisbateyn mujhko gheyrey huye hain:
Habeebon sey daaman bachaakar miluungaa!

Naheen duur ab dour shahanaaiyon key;
Sabhee bulbulon ko sulaakar miluungaa!

Lagaaye hain gulbun key gulshan sarey nou;
Naye gul gulaabee bichhaakar miluungaa!

Lageygaa tumhain khouf taareekiyon sey:
Ujaaloun kee shama'a jalaakar miluungaa!

Mua'afee abhee chaahtaa huun, 'abd', fir
Kisee aur din tumsey aakar miluungaa!

                           - abd bundeli


Wah wah simple and very very good ghazal. Daad hazir hai uncle ji.  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: January 16, 2011, 02:50:26 PM »
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Waqt tezi se chal raha hai, jeene ka kareena badal raha hai
Mausam sabhi ko chal raha hai, Saal dal raha hai

Zindagi ki kitab ka panna palat raha hai
Aage na jaane kya likha hai, saal dal raha hai

Kabhi dagmaga raha hai, kabhi sambal raha hai
Nashe mein lag raha hai, saal dal raha hai

Naye ke swagat mei9n sab lage hai, jaane wale ki kadr nahi
Yahi dekhkar chal raha hai, saal dal raha hai

Kuch khushiyan, kuch gam aur der saari Yaadein
Vohi jama-poonji dekar jaa raha hai, saal dal raha hai

Nayi umeedein, nayi sambhawanaye, aur kuch naye sangalp
Naya khwaab bi pal raha hai, saal dal raha hai

Is tamanna ke saat ki aanewala kal aaj se behtar ho
Kare milne ka wada is saal ke shuruwaat mein hi, dekho saal dal raha hai..
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«Reply #13 on: January 17, 2011, 05:56:03 AM »
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bahut khub abdji...
khub

 Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: January 17, 2011, 09:46:13 AM »
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Quote from: malli on January 16, 2011, 02:44:57 PM
Wah wah simple and very very good ghazal. Daad hazir hai uncle ji.  Clapping Smiley

Shukriyah 'Malli' ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

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