Kisey yuun khojtaa hoon mein?

by abdbundeli on February 22, 2009, 01:31:15 PM
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Tumhain jab deykhtaa hoon meim, mujhey lagtey ho pahichaaney!
Magar tum koun ho meyrey: wahee samjhey, wahee jaaney!!

Ajab yah beykhudee meyree; ajab yah beyqaraaree hai!
Ajab yah raastey meyrey; ajab yah mulk anjaaney!!

Kisey yuun khojtaa hoon mein? Kisey hai justajoo meyree?
Na jaaney kitney saaqee hain; na jaaney kitney maykhaaney?

Kisee katm-e-adam mein they jurhey rishtey, na jaaney kab?
Na jaaney kitney apney hain; na jaaney kitney beygaaney?

Idaarey hain yahaan laakhon, jahaan insaan biktey hain!
Khareedaaroun ki mahfil mein, kharhey hain laakh deewaaney!!

Gaye tum: ham ney kar lee dukhtar-e-angoor sey toubaa!
Naheen ab kaam kaa koyee; bharey hon laakh paimaaney!!

Sunaa jab sey tumhaarey noor kaa jalwah mureedoun sey;
Tabhi sey paas shama’a key phataktey naheen parwaaney!!

Qasam hai tum ko, ab aanaa naheen aagosh mein dilbar;
‘Abd’ key saath zindah hain na jaaney kitney afsaaney?

                                        - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: February 22, 2009, 04:38:17 PM »
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Garg saahab,

aap ki har Ghazal ki tarah yeh Ghazal bhi behad achchhi lagii, aur mujhe khushi hai ki mujhe sab se pahle daad dene  ka mauqa mil raha hai, to daad haazir hai qubul keejiye...Usual Smile

aur ek baat me.n aap se puuchhana chaahta huu.n, agar aap ijaazat de.n to mai.n aap ki kuchh ko Ghazalo.n ko ba-izzat aap ke naam ke saath kuchh ek forum me.n post karna chaahu.ngaa. taa'ki log aap ko paDh sake.n, (aur itni khuub-suurat Ghazal baa.nTane ke liye thodi bohat daad  to mujhe bhi mil jaayegii )to, aap ke jawaab ka intazaar rahegaa.. Usual Smile

ab chalta huu.n, aap ke jawaab ka intazaar rahega,  apna khayaal rakhiye..
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«Reply #2 on: February 22, 2009, 05:30:31 PM »
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Quote from: divyam on February 22, 2009, 04:38:17 PM
Garg saahab,
aap ki har Ghazal ki tarah yeh Ghazal bhi behad achchhi lagii, aur mujhe khushi hai ki mujhe sab se pahle daad dene  ka mauqa mil raha hai, to daad haazir hai qubul keejiye...Usual Smile

aur ek baat me.n aap se puuchhana chaahta huu.n, agar aap ijaazat de.n to mai.n aap ki kuchh ko Ghazalo.n ko ba-izzat aap ke naam ke saath kuchh ek forum me.n post karna chaahu.ngaa. taa'ki log aap ko paDh sake.n, (aur itni khuub-suurat Ghazal baa.nTane ke liye thodi bohat daad  to mujhe bhi mil jaayegii )to, aap ke jawaab ka intazaar rahegaa.. Usual Smile
ab chalta huu.n, aap ke jawaab ka intazaar rahega,  apna khayaal rakhiye..
Thanks you a lot! You're at full liberty to post them! I'll let you know more through a PM.
             - abd bundeli
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divyam
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«Reply #3 on: February 23, 2009, 07:48:52 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 22, 2009, 05:30:31 PM
Thanks you a lot! You're at full liberty to post them! I'll let you know more through a PM.
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Garg saahab,

pranaam,

aap ne ijaazat di, is ke liye tah-e-dil se shukriya..mai.n aaap ka aabhaari huu.n.....  mujhe aap ke PM ka bhii intazaar rahegaa.. apna khayaal rakhiye...
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«Reply #4 on: February 23, 2009, 12:21:02 PM »
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Quote from: divyam on February 23, 2009, 07:48:52 AM
Garg saahab,
pranaam,
aap ne ijaazat di, is ke liye tah-e-dil se shukriya..mai.n aaap ka aabhaari huu.n.....  mujhe aap ke PM ka bhii intazaar rahegaa.. apna khayaal rakhiye...
You're welcome! I'll write you today!
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«Reply #5 on: February 23, 2009, 06:24:58 PM »
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Tera kaha "ABD" koi mane ya na mane
Tu muje maan GHAYEL tujhe mane

-SG-
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«Reply #6 on: February 24, 2009, 05:53:41 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 23, 2009, 06:24:58 PM
Tera kaha "ABD" koi mane ya na mane
Tu muje maan GHAYEL tujhe mane

-SG-

Na maantaa to hijra mein na yuun ghaayal hotaa!
Na maantaa to sarey bazm na maayil hotaa!
Na maantaa to bhalaa itney faasiley par rah,
Kis tarah Sajidii Ghayel mujhey haasil hotaa? 

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«Reply #7 on: February 24, 2009, 11:27:10 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on February 24, 2009, 09:24:00 AM
waah Abd ji behad achi ghazal... Applause Applause

so wonderful n wid lots of feeling... Clapping Smiley

hume har ghazal achi lagti hai aapki...

pehle bhi aapko padhte the..great creation...

Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
             - abd bundeli
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«Reply #8 on: February 24, 2009, 02:22:54 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 22, 2009, 01:31:15 PM
Tumhain jab deykhtaa hoon meim, mujhey lagtey ho pahichaaney!
Magar tum koun ho meyrey: wahee samjhey, wahee jaaney!!

Ajab yah beykhudee meyree; ajab yah beyqaraaree hai!
Ajab yah raastey meyrey; ajab yah mulk anjaaney!!

Kisey yuun khojtaa hoon mein? Kisey hai justajoo meyree?
Na jaaney kitney saaqee hain; na jaaney kitney maykhaaney?

Kisee katm-e-adam mein they jurhey rishtey, na jaaney kab?
Na jaaney kitney apney hain; na jaaney kitney beygaaney?

Idaarey hain yahaan laakhon, jahaan insaan biktey hain!
Khareedaaroun ki mahfil mein, kharhey hain laakh deewaaney!!

Gaye tum: ham ney kar lee dukhtar-e-angoor sey toubaa!
Naheen ab kaam kaa koyee; bharey hon laakh paimaaney!!

Sunaa jab sey tumhaarey noor kaa jalwah mureedoun sey;
Tabhi sey paas shama’a key phataktey naheen parwaaney!!

Qasam hai tum ko, ab aanaa naheen aagosh mein dilbar;
‘Abd’ key saath zindah hain na jaaney kitney afsaaney?

                                        - abd bundeli


A Beautiful Creation, Abd Ji, like always...
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«Reply #9 on: February 24, 2009, 03:16:27 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 24, 2009, 02:22:54 PM
A Beautiful Creation, Abd Ji, like always...
Shukriyah Celmira ji!
It appears to me that you're elevating me much higher than what  in fact I'm!! Naturally, your evaluations do delight me a lot!
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