~~"KISI KE JAANE SE"~~by Shally.

by k.shael on June 01, 2009, 08:58:29 AM
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #15 on: June 03, 2009, 07:30:30 AM »
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wow very very nice Syednaami ji, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #16 on: June 03, 2009, 07:32:48 AM »
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Madhuwesh Sahiba, aapka bahut Shukriya...
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K Lakhian
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«Reply #17 on: June 03, 2009, 07:42:46 AM »
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Very deep..syednami ji...bahut khoob...
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syednaami
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«Reply #18 on: June 03, 2009, 08:04:51 AM »
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Lakhian sahib, aap ka tah-e-dil se shukrguzar hun...
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«Reply #19 on: June 03, 2009, 10:32:54 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on June 01, 2009, 08:58:29 AM
Ek pal na gawaya kabhi khushi pane me,
Tamam-umar gujar di, jisne gammo ko sajane me,

Mehfile lut.ti hazaar dekhi hongi dosto,
Dil-e-karar, aata hai khud hi ke lutt jaane me,

Wo insaan hi kya jo rakhe na jajbaat seene me,
Khel kar dekho, maza bahut hai roothne manane me,

Iss kadar koi kaise shatir ho sakta hai, hairat hai,
Waada khilafi, aur phir maahir hai bahana banane me,

Mein jaamzar ,nacheez aashik hoon unka aur,
Aitbaar hai unhe, ham kabil hai chand tare tod lane me,

Iss kadar na kar khud se bewafayi  Shally,
Jaan le zindagi tamam nahi ho jaati kisi ke jaane se.

Shally.

Dear Shally!
Shaayad,'Karar-e-dil' ki jagah shaayad 'Dil-e-karar' 'enter' ho gayaa hai: deykhiyegaa!
'Wichaaroun' mein achchha'taartamya' hai! Aakhiree sher zindagee ki sachchaayee ko 'optimism' kee 'shahad' chadhhaa kar bayaan kartaa 'prateet' hotaa hai!
              - abd bundeli 
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«Reply #20 on: June 03, 2009, 10:40:43 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on June 03, 2009, 10:32:54 AM
Dear Shally!
Shaayad,'Karar-e-dil' ki jagah shaayad 'Dil-e-karar' 'enter' ho gayaa hai: deykhiyegaa!
'Wichaaroun' mein achchha'taartamya' hai! Aakhiree sher zindagee ki sachchaayee ko 'optimism' kee 'shahad' chadhhaa kar bayaan kartaa 'prateet' hotaa hai!
              - abd bundeli 


Bikul sahi, Abd ji, likhne me galti ho gayi hai, Aur aakhiri sher ke baare me aapne jo likha mein usse mein poori tarah aapse sehmat hoon

Shally.
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«Reply #21 on: June 03, 2009, 11:24:34 AM »
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nhi ho jati zindagi tamam kisi k jaane se........bahut bahut khoob shally ji.
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«Reply #22 on: June 03, 2009, 12:11:52 PM »
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Wah Wah Shally Saheba Wah Kya hi nayab ghazal likhi janab !! Maqta to badi hi sacha-e- bayan karta hai ,, Likhte rahiye janab ,, Allah tumhe khush rakhe aur zahen ko iss tarah taaza rakhe !!

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«Reply #23 on: June 03, 2009, 02:01:03 PM »
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Quote from: k.shael on June 03, 2009, 10:40:43 AM
Bikul sahi, Abd ji, likhne me galti ho gayi hai, Aur aakhiri sher ke baare me aapne jo likha mein usse mein poori tarah aapse sehmat hoon

Shally.
That's like a good girl! Thanks!
                   - abd bundeli
               
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«Reply #24 on: June 03, 2009, 02:11:15 PM »
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Quote from: k.shael on June 01, 2009, 08:58:29 AM
Ek pal na gawaya kabhi khushi pane me,
Tamam-umar gujar di, jisne gammo ko sajane me,

Mehfile lut.ti hazaar dekhi hongi dosto,
Dil-e-karar, aata hai khud hi ke lutt jaane me,

Wo insaan hi kya jo rakhe na jajbaat seene me,
Khel kar dekho, maza bahut hai roothne manane me,

Iss kadar koi kaise shatir ho sakta hai, hairat hai,
Waada khilafi, aur phir maahir hai bahana banane me,

Mein jaamzar ,nacheez aashik hoon unka aur,
Aitbaar hai unhe, ham kabil hai chand tare tod lane me,

Iss kadar na kar khud se bewafayi  Shally,
Jaan le zindagi tamam nahi ho jaati kisi ke jaane se.

Shally.


Wah wah shally Wonderful Gazal likha hai tumne...  Applause Applause
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k.shael
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«Reply #25 on: June 11, 2009, 09:40:37 AM »
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Quote from: Rajbir on June 01, 2009, 09:01:05 AM
Nawab ji,

Wah ! wah ! wah !

Kya ghazal likhi hai Applause Applause Applause

Yoon he likhti raho Thumbs UP

Shukriya Nawab Ji, Aapko ghazal pasandh aayi hamari mehnat ka sila mil gaya hamko..

Shally.
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