Kisko patah hai, kab gireygaa yah darakht bhee?

by abdbundeli on July 28, 2012, 11:43:09 AM
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Aatish-b-jaan hun, shama'a kaa parwaanah banaa dey!
Us rooh-e-maahtaab kaa deewaanah banaa dey!!

Apney liye bagair teyrey kuchh na kar sakaa;
Aa, tuu hi har qayaam ko maykhaanah banaa dey!

Kisko patah hai, kab gireygaa yah darakht bhee?
Baad-e-sahar sey jhoomtaa mastaanah banaa dey!

Aagosh mein gar kuchh hai, to, wo hai kisee ki yaad;
Rab, kaash, usey uskaa aashiyaanah banaa dey!

Haazir hun teyrey jigar-o-zeyhn mein, 'abd', unhain
Meyrey liye taaumra qaidkhaanah banaa dey!

          - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: July 28, 2012, 11:45:55 AM »
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waaaaaaahhh waaaaaaahhh waaaaaahhh waaaaahh waaaaaahhh!!

bohot he umda shayri jnab Applause Applause Applause Applause

dheerooon daaad
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«Reply #2 on: July 28, 2012, 01:00:47 PM »
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Quote from: roy on July 28, 2012, 11:45:55 AM
waaaaaaahhh waaaaaaahhh waaaaaahhh waaaaahh waaaaaahhh!!

bohot he umda shayri jnab Applause Applause Applause Applause

dheerooon daaad

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'roy' ji!
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«Reply #3 on: July 28, 2012, 01:06:26 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on July 28, 2012, 11:43:09 AM
Aatish-b-jaan hun, shama'a kaa parwaanah banaa dey!
Us rooh-e-maahtaab kaa deewaanah banaa dey!!

Apney liye bagair teyrey kuchh na kar sakaa;
Aa, tuu hi har qayaam ko maykhaanah banaa dey!

Kisko patah hai, kab gireygaa yah darakht bhee?
Baad-e-sahar sey jhoomtaa mastaanah banaa dey!

Aagosh mein gar kuchh hai, to, wo hai kisee ki yaad;
Rab, kaash, usey uskaa aashiyaanah banaa dey!

Haazir hun teyrey jigar-o-zeyhn mein, 'abd', unhain
Meyrey liye taaumra qaidkhaanah banaa dey!

          - abd bundeli

waaah waahhh Sir
hats off to you
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«Reply #4 on: July 28, 2012, 03:10:20 PM »
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nice
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«Reply #5 on: July 28, 2012, 03:51:56 PM »
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Bahut khoob Sir
2nd sher..vaaah vaah.
laajavaab..
ye taaliyaa poori ghajal ke liye...  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: July 28, 2012, 04:33:00 PM »
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bahut khoob sir ji
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«Reply #7 on: July 28, 2012, 04:42:05 PM »
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bahut khub  bahut hi badhiya....... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Quote from: nirala on July 28, 2012, 01:06:26 PM
waaah waahhh Sir
hats off to you

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Nirala ji!
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Quote from: MANOJ6568 on July 28, 2012, 03:10:20 PM
nice

Thanks Manoj ji!
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Quote from: mkv on July 28, 2012, 03:51:56 PM
Bahut khoob Sir
2nd sher..vaaah vaah.
laajavaab..
ye taaliyaa poori ghajal ke liye...  Applause Applause Applause

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'mkv' ji!
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Quote from: sksaini4 on July 28, 2012, 04:33:00 PM
bahut khoob sir ji

Bahut-bahut shukriyah,Saini ji!
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Quote from: soudagar on July 28, 2012, 04:42:05 PM
bahut khub  bahut hi badhiya....... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Saudagar ji!
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«Reply #13 on: July 28, 2012, 05:24:27 PM »
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waah waah, kya baat hain, bahut khoob
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«Reply #14 on: July 28, 2012, 05:49:58 PM »
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Abd Jee Aadaab!


Kia kahne jee waaH waaH waaH... gazab ki kalaam kahi hai..
behad umdaa khayaalaat behad khoob adaaygi... Usual Smile

Har sher meiN zinda dili nazar aayi, behad khoob rahe
sabhi ashaar... Aik umdaa kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili
daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   



Quote from: abdbundeli on July 28, 2012, 11:43:09 AM
Aatish-b-jaan hun, shama'a kaa parwaanah banaa dey!
Us rooh-e-maahtaab kaa deewaanah banaa dey!!

Behad khoob matla raha janab... daad daad daad                   

Apney liye bagair teyrey kuchh na kar sakaa;
Aa, tuu hi har qayaam ko maykhaanah banaa dey!

Kia kahne jee gazab bahut khoob daad ...                   

Kisko patah hai, kab gireygaa yah darakht bhee?
Baad-e-sahar sey jhoomtaa mastaanah banaa dey!

WaaH jee waaH behad umdaa sher hai yeH
haasil e gazal hai yeH ashaar... behad khoob behad umdaa
daad daad daad.....                   

Aagosh mein gar kuchh hai, to, wo hai kisee ki yaad;
Rab, kaash, usey uskaa aashiyaanah banaa dey!

Behad khoob janab... achcha sher hai khoob khayaal daad ...                   

Haazir hun teyrey jigar-o-zeyhn mein, 'abd', unhain
Meyrey liye taaumra qaidkhaanah banaa dey!

Waah waah waaH Abd jee behad khoob ... achcha Maqta hai..
bada hi dilkash khayaal hai jee daad .. Usual Smile                   

          - abd bundeli
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