Kisko patah hai, kab gireygaa yah darakht bhee? -Panna 2:Ghazals

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«Reply #15 on: July 28, 2012, 05:56:27 PM »

just mind blowiiiiiiiiiiingg..... !!!!!

bahut umda abd sahab... Usual Smile

daad daad daad... Applause


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Re: Kisko patah hai, kab gireygaa yah darakht bhee?

«Reply #16 on: July 28, 2012, 09:46:06 PM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on July 28, 2012, 11:43:09 AM

Aatish-b-jaan hun, shama'a kaa parwaanah banaa dey!
Us rooh-e-maahtaab kaa deewaanah banaa dey!!

Apney liye bagair teyrey kuchh na kar sakaa;
Aa, tuu hi har qayaam ko maykhaanah banaa dey!

Kisko patah hai, kab gireygaa yah darakht bhee?
Baad-e-sahar sey jhoomtaa mastaanah banaa dey!

Aagosh mein gar kuchh hai, to, wo hai kisee ki yaad;
Rab, kaash, usey uskaa aashiyaanah banaa dey!

Haazir hun teyrey jigar-o-zeyhn mein, 'abd', unhain
Meyrey liye taaumra qaidkhaanah banaa dey!

- abd bundeli

veriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiii
naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice--------ABD


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suman59

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Re: Kisko patah hai, kab gireygaa yah darakht bhee?

«Reply #17 on: July 29, 2012, 12:28:58 AM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on July 28, 2012, 11:43:09 AM

Bahut bahut khoob likha aapne abd bundeli jee


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abdbundeli

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Re: Kisko patah hai, kab gireygaa yah darakht bhee?

«Reply #18 on: July 29, 2012, 06:10:54 AM »

Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on July 28, 2012, 05:56:27 PM

just mind blowiiiiiiiiiiingg..... !!!!!

bahut umda abd sahab... Usual Smile

daad daad daad... Applause

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Touhid bhai!


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abdbundeli

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Re: Kisko patah hai, kab gireygaa yah darakht bhee?

«Reply #19 on: July 29, 2012, 06:12:39 AM »

Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on July 28, 2012, 09:46:06 PM

veriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiii
naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice--------ABD

Lots of thanks, 'Khamosh' ji!


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abdbundeli

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Re: Kisko patah hai, kab gireygaa yah darakht bhee?

«Reply #20 on: July 29, 2012, 06:13:20 AM »

Quote from: suman59 on July 29, 2012, 12:28:58 AM

Bahut bahut khoob likha aapne abd bundeli jee

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Suman ji!


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abdbundeli

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Re: Kisko patah hai, kab gireygaa yah darakht bhee?

«Reply #21 on: July 29, 2012, 06:14:53 AM »

Quote from: livingbytheday on July 28, 2012, 05:24:27 PM

waah waah, kya baat hain, bahut khoob

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, janaab!


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abdbundeli

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Re: Kisko patah hai, kab gireygaa yah darakht bhee?

«Reply #22 on: July 29, 2012, 06:21:50 AM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on July 28, 2012, 05:49:58 PM

Abd Jee Aadaab!

Kia kahne jee waaH waaH waaH... gazab ki kalaam kahi hai..
behad umdaa khayaalaat behad khoob adaaygi...

Har sher meiN zinda dili nazar aayi, behad khoob rahe
sabhi ashaar... Aik umdaa kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili
daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...

Namaskaar, 'ParwaaZ' ji! Bahut-bahut-bahut shukriyah! Aap gazal mein itnee gahraayee sey 'paithhatey' hain, ki, gazal khud waah-waah karney lagey!


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