koe titli pakad leN

by janumanu on February 11, 2013, 05:20:13 AM
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Jab zamiN par chala kijiye
AasmaaN rakh liya kijiye

Kya kaha zindgi ho gayee
Jeene ka hounsla kijiye

AansuoN se likha khat hai ye
Chaandni meiN padha kijiye

dil ki sunna zaroori hai kya
aql se mashwara kijiye

dijiye dil humeN dijiye
ho bhale jo.. bhala kijiye

lag gaya aapka humse dil
jaaiye ab ..... maza kijiye

Ghar ko ghar ki tasalli rahe
aate jaate raha kijiye

Koe titli pakad leN agar
phool par rakh diya kijiye

aap humse muhabbat mein haiN
chaahiye to pata kijiye

aur shayar ye chahiye bhi kya
dad hi de diya kijiye

fikr gahraa hua kis kadar
doobiye tazruba kijiye
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«Reply #1 on: February 11, 2013, 05:35:52 AM »
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Quote from: janumanu on February 11, 2013, 05:20:13 AM
Jab zamiN par chala kijiye
AasmaaN rakh liya kijiye

Kya kaha zindgi ho gayee
Jeene ka hounsla kijiye

AansuoN se likha khat hai ye
Chaandni meiN padha kijiye

dil ki sunna zaroori hai kya
aql se mashwara kijiye

dijiye dil humeN dijiye
ho bhale jo.. bhala kijiye

lag gaya aapka humse dil
jaaiye ab ..... maza kijiye

Ghar ko ghar ki tasalli rahe
aate jaate raha kijiye

Koe titli pakad leN agar
phool par rakh diya kijiye Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

aap humse muhabbat mein haiN
chaahiye to pata kijiye

aur shayar ye chahiye bhi kya
dad hi de diya kijiye

fikr gahraa hua kis kadar
doobiye tajurba kijiye


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«Reply #2 on: February 11, 2013, 05:42:40 AM »
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waah waah marhabaa marhabaa
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«Reply #3 on: February 11, 2013, 06:09:27 AM »
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wah wah wah kya baat hai bohut khoob beshumaar daad qubool kareN is umda kalaam par
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«Reply #4 on: February 11, 2013, 06:11:00 AM »
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Wah Wah!!!! Boaht Hi Khub!!! Umda!!!

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«Reply #5 on: February 11, 2013, 06:23:45 AM »
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Bahut hi umda ghazal.
ek se ek khayaal..
kya kahne..
par is sher me chupa..khayaal
hazaaroN daad is par

Kya kaha zindgi ho gayee
Jeene ka hounsla kijiye Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: February 11, 2013, 06:33:20 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: February 11, 2013, 06:39:16 AM »
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Quote from: janumanu on February 11, 2013, 05:20:13 AM
Jab zamiN par chala kijiye
AasmaaN rakh liya kijiye

Kya kaha zindgi ho gayee
Jeene ka hounsla kijiye

AansuoN se likha khat hai ye
Chaandni meiN padha kijiye

dil ki sunna zaroori hai kya
aql se mashwara kijiye

dijiye dil humeN dijiye
ho bhale jo.. bhala kijiye

lag gaya aapka humse dil
jaaiye ab ..... maza kijiye

Ghar ko ghar ki tasalli rahe
aate jaate raha kijiye

Koe titli pakad leN agar
phool par rakh diya kijiye

aap humse muhabbat mein haiN
chaahiye to pata kijiye

aur shayar ye chahiye bhi kya
dad hi de diya kijiye

fikr gahraa hua kis kadar
doobiye tazruba kijiye

veriiiiiiii gud
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«Reply #8 on: February 11, 2013, 06:50:53 AM »
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Just Awesome. keep writing
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«Reply #9 on: February 11, 2013, 08:10:02 AM »
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gazabbbbb gazabbb aur bas gazabbb
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«Reply #10 on: February 11, 2013, 09:09:58 AM »
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Vikas Bhai Aadaab!


WaaH waaH WaaH bhai, badi achchi aur khoob kalaam rahi..
Itni chhoti bher meiN bhi gazab ki gehrai bhar dii aapne...

Sabhi ahaar khoob rahe par kuch ashaar khususan behad umdaa
rahe.. Usual Smile

Meri hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile
Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: February 11, 2013, 09:12:19 AM »
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bautiful , beautiful , beautiful .waah janumanuji , kya khubsurat ghazal kahi hai.
Padh kar maza aa gaya .  har sher bahut khoob . chhoti bahr mein  kamaal kar diya.
dheron daad hazir hai.
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«Reply #12 on: February 11, 2013, 09:21:01 AM »
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Quote from: janumanu on February 11, 2013, 05:20:13 AM
Jab zamiN par chala kijiye
AasmaaN rakh liya kijiye
main hamesha hi hawaa mein udthi hoon aur jab gussa karti hoon to aasmaan utaa leti hoon icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Kya kaha zindgi ho gayee
Jeene ka hounsla kijiye
MASHAALLAH main hamesha hausla rakhti hoon icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
AansuoN se likha khat hai ye
Chaandni meiN padha kijiye
main bahut majboor hoon aisi jagah rahti hoon jahaan chandni pahunchti hi nahin. koi aur tariqa bataao iss khat ko padhne ka icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
dil ki sunna zaroori hai kya
aql se mashwara kijiye
bahut talasha hamne per aql mujhe mili hi nahin kya karein ab Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased
dijiye dil humeN dijiye
ho bhale jo.. bhala kijiye
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lag gaya aapka humse dil
jaaiye ab ..... maza kijiye
ye kya baat hui. icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch
Ghar ko ghar ki tasalli rahe
aate jaate raha kijiye
permanent hi chali aati hoon ghar ghar lage ga . per baut saari conditions hain meri pahle poora karne ka wada karo icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Koe titli pakad leN agar
phool par rakh diya kijiye
bade khaksaar nazar aate ho ji icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
aap humse muhabbat mein haiN
chaahiye to pata kijiye
kis se pata karoon is baat ki BangHead BangHead BangHead
aur shayar ye chahiye bhi kya
dad hi de diya kijiye
wah wah wah.khush Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
fikr gahraa hua kis kadar
doobiye tazruba kijiye

bina doobe bhi tajurba hai mujhe icon_flower icon_flower


superb janu ji.............!
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«Reply #13 on: February 11, 2013, 03:35:27 PM »
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waaaah ji waaaaaaaaaaaaaj.... khooob bahut khoooooob...
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«Reply #14 on: February 11, 2013, 03:55:11 PM »
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waah boht boht khub janumanu ji wah
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