koi bhe khel khelun main (by vb):Ghazals

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Khushi koi ho logon per, hameha vaar jaata hun
Koi bhe khale khelun main , hamesha haar jaata hun

Meri manzil hay jaanay kya, samandar hay kinaray hen
Kabhi is paar jaata hun, kabhi us par jaata hun

Kisi say maangnay nikla hun kuch to vaza-daari kya?
Main kaasaa lay k hathon men, sar-e-baazaar jaata hun

Meri bachpan ki aadat hay, mohabbat say ya chaahat say
Bulaata hay koi ik baar main so baar jaata hun

Mohabbat ki shariyat men, suna hay yun nahi hota
Tumhaari jeet ho jaayay agar men haar jaata hun

Ye bhe accha hua vb, muqaam-e-Faiz na paaya
Na koo-e-yaar jata hun, na soo-e-daar jata hun

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Re: koi bhe khel khelun main (by vb)

«Reply #1 on: December 22, 2013, 02:28:12 PM »

Khushi koi ho logon per, hameha vaar jaata hun
Koi bhe khale khelun main , hamesha haar jaata hun

Meri manzil hay jaanay kya, samandar hay kinaray hen
Kabhi is paar jaata hun, kabhi us par jaata hun

Kisi say maangnay nikla hun kuch to vazah-daari kya?
Main kaasaa lay k hathon men, sar-e-baazaar jaata hun

Meri bachpan ki aadat hay, mohabbat say ya chaahat say
Bulaata hay koi ik baar main so baar jaata hun

Mohabbat ki shariyat men, suna hay yun nahi hota
Tumhaari jeet ho jaayay agar men haar jaata hun

Ye bhe accha hua vb, muqaam-e-Faiz na paaya
Na koo-e-yaar jata hun, na soo-e-daar jata hun

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wah wah wah bohut hi umda


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Re: koi bhe khel khelun main (by vb)

«Reply #2 on: December 22, 2013, 02:37:40 PM »

Meri manzil hay jaanay kya, samandar hay kinaray hen
Kabhi is paar jaata hun, kabhi us par jaata hun

Mohabbat ki shariyat men, suna hay yun nahi hota
Tumhaari jeet ho jaayay agar men haar jaata hun

WAAH WAAH VB JEE KHOOB LIKHA HAI LAJWAAB
ACHHE KHYALAAT SE LABREZ.
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Re: koi bhe khel khelun main (by vb)

«Reply #3 on: December 22, 2013, 11:23:49 PM »

waah waah bahut khoob


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Re: koi bhe khel khelun main (by vb)

«Reply #4 on: December 23, 2013, 12:37:36 AM »

padkar bahut accha laga. daad


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SURESH SANGWAN

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Re: koi bhe khel khelun main (by vb)

«Reply #5 on: December 23, 2013, 12:49:09 AM »


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Re: koi bhe khel khelun main (by vb)

«Reply #6 on: December 23, 2013, 01:32:09 AM »

Buhat shukriya... Aap sub ka....


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RAJAN KONDAL

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Re: koi bhe khel khelun main (by vb)

«Reply #7 on: December 23, 2013, 02:00:39 AM »

wha wha bhut khub


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mazHur

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Re: koi bhe khel khelun main (by vb)

«Reply #8 on: December 23, 2013, 02:01:18 PM »

Brilliant!!

However, this line needs amends
'
Ye bhe accha hua vb, muqaam-e-Faiz na paaya
Na koo-e-yaar jata hun, na soo-e-daar jata hun''

Is line mein 'Ye bhi' wazan se gir gaya he...
Is kee jagah 'Kabhi' munasib lagta he..maslan

KABHI YOON BHI HUA VB..................''

REGARDS


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Re: koi bhe khel khelun main (by vb)

«Reply #9 on: December 23, 2013, 02:02:31 PM »

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Vb ji.. kya kehne... kitni khoobsurat kalaam pesh kee hai... ekdam dil ko chhoo gayi... hazaron dili daaaaaaaaad qubool kijiyega..


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Re: koi bhe khel khelun main (by vb)

«Reply #10 on: December 23, 2013, 05:05:28 PM »

bahut khoob


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Re: koi bhe khel khelun main (by vb)

«Reply #11 on: December 23, 2013, 06:10:54 PM »

Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on December 23, 2013, 02:00:39 AM

wha wha bhut khub

shukriya aap ka...


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Re: koi bhe khel khelun main (by vb)

«Reply #12 on: December 23, 2013, 06:13:07 PM »

Quote from: mazHur on December 23, 2013, 02:01:18 PM

g... sahi... agreed

hum main post men ye change nahi kar rahay, taakay likhnay walay ki ghalati/kharabi/khaami saamnay rahay or aap ki tas'hee ki bhe pazeerai hoti rahay...

visit karnay, parhnay aur comments karnay ka....shukriyaa


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Re: koi bhe khel khelun main (by vb)

«Reply #13 on: December 23, 2013, 06:13:43 PM »

Quote from: aqsh on December 23, 2013, 02:02:31 PM

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Vb ji.. kya kehne... kitni khoobsurat kalaam pesh kee hai... ekdam dil ko chhoo gayi... hazaron dili daaaaaaaaad qubool kijiyega..

buhat shukriya... aqsh jee aap ka...


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Re: koi bhe khel khelun main (by vb)

«Reply #14 on: December 23, 2013, 06:14:58 PM »

Quote from: nandbahu on December 23, 2013, 05:05:28 PM

bahut khoob

thanx....


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