Koi puchhe mere baare me to...........

by vipul kumar on February 23, 2011, 04:00:05 PM
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Koi puchhe mere baare me to yu.n kahnaaa.....


Masiiha tha ik shaidaa_ii sa tha..
Bhari bazm me aalam-e-tanhaayi sa tha...
Na wasl tha usko na firaaq uskaa,
Ajiib dilkash tha mijaaz uskaa...

Aankho.n me aansuo.n se tasviire.n banata tha...
Lafjo.n se kaagzo.n ki taqdiire.n banata tha...
Kabhi aanchal, kabhi kaajal to kabhi rang-e-hiina,
Yu.n husn-e-jaana par tahriire.n banata tha...


Dasht-e-khwab ka baashinda,              [Dasht-e-khwab=Desert of Dreams}
Khayaalo.n ka rahnumaa tha wo...
Meri chaahato.n ka rahbar,
Meri hasrato.n ka khudaa tha wo...
Dam-e-iisa thi uski nazme.n,             [Dam-e-iisa=That gives life to dead]
Kalam me masihaa_ii rakhtaa tha...
Use dekhne waale na bhule rastaa fir kabhi,
Yu.n aankho.n me rahnumaa_ii rakhtaa tha...



Koi puchhe mere baare me to yu.n kahnaaa.....

Jo bhi mujhme tum dekhte ho, Sab mujh me aqs hai usi ka...
Ye baate.n meri sher jaisi, Ye lahjaa mera saadgi ka.....

Yu.n bhi kahnaa k haar gayaa hai ab,
Kabhi duniya jiitne nikla tha jo...
Uski hasrate.n kha gayi usi ko...
Har kadam khud hi Rahnumaa tha jo.

Wo raato.n ki syaahi sa gumnaam shayar,
Ret par khayaalo.n ki lakiire.n banata tha...
Apni umr ki sarhad se kahii.n gahraa,
Lafjo.n pe Nazmo.n ki janjiire.n banata tha........

Koi puchhe mere baare me to yu.n kahnaaa.....
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«Reply #1 on: February 23, 2011, 05:53:23 PM »
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vipul sir ---
pahle to aapko sorry kahta hu kuki mai Facebook par jada nhi jaata.uska bhi ek reason hai--issliye aapko waha nhi parh pata sad5
aapka ye Ghazal beshkimti nagma hai sir. as usual bahut khubsurat aur umda ghazal.
yahan bhi aa jaya kijiye Vipul ji.
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«Reply #2 on: February 23, 2011, 06:01:02 PM »
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OK Nirala ji. Main yahi soch raha tha. Wahan sabhi yoindians kam hi jaate hai... Actually problem ye hai k mujhe chaar jagah post karna padta hai. Kuchh din orkut par post nahi kiya to readers ke msg aane lage ki aap plz yahan post kijiye....
I ll try to manage it. Main yahan bhi post kar diya karunga....
Thanks for reading and liking the poem:D
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ANAAM
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«Reply #3 on: February 23, 2011, 06:03:48 PM »
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Good sharing.....vipulji
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vipul kumar
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«Reply #4 on: February 23, 2011, 06:10:07 PM »
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Shukriya Anaam ji......
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nirala
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«Reply #5 on: February 23, 2011, 06:25:27 PM »
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ohh aapko itni mehnat karni parti hai hmn.
lekin sach kahun ek mobile reader hone ke naate YO me parhne me bahut sahuliyat hoti hai. facebook me side se kuch word cut ho jate hain.
bas kabi kabi ek ghazal post kar dia karen
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«Reply #6 on: February 23, 2011, 06:32:19 PM »
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Koi baat nahi... Main puri koshish karunga Mera kalaam aap dosto tak pahuchaane ki....!!
Thanks
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«Reply #7 on: February 23, 2011, 07:18:17 PM »
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Aadab Janaab !

Masha AllaH aap to janaab bade gehre shayar hai...
Kafi umdaa kalaam se nawaaza hai... Dil shaad kar diyaa
janaab aapki is kalaam ne... Usual Smile

Is khubsurat kalaam par dil se sekdoN daad kabool kijiye..

Likhate rahiye...
Aate rahiye...

Khush O aabaad rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez ... Usual Smile         
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #8 on: February 23, 2011, 08:57:53 PM »
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Bahut Khub
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Sajid_Ghayel
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«Reply #9 on: February 24, 2011, 07:14:54 AM »
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Kya baat hai Vipul saheb.......ek zamane baad Yoindia par koi superb original Nazm padhi hai wah wah maza aa gaya......Yoindia ki is mehfil ko aapki bohat zarurat hai.

Bohat achcha laga aapko padhkar aur ab aage bhi aapko barabar padhne ki tamanna hai isi bahane hum bhi kuch seekh jayege aapse mere bhai......Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: February 24, 2011, 11:52:34 AM »
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Shukriya Parwaz ji, Rishi ji and Sajid ji......,
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