koi to mujhko.......sana afroz

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Koi   to mujhko hauslaaa deta,
main zamaane ko phir dikha deta.

mera dil mujhse yehi kahta hai ,
apni hasti main phir jataa deta.

dhoondhta phirta hai wo shahr e wafa,
mujhse poochey to main pataa deta.

zabt laazim ki shart thi warna,
dard aankhon se main bahaa deta.

manzil e sabr dhoondh li maine,
karb phir tera  waastaa deta.

Rab pe pukhta yaqeen gar hota!!
tujhko dariya bhi raasta deta..

'sana' jazbey jo moatber hotey,
saari deewarein main giraa deta.



 
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«Reply #1 on: December 06, 2014, 05:43:50 PM »
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Koi   to mujhko hauslaaa deta,
main zamaane ko phir dikha deta.

mera dil mujhse yehi kahta hai ,
apni hasti main phir jataa deta.

dhoondhta phirta hai wo shahr e wafa,
mujhse poochey to main pataa deta.

zabt laazim ki shart thi warna,
dard aankhon se main bahaa deta.

manzil e sabr dhoondh li maine,
karb phir tera  waastaa deta.

Rab pe pukhta yaqeen gar hota!!
aab e dariya bhi raasta deta.

'sana' jazbey jo moatber hotey,
sari deewaarein main  gira deta.



 
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«Reply #2 on: December 06, 2014, 05:45:39 PM »
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Yahaan baat muannis aur muzakkir ki aayegi,
isliye wazeh karna zaroori hai k ye main nahi mere dil kah raha hai,...
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«Reply #3 on: December 06, 2014, 06:26:53 PM »
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Rab pe pukhta yaqeen gar hota!!
aab e dariya bhi raasta deta.


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«Reply #4 on: December 06, 2014, 06:59:23 PM »
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Shukriya!!!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: December 07, 2014, 01:36:29 AM »
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waah waah waah bahut umdah, dheron daad.
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«Reply #6 on: December 07, 2014, 02:31:48 AM »
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kyaa baat hai waah waah
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«Reply #7 on: December 07, 2014, 07:56:49 AM »
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Shukriyaaaaa!!!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: December 07, 2014, 10:11:22 AM »
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very nice sana ji
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«Reply #9 on: December 07, 2014, 08:38:39 PM »
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Sana Afroz Saahibaa Aadaab ... !

Bahut khoob jee bahut umdaa ... badi achchi kalaam pesh kii hai aapne...
Behad khoob sher huye haiN sabhi ...

Hume quoted sher behad umdaa lage ... humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhte rahiye bazm meiN shirkat karte rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...




Quote from: sana Afroz on December 06, 2014, 05:31:33 PM


zabt laazim ki shart thi warna,
dard aankhon se main bahaa deta.


Rab pe pukhta yaqeen gar hota!!
mujhko dariya bhi raasta deta..



 
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«Reply #10 on: December 08, 2014, 03:49:31 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 07, 2014, 08:38:39 PM

Sana Afroz Saahibaa Aadaab ... !

Bahut khoob jee bahut umdaa ... badi achchi kalaam pesh kii hai aapne...
Behad khoob sher huye haiN sabhi ...

Hume quoted sher behad umdaa lage ... humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhte rahiye bazm meiN shirkat karte rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...





shukriyaaaa!!!!!
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«Reply #11 on: December 08, 2014, 08:30:22 AM »
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Achi ghazal hai mahutrama ...wah wah dad qubool karen ..


mujh ko darya bhi raasta deta ...is misre se baat khud shair tak mahdood ho jaati hai ...agarche lafz (mujhko ) ko tumko se badal diya jaaye to sher ka canvas wasih ho jayega ye meri zaati rai hai zaroori nahi aap muttafiq hun ...dad hazir hai qubool karen

dua go

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«Reply #12 on: December 08, 2014, 10:23:15 AM »
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Shukr
Quote from: qadeer_junaid on December 08, 2014, 08:30:22 AM
Achi ghazal hai mahutrama ...wah wah dad qubool karen ..


mujh ko darya bhi raasta deta ...is misre se baat khud shair tak mahdood ho jaati hai ...agarche lafz (mujhko ) ko tumko se badal diya jaaye to sher ka canvas wasih ho jayega ye meri zaati rai hai zaroori nahi aap muttafiq hun ...dad hazir hai qubool karen

dua go

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shukriyaaaa!!!
Infact main khud mujhko k bajaye
Quote from: qadeer_junaid on December 08, 2014, 08:30:22 AM
Achi ghazal hai mahutrama ...wah wah dad qubool karen ..


mujh ko darya bhi raasta deta ...is misre se baat khud shair tak mahdood ho jaati hai ...agarche lafz (mujhko ) ko tumko se badal diya jaaye to sher ka canvas wasih ho jayega ye meri zaati rai hai zaroori nahi aap muttafiq hun ...dad hazir hai qubool karen

dua go

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tujhko karne wali Thi lekin yahan ye modification nahin ho raha hai maine apni dairy Mein correct karliya hai...
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