~~"Koi To Mujhse Mohabbat Rakhta"~~by Shally.

by k.shael on September 01, 2009, 09:49:44 AM
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Jab apno ne na samjha mujhko kabhi to
Begano se kya chahat rakhta…

Sab ke sab nikle hai rakhne kaante chun ke
Koi to mere liye rahat rakhta…

Jaane diya mujhe gammo ki taraf roka nahi
Koi to sawalo ki rukawat rakhta…

Zindagi bhar ke andhere diye tune khuda
Ek din ki to muskurahat rakhta…

Har koi rakhta hai nafrat ka rishta Shally
Kaash Koi to mujhse mohabbat rakhta…

Shally.
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salil2002
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«Reply #1 on: September 01, 2009, 10:01:47 AM »
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bahutt bahut achche shally
khob andaaz hai yeh aapka.......jis tarah se shikayat aapne kari hai waise shayad hi ko aur karta


dil main chubhan toh sabne mehsoos kii
koi aankhon main bhi toh taravat rakhta

yaadon main toh aaj sabk maine dastak di
koi dil main bhi toh mere liye lagawat rakhta

ooth k aa gaye sab maiyyat mein meri faqeer ban k
aakhir jalsa tha koi toh kabra par sajawat rakhta
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«Reply #2 on: September 01, 2009, 10:11:06 AM »
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Wow Shally ji bahut khoob,really touching and mindblowing creation.
beautifull lines  by Saahil ji.excellent icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: September 01, 2009, 10:59:16 AM »
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bahut khoob yaar good work ji.

aaye hain sabhi wafa ki muraat bankar.
par koi toh wafa ki surat rakhta.
kharhe hain mehfil mein bhali shaurhat liye
par koi toh dil mein bhali seerat rakhta.

keep writing....
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #4 on: September 01, 2009, 11:15:19 AM »
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Bahut khoob Shally Ji

Aapki ghazal aur meri is Ghazal me kafi similarity lag rahi hai

DEKHTE RAHE KALESH UMRA BHAR BADE BADE
MIL SAKA NA HAQ HAME KABHI KAHIN BINA LADE

DOSTON KE SAR PE NASIBON NE CHHATRA-CHHAON KI
HUM GHAMON KI DHOOP ME TAPTE RAHE KHADE KHADE

DO DINON KE BAAD WOHI HUMSE LADNE AA GAYE
AAJ JINKE VASTE INSAAF KI KHATIR LADE

UNCHA UTHKE HUMKO HIKARAT SE DEKHATE RAHE
JO HAMARE KANDHON PE RAKH PAAON SIDIYAN CHADHE

ZINDAGI BASAR HUI SANGHARSH HI SANGHARSH ME
MAUT KE LIYE KAHIN SANGHARSH NA KARNA PADE

SARVESH RASTOGI
sarveshrastogi1960@yahoo.co.uk
Phone 9810391523
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k.shael
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«Reply #5 on: September 02, 2009, 04:53:08 AM »
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Quote from: -Saahil- on September 01, 2009, 10:01:47 AM
bahutt bahut achche shally
khob andaaz hai yeh aapka.......jis tarah se shikayat aapne kari hai waise shayad hi ko aur karta


dil main chubhan toh sabne mehsoos kii
koi aankhon main bhi toh taravat rakhta

yaadon main toh aaj sabk maine dastak di
koi dil main bhi toh mere liye lagawat rakhta

ooth k aa gaye sab maiyyat mein meri faqeer ban k
aakhir jalsa tha koi toh kabra par sajawat rakhta


Shukriya Salil Aur Bahut Khoob Likha hai aapne, zald hi reply dene ki koshish hogi..

Shally.
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #6 on: September 02, 2009, 06:06:38 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Sarvesh ji beautiful gazal. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: September 02, 2009, 06:08:30 AM »
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Waah... waah... Shally ji bohot umda, yun hi likhte rahiye..
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                         -Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #8 on: September 02, 2009, 06:11:02 AM »
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Quote from: rawattanha on September 01, 2009, 10:59:16 AM
bahut khoob yaar good work ji.

aaye hain sabhi wafa ki muraat bankar.
par koi toh wafa ki surat rakhta.
kharhe hain mehfil mein bhali shaurhat liye
par koi toh dil mein bhali seerat rakhta.

keep writing....

Khoob..  Applause
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«Reply #9 on: September 02, 2009, 06:15:50 AM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on September 01, 2009, 11:15:19 AM

DEKHTE RAHE KALESH UMRA BHAR BADE BADE
MIL SAKA NA HAQ HAME KABHI KAHIN BINA LADE

DOSTON KE SAR PE NASIBON NE CHHATRA-CHHAON KI
HUM GHAMON KI DHOOP ME TAPTE RAHE KHADE KHADE

DO DINON KE BAAD WOHI HUMSE LADNE AA GAYE
AAJ JINKE VASTE INSAAF KI KHATIR LADE

UNCHA UTHKE HUMKO HIKARAT SE DEKHATE RAHE
JO HAMARE KANDHON PE RAKH PAAON SIDIYAN CHADHE

ZINDAGI BASAR HUI SANGHARSH HI SANGHARSH ME
MAUT KE LIYE KAHIN SANGHARSH NA KARNA PADE


Bohot hi khoob rastogi ji.  Applause
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«Reply #10 on: September 02, 2009, 06:17:34 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on September 01, 2009, 09:49:44 AM


Jab apno ne na samjha mujhko kabhi to
Begano se kya chahat rakhta…

Sab ke sab nikle hai rakhne kaante chun ke
Koi to mere liye rahat rakhta…

Jaane diya mujhe gammo ki taraf roka nahi
Koi to sawalo ki rukawat rakhta…

Zindagi bhar ke andhere diye tune khuda
Ek din ki to muskurahat rakhta…

Har koi rakhta hai nafrat ka rishta Shally
Kaash Koi to mujhse mohabbat rakhta…

Shally.
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KYA BAAT HAI  SHALLY JI.........

KOI TOH APNA, APNE DIL MEIN MERE LIYE THODI JAGAH RAKHTA,
TOH YEH DIL KAHIN, IDAR UDAR NAHIN BATAKTA.


HAR EK NE DIYE HAI MERE DAMAN MEIN KANTE HI KANTE,
TOH HAM KIS SEY, PHOOLON KI UMEED RAKHTA.

SAB NE TOH DAKELAA HAI MUJHE, GAMMON KE ANDHERON MAIN,
KIS KE NAAM KI BANDHUN PAYAL, APNE PAIRON MAIN.

ZAMAANA TOH BAHUT,MUJHE RULAAKE RAKHTA,
KHUDA BHI KAHAN MUJHE, KHUSHIYAN DETA.

HAR EK KI RAAH MEIN, NAFRAT HI NAFRAT MILI HAI "SHALLY",
KOI EK TOH RAKHTA MOHABBAT KI, MERE LIYE IK CHOTI SI GALLY.
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«Reply #11 on: September 02, 2009, 06:29:36 AM »
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BAHUT BADHIYA Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: September 02, 2009, 07:19:18 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on September 02, 2009, 06:06:38 AM
Wah wah bahut khoob Sarvesh ji beautiful gazal. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut bahut shukriya Madhuwesh Ji
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«Reply #13 on: September 02, 2009, 07:21:44 AM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on September 02, 2009, 06:15:50 AM

Bohot hi khoob rastogi ji.  Applause

Bahut bahut shukriya Randeri Saheb
Aur aapke likhe ashar bhi khub kamaal ke hain,
wah wah, tabiet khush ho gai
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