~~"Koi To Mujhse Mohabbat Rakhta"~~by Shally.

by k.shael on September 01, 2009, 09:49:44 AM
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«Reply #15 on: September 02, 2009, 11:42:59 AM »
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bahut hi badhya shally n all

bahut hi acha sama bandha ahi
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«Reply #16 on: September 02, 2009, 11:48:58 AM »
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main raah-e-zeest me hu gerd-e-kaarwan ki trah
sapaat  mera mukadder hai aasmaan ki trah

fareb ek sa ai dost hum ne khaya hai
tera fasana bhi hai meri daastaan ki trah
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«Reply #17 on: September 02, 2009, 04:57:19 PM »
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Bahut khoob shally dear, Saahil dear, Caraji, Sayyid bhaiya and Rastogil ji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #18 on: September 02, 2009, 04:57:56 PM »
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Quote from: samnoj on September 02, 2009, 11:48:58 AM
main raah-e-zeest me hu gerd-e-kaarwan ki trah
sapaat  mera mukadder hai aasmaan ki trah

fareb ek sa ai dost hum ne khaya hai
tera fasana bhi hai meri daastaan ki trah

Nice lines Sam
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«Reply #19 on: September 03, 2009, 08:02:47 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on September 01, 2009, 10:11:06 AM
Wow Shally ji bahut khoob,really touching and mindblowing creation.
beautifull lines  by Saahil ji.excellent icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shukriya Madhuwesh Dear..

Shally.
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«Reply #20 on: September 03, 2009, 08:11:31 AM »
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Shikayat Bhi Aur Mohabbat Bhi...

Bahut bahut Khoob Shally!!! Dil Ko Chuu Jaane Wali Ghazal Likhi Hai Shally Aapne..

Bahut bahut Khooob Shally!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #21 on: September 03, 2009, 08:24:02 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Sayyid ji,Cara ji, Sanmoj ji,beautiful gazal. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #22 on: September 03, 2009, 11:24:25 AM »
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Quote from: rawattanha on September 01, 2009, 10:59:16 AM
bahut khoob yaar good work ji.

aaye hain sabhi wafa ki muraat bankar.
par koi toh wafa ki surat rakhta.
kharhe hain mehfil mein bhali shaurhat liye
par koi toh dil mein bhali seerat rakhta.

keep writing....


Shukriya Rawat Ji, Aur bahut khoob likha aapne bhi..

Shally.
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«Reply #23 on: September 03, 2009, 11:26:05 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Shally, Salil, Rawat Ji, Cara Ji, Sarvesh Ji & Sam  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #24 on: September 03, 2009, 02:30:42 PM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on September 02, 2009, 07:21:44 AM
Bahut bahut shukriya Randeri Saheb
Aur aapke likhe ashar bhi khub kamaal ke hain,
wah wah, tabiet khush ho gai

Meherbaan rastogi ji aap ki nawazish ka tah-e-dil se shukarguzaar hun.
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«Reply #25 on: September 03, 2009, 02:32:22 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on September 02, 2009, 04:57:19 PM
Bahut khoob shally dear, Saahil dear, Caraji, Sayyid bhaiya and Rastogil ji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shukriya Roja behen..... khush rahiye.
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«Reply #26 on: September 03, 2009, 02:33:53 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on September 03, 2009, 08:24:02 AM
Wah wah bahut khoob Sayyid ji,Cara ji, Sanmoj ji,beautiful gazal. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

madhuwesh ji main aap ka mashkoor hun... Usual Smile
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