Koi Yaad Phir se rola na de ( Qadeertoopchi )

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Yaarane Bazm aadab o tasleemat meri eak adna khawish ap sub ki aara ki muntazir..



Teri yaad me Jo hai jal raha , ussi deep ko tu hawa Na de
 Mere haq me maut hi mang le, mujhe zindagi ki dua Na de


   yun hi kaat di hai yeh zindagi, teri justuju me aye jaane jaan
   Kabhi ho bhi ja tu ayaan sanam, mujhe berukhi ki saza na de


  Tujhe kya Bataoo.N ke kiss tarah, liya hijraton ka ye faisla
   Mujhe Rok mat tu watan mere, mera zabt aansu baha na de


   Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
   Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de


  Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe fir bhi koi khabar nahi
  Yun nikal na ghar se tu  bekhabar,  tera husn bijli gira na de


  Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me ,  unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
  Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de


 Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
 Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de


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«Reply #1 on: June 09, 2011, 01:10:48 PM »
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Waah..Waah Junaid Sahab kya ghazal kahee hai
tabeeyat khush ho gayee.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #2 on: June 09, 2011, 04:37:52 PM »
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azeezam raqeeb sahab aadab ,,

Ghazal pe apka tabsera faqr ka baaic bana ,, apse sahebe sukhan ki dad mere liye tabaruk hai ,, apko ghazal pasand go ke meri mahenat rang laai ,, tashakkur ke liye alfazon se qaasir hon ...allah apko umr-e-khizr ata kare...raqeeb sahab agar app mujhe abdulQadeer kahen to mujhe ziyada khushi hogi ,, umid hai ap khiyal nahi karenge .. allah apko khush rakhe ..


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«Reply #3 on: June 09, 2011, 06:54:42 PM »
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Yaarane Bazm aadab o tasleemat meri eak adna khawish ap sub ki aara ki muntazir..



Teri yaad me Jo hai jal raha , ussi deep ko tu hawa Na de
 Mere haq me maut hi mang le, mujhe zindagi ki dua Na de


   yun hi kaat di hai yeh zindagi, teri justuju me aye jaane jaan
   Kabhi ho bhi ja tu ayaan sanam, mujhe berukhi ki saza na de


  Tujhe kya Bataoo.N ke kiss tarah, liya hijraton ka ye faisla
   Mujhe Rok mat tu watan mere, mera zabt aansu baha na de


   Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
   Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de


  Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe fir bhi koi khabar nahi
  Yun nikal na ghar se tu  bekhabar,  tera husn bijli gira na de


  Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me ,  unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
  Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de


 Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
 Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de


Qadeertoopchi


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«Reply #4 on: June 09, 2011, 07:14:12 PM »
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Yaarane Bazm aadab o tasleemat meri eak adna khawish ap sub ki aara ki muntazir..



Teri yaad me Jo hai jal raha , ussi deep ko tu hawa Na de
 Mere haq me maut hi mang le, mujhe zindagi ki dua Na de


   yun hi kaat di hai yeh zindagi, teri justuju me aye jaane jaan
   Kabhi ho bhi ja tu ayaan sanam, mujhe berukhi ki saza na de


  Tujhe kya Bataoo.N ke kiss tarah, liya hijraton ka ye faisla
   Mujhe Rok mat tu watan mere, mera zabt aansu baha na de


   Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
   Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de


  Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe fir bhi koi khabar nahi
  Yun nikal na ghar se tu  bekhabar,  tera husn bijli gira na de


  Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me ,  unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
  Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de


 Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
 Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de


Qadeertoopchi


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«Reply #5 on: June 09, 2011, 07:40:20 PM »
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NICE
Yaarane Bazm aadab o tasleemat meri eak adna khawish ap sub ki aara ki muntazir..



Teri yaad me Jo hai jal raha , ussi deep ko tu hawa Na de
 Mere haq me maut hi mang le, mujhe zindagi ki dua Na de


   yun hi kaat di hai yeh zindagi, teri justuju me aye jaane jaan
   Kabhi ho bhi ja tu ayaan sanam, mujhe berukhi ki saza na de


  Tujhe kya Bataoo.N ke kiss tarah, liya hijraton ka ye faisla
   Mujhe Rok mat tu watan mere, mera zabt aansu baha na de


   Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
   Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de


  Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe fir bhi koi khabar nahi
  Yun nikal na ghar se tu  bekhabar,  tera husn bijli gira na de


  Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me ,  unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
  Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de


 Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
 Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de


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«Reply #6 on: June 09, 2011, 07:53:52 PM »
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Qadeer Sahaab Aadaab O tasleemat!


LilaaH ! kia kahne aapke ahsaas O khayaal aur umdaa bayaani ke...
Humne jab aapki yeH kalaam padhi thi tab hi hum aapki is kalaam se
behad mutasir huye the... Usual Smile Is tarhaa khub gazal kahi hai aapne ke
kia kaheN lafz dar lafz Gulaam Ali sahaab ne padhi huyi Gazal " Kabhi
Aah Lab Pe Machal Gayi, Kabhi Ankh Se Dhal Gaye " par aate par aapne
Is gazal ko jo zameen ataa ki hai aur ahsaas O khayaal bakhshe hai..
Waqai bahut jydaa umdaa aur dilkash hai.. Usual Smile

Hum shayad kareeb aik saal pahele aapki is gazal se ruberu huye the..
aur aaj bhi Aapki is umdaa dilkash dilfareb purasar gazal ke chaNd zaheN meiN Ghumte hai... Usual Smile Baaz dafa hi aise dilkash aur umdaa kalaam rahte hai
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Hum aapki is kalaam ki tareef to nahi kar sakte bus dil se daad O mubarakbad
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«Reply #7 on: June 10, 2011, 06:28:10 AM »
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aadab adil sahab ,,

tashakkir hajji mashkoor ,, allah apko do jahan ki barkaton se malamaal kare ..khush rahe.N ...

dua go

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«Reply #8 on: June 10, 2011, 06:33:03 AM »
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Janab Qadeer Saheb,Ghazal parh ke tabiat khush ho gaii.Eik bahut rythmic lekin mushkil beh'r mein aap ka khoobsurat kalaam dil ko chhoo gaya.Har shei.r behad hasee.n. Dil se daad nikalti hai.Bus yehi dua hai ki 'Allah kare zor e bayaan aur ziyadah'. FHSiddiqui
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«Reply #9 on: June 10, 2011, 09:30:13 AM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoobsoorat aur Umda Ghazal Likhi hai.. Bahoot Khoob @ Applause Applause Applause

Sophi Sahibah aadab ,,

Eak arse baad apki dad naseeb howi ,, apna baaic-e-massarat hai ,,,yo india ki brudwar shaqsiyat ki dad mere liye tabaruk hai ,,,allah apko khush rakhe ..

dua go

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«Reply #10 on: June 10, 2011, 01:37:46 PM »
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Yaarane Bazm aadab o tasleemat meri eak adna khawish ap sub ki aara ki muntazir..



Teri yaad me Jo hai jal raha , ussi deep ko tu hawa Na de
 Mere haq me maut hi mang le, mujhe zindagi ki dua Na de


   yun hi kaat di hai yeh zindagi, teri justuju me aye jaane jaan
   Kabhi ho bhi ja tu ayaan sanam, mujhe berukhi ki saza na de


  Tujhe kya Bataoo.N ke kiss tarah, liya hijraton ka ye faisla
   Mujhe Rok mat tu watan mere, mera zabt aansu baha na de


   Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
   Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de


  Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe fir bhi koi khabar nahi
  Yun nikal na ghar se tu  bekhabar,  tera husn bijli gira na de


  Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me ,  unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
  Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de


 Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
 Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de


Qadeertoopchi
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Bahut Bahut Khoobsurat Khayaalaat Pesh Kiye HaiN Aapne ... Ek Purasar Aur Purkashish Ghazal ... Dil Se Mubaaraqbaad Qubuul KareN ... aise hi aate rahen aur likhte rahen aage bhi ... !

khush rahen ...
duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #11 on: June 22, 2011, 10:37:30 AM »
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aadab manoj sahab ,,

badi nawazish huzoor jo apne ghazal ki bharpoor pazirai ki ..allah apko khush rakhe ..

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«Reply #12 on: June 22, 2011, 10:45:18 AM »
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Yaarane Bazm aadab o tasleemat meri eak adna khawish ap sub ki aara ki muntazir..



Teri yaad me Jo hai jal raha , ussi deep ko tu hawa Na de
 Mere haq me maut hi mang le, mujhe zindagi ki dua Na de


   yun hi kaat di hai yeh zindagi, teri justuju me aye jaane jaan
   Kabhi ho bhi ja tu ayaan sanam, mujhe berukhi ki saza na de


  Tujhe kya Bataoo.N ke kiss tarah, liya hijraton ka ye faisla
   Mujhe Rok mat tu watan mere, mera zabt aansu baha na de


   Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
   Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de


  Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe fir bhi koi khabar nahi
  Yun nikal na ghar se tu  bekhabar,  tera husn bijli gira na de


  Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me ,  unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
  Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de


 Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
 Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de


Qadeertoopchi


Qadeer Bhai, Aapke Kalaam Ki Tareef mein mera Har Lafz Bezubaan Hai..Kya Kehne Bhai..har Ek A'shaar Apne hisse Ki Gehrai Aur Khoobsurti Sajaaye Hue Hai..Lajawaaab!!!

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