KOI ZAKHM NAYA DO HUMKO ........................ HASAN

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Apni . Dehleez . pe . thodi . si . jagah . do . humko
" Baith . jaayeinge . jahaa.n . chaahe . bitha . do . humko "*
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Jo . na . utre . woh . nasha . aaj . kara. do . humko
Apni . Makhmoor . nigaaho.n . se . pila . do . humko
.
Jag . ke . kaati . hai.n . Shab-e-Hijr . ki . ghadiyaa.n . hum . ne
Khwaab-e-Rangee.n . koi . abb . Baad-e-saba . do . humko
.
Bhool . jaayei.n . na . kahee.n . teri . inayaat . ko . hum
Jaan-e-Jaa.n . aao . koi . zakhm . naya . do . humko
.
Qaid-e-Aghosh . ya . Zulfo.n . ki . aseeri . de . do
Mujrim-e-Ishq . hoo.n , Achhi . si . saza . do . humko
.
Jo . bhi . kah . do . hamei.n . Manzoor . hai , lekin . Jaanaa.n
Bhool . se . bhi . na . yeh . kahna . ki . bhula . do . humko
.
Umr . bhar . Chain . ki . ek . Shab . bhi . mayassar . na . hui
Maut . aao . abadi . neend . sula . do . humko
.
Chaand . to . dikhta . nahi.n . Eid . na . tal . jaaye . 'Hasan'
Ya . Khuda ! Eik . jhalak . uski . dikha . do . Humko

- HASAN . SHAMSI -


* Tarahi Ghazal / Misra-e-Tarah
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«Reply #1 on: August 27, 2014, 07:47:23 AM »
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Jag . ke . kaati . hai.n . Shab-e-Hijr . ki . ghadiyaa.n . hum . ne
Khwaab-e-Rangee.n . koi . abb . Baad-e-saba . do . humko
.
Qaid-e-Aghosh . ya . Zulfo.n . ki . aseeri . de . do
Mujrim-e-Ishq . hoo.n , Achhi . si . saza . do . humko

Bahut umdah ghazal hui hai Sir..kya kahne
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«Reply #2 on: August 27, 2014, 08:13:48 AM »
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Waaaaah waaaaaah ..... bahut khoob... Hasan Sahib... maza aa
gaya....padhkar....aur is she'r ke to kya kahney....

Qaid-e-Aghosh . ya . Zulfo.n . ki . aseeri . de . do
Mujrim-e-Ishq . hoo.n , Achhi . si . saza . do . humko.

bahut kubarak ..... Raqeeb Lucknowi

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«Reply #3 on: August 27, 2014, 09:16:02 AM »
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वाह वाह वाह !!
बहुत खूब ग़ज़ल हुई है!!
Applause Applause Applause Applause
बहुत बहुत मुबारकबाद
RAU iz Due
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«Reply #4 on: August 27, 2014, 09:49:24 AM »
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waaah  waaaahhhh waaaaahhhhh.......

bahut khub hasan sahab
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«Reply #5 on: August 27, 2014, 12:35:16 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Hasan Sahab. Dheron Daad. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: August 27, 2014, 02:32:56 PM »
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Jag . ke . kaati . hai.n . Shab-e-Hijr . ki . ghadiyaa.n . hum . ne
Khwaab-e-Rangee.n . koi . abb . Baad-e-saba . do . humko
.
Qaid-e-Aghosh . ya . Zulfo.n . ki . aseeri . de . do
Mujrim-e-Ishq . hoo.n , Achhi . si . saza . do . humko

Bahut umdah ghazal hui hai Sir..kya kahne
Shukrguzar hoon Chiragh saheb ki aap ne Ghazal pasand ki ayr housla afzai ki . Bahut duaaein.
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«Reply #7 on: August 27, 2014, 03:02:31 PM »
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Apni . Dehleez . pe . thodi . si . jagah . do . humko
" Baith . jaayeinge . jahaa.n . chaahe . bitha . do . humko "*
.
Jo . na . utre . woh . nasha . aaj . kara. do . humko
Apni . Makhmoor . nigaaho.n . se . pila . do . humko
.
Jag . ke . kaati . hai.n . Shab-e-Hijr . ki . ghadiyaa.n . hum . ne
Khwaab-e-Rangee.n . koi . abb . Baad-e-saba . do . humko
.
Bhool . jaayei.n . na . kahee.n . teri . inayaat . ko . hum
Jaan-e-Jaa.n . aao . koi . zakhm . naya . do . humko
.
Qaid-e-Aghosh . ya . Zulfo.n . ki . aseeri . de . do
Mujrim-e-Ishq . hoo.n , Achhi . si . saza . do . humko
.
Jo . bhi . kah . do . hamei.n . Manzoor . hai , lekin . Jaanaa.n
Bhool . se . bhi . na . yeh . kahna . ki . bhula . do . humko
.
Umr . bhar . Chain . ki . ek . Shab . bhi . mayassar . na . hui
Maut . aao . abadi . neend . sula . do . humko
.
Chaand . to . dikhta . nahi.n . Eid . na . tal . jaaye . 'Hasan'
Ya . Khuda ! Eik . jhalak . uski . dikha . do . Humko

- HASAN . SHAMSI -


* Tarahi Ghazal / Misra-e-Tarah


nice,sir
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«Reply #8 on: August 27, 2014, 03:03:33 PM »
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Rau Haazir hai Sir

वाह वाह वाह !!
बहुत खूब ग़ज़ल हुई है!!
Applause Applause Applause Applause
बहुत बहुत मुबारकबाद
RAU iz Due
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«Reply #9 on: August 28, 2014, 12:14:59 AM »
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bahut khoobsurat Janaab, dheron daad.
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bahut hi khoobsoorat peshkash dheron daad ek rau qubool karein
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«Reply #11 on: August 28, 2014, 04:07:47 AM »
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वाह....वाह....वाह....

Bhool . jaayei.n . na . kahee.n . teri . inayaat . ko . hum
Jaan-e-Jaa.n . aao . koi . zakhm . naya . do . humko

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Apni . Dehleez . pe . thodi . si . jagah . do . humko
" Baith . jaayeinge . jahaa.n . chaahe . bitha . do . humko "*
.
Jo . na . utre . woh . nasha . aaj . kara. do . humko
Apni . Makhmoor . nigaaho.n . se . pila . do . humko
.
Jag . ke . kaati . hai.n . Shab-e-Hijr . ki . ghadiyaa.n . hum . ne
Khwaab-e-Rangee.n . koi . abb . Baad-e-saba . do . humko
.
Bhool . jaayei.n . na . kahee.n . teri . inayaat . ko . hum
Jaan-e-Jaa.n . aao . koi . zakhm . naya . do . humko
.
Qaid-e-Aghosh . ya . Zulfo.n . ki . aseeri . de . do
Mujrim-e-Ishq . hoo.n , Achhi . si . saza . do . humko
.
Jo . bhi . kah . do . hamei.n . Manzoor . hai , lekin . Jaanaa.n
Bhool . se . bhi . na . yeh . kahna . ki . bhula . do . humko
.
Umr . bhar . Chain . ki . ek . Shab . bhi . mayassar . na . hui
Maut . aao . abadi . neend . sula . do . humko
.
Chaand . to . dikhta . nahi.n . Eid . na . tal . jaaye . 'Hasan'
Ya . Khuda ! Eik . jhalak . uski . dikha . do . Humko

- HASAN . SHAMSI -


* Tarahi Ghazal / Misra-e-Tarah

वाह....वाह....वाह....

Bhool . jaayei.n . na . kahee.n . teri . inayaat . ko . hum
Jaan-e-Jaa.n . aao . koi . zakhm . naya . do . humko

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