KOI ZAKHM NAYA DO HUMKO ........................ HASAN

by F.H.SIDDIQUI on August 27, 2014, 06:25:14 AM
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«Reply #15 on: August 28, 2014, 02:02:12 PM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on August 27, 2014, 08:13:48 AM
Waaaaah waaaaaah ..... bahut khoob... Hasan Sahib... maza aa
gaya....padhkar....aur is she'r ke to kya kahney....

Qaid-e-Aghosh . ya . Zulfo.n . ki . aseeri . de . do
Mujrim-e-Ishq . hoo.n , Achhi . si . saza . do . humko.
, bahut bahut
bahut kubarak ..... Raqeeb Lucknowi


Shukria , bahut bahut shukria Satish ji . Kafi arse baad aapki tashreefawari hui . Khushi  hui . khubsurat ghazal bhi parh ne ko mili . Nai Nai ghazal on se nawazte rahye. Khush rahye.
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«Reply #16 on: August 28, 2014, 06:17:38 PM »
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Quote from: NakulG on August 27, 2014, 09:16:02 AM
वाह वाह वाह !!
बहुत खूब ग़ज़ल हुई है!!
Applause Applause Applause Applause
बहुत बहुत मुबारकबाद
RAU iz Due
Shukria Nakul ji.  Khush rahye.
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«Reply #17 on: August 29, 2014, 04:16:45 AM »
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Quote from: mann.mann on August 27, 2014, 09:49:24 AM
waaah  waaaahhhh waaaaahhhhh.......

bahut khub hasan sahab
Thanks Mann ji . God bless you.
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«Reply #18 on: August 30, 2014, 08:35:38 AM »
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Waah !!! Baakamaal purjamaal ghazal rahi Hassan sahab !!! Saare aashaar hi itne khoobsurat the ki koshish karne par bhi khasoosee daad ke liye chand aashaar ka ka intekhaab naheen kar paaya ....to har sher aur har misre par aap ko dheron daad aur bahaut si mubaarakbaad !!!!!!!
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«Reply #19 on: August 30, 2014, 03:51:20 PM »
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Quote from: Rajigujral on August 27, 2014, 12:35:16 PM
Bahut Khoob Hasan Sahab. Dheron Daad. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut bahut shukria Rajigujral ji
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«Reply #20 on: August 31, 2014, 10:21:13 AM »
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Hasan Sir itni haisiyat nahi hamari ki aapki is mukammal ghazal ke liye kuch kah sakun...
Khoobsurat se bhi khoobsurat ghazal ...
Behtareen.........
Lajawaab....
RAU ke saath Dheron Daad Sir...
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«Reply #21 on: August 31, 2014, 05:20:57 PM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on August 27, 2014, 03:02:31 PM
nice,sir
Thanks Marhoom Bahayat ji .
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«Reply #22 on: September 01, 2014, 01:50:37 PM »
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Quote from: NakulG on August 27, 2014, 03:03:33 PM
Rau Haazir hai Sir

Shukria Nakul ji
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«Reply #23 on: September 20, 2014, 03:15:10 PM »
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 Thankyou ! Thankyou !
Quote from: surindarn on August 28, 2014, 12:14:59 AM
bahut khoobsurat Janaab, dheron daad.
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thank a lot
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«Reply #24 on: September 21, 2014, 04:06:51 AM »
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Quote from: abhiraaj22 on August 28, 2014, 03:53:00 AM
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bahut hi khoobsoorat peshkash dheron daad ek rau qubool karein
shukria abhiraj ji ki aap ne ghaal pasand ki aur housla afai ki
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«Reply #25 on: September 22, 2014, 07:03:59 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on August 27, 2014, 06:25:14 AM

Apni . Dehleez . pe . thodi . si . jagah . do . humko
" Baith . jaayeinge . jahaa.n . chaahe . bitha . do . humko "*
.
Jo . na . utre . woh . nasha . aaj . kara. do . humko
Apni . Makhmoor . nigaaho.n . se . pila . do . humko
.
Jag . ke . kaati . hai.n . Shab-e-Hijr . ki . ghadiyaa.n . hum . ne
Khwaab-e-Rangee.n . koi . abb . Baad-e-saba . do . humko
.
Bhool . jaayei.n . na . kahee.n . teri . inayaat . ko . hum
Jaan-e-Jaa.n . aao . koi . zakhm . naya . do . humko
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Qaid-e-Aghosh . ya . Zulfo.n . ki . aseeri . de . do
Mujrim-e-Ishq . hoo.n , Achhi . si . saza . do . humko
.
Jo . bhi . kah . do . hamei.n . Manzoor . hai , lekin . Jaanaa.n
Bhool . se . bhi . na . yeh . kahna . ki . bhula . do . humko
.
Umr . bhar . Chain . ki . ek . Shab . bhi . mayassar . na . hui
Maut . aao . abadi . neend . sula . do . humko
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Chaand . to . dikhta . nahi.n . Eid . na . tal . jaaye . 'Hasan'
Ya . Khuda ! Eik . jhalak . uski . dikha . do . Humko

- HASAN . SHAMSI -

* Tarahi Ghazal / Misra-e-Tarah

behtereeN ghazal hasan g,............. bohat bohat c daad
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«Reply #26 on: September 25, 2014, 06:30:07 AM »
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GHAZAL:A CORRECTION :- Ghazal ke 5 th sher mein lafz HOON use hua hai jo radeef HUMKO se mel nahi khata . HOOn ki jagah HAIn hona chaahye . Choonki modify karne ka option ab expire ho chuka hai , Qadeer Junaid saheb ke shukriya ke sath  yahan notify kar raha hoon , jinhon ne PM k zariye ye ghalti point out ki .
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«Reply #27 on: September 28, 2014, 04:28:55 AM »
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Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on August 28, 2014, 04:07:47 AM
वाह....वाह....वाह....

Bhool . jaayei.n . na . kahee.n . teri . inayaat . ko . hum
Jaan-e-Jaa.n . aao . koi . zakhm . naya . do . humko

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Amit ji , Lots of thanks . aapko ghazal pasand aayi , meri khush qismati .
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«Reply #28 on: October 07, 2014, 08:21:10 AM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab ... !

Badi hi khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam kahi hai jee ... behad umdaa ashaar huye haiN ...
Is laa jawaab kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye ...


Likhate rahiye ... bazm ko aise khoobsurat kalaamoN se roshan karte rahiye ...
Shaad O Aabaad rahiye ...

Khuda Hafez ...
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«Reply #29 on: October 12, 2014, 08:13:57 AM »
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