Koun manega meri aankhon mein jalta hain paani

by livingbytheday on July 11, 2012, 05:33:45 PM
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Tej kadmo se doudhta rehta hain,chalta hain paani
Koun manega meri aankhon mein jalta hain paani

Yeh kiske jikr se aaya hain sehraa main sailaab
Aaj meri aankhon mein nahi behelta hain paani

Koun sa dard hain, ki zara zara si baaton mein
Aankhon se subah shaam nikalta hain paani

Khara pan odhkar palko se utarta hain hurdum
Jaane koun se talaab mein palta hain paani

Sabr ka baandh liye, halaato se ladta hain magar
yaadon ke panno pe aksar pigalta hain paani

Palko pe aa jaaye toh shor nahi karne paaye
Dard  kitna bhi ho khamosh nigalta hain paani

Kuch toh hoga dhoka sa meri aankhon mein “Deepak”
Log kehtey hain ki bewajah hi nikalta hain paani
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«Reply #1 on: July 12, 2012, 03:25:47 AM »
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bahut khoob deepak ji dheron dad
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«Reply #2 on: July 12, 2012, 11:48:35 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on July 12, 2012, 03:25:47 AM
bahut khoob deepak ji dheron dad

thank you sir
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«Reply #3 on: July 12, 2012, 05:30:20 PM »
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Khoobsurat peshkash Deepak jee
Bahut umda
Maqta behad khoob raha
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«Reply #4 on: July 13, 2012, 03:49:07 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on July 12, 2012, 05:30:20 PM
Khoobsurat peshkash Deepak jee
Bahut umda
Maqta behad khoob raha

thank you sir
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«Reply #5 on: July 14, 2012, 04:53:38 PM »
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bahut khoob jee
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«Reply #6 on: July 14, 2012, 05:09:37 PM »
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boht khub deepak ji
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«Reply #7 on: July 15, 2012, 03:45:26 AM »
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bahut khoob jee

shukriyaa sumanji
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Quote from: saahill on July 14, 2012, 05:09:37 PM
boht khub deepak ji

thank you saahil ji
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