KOYEE KINARE LE CHALE.............................MKV

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Ab to munsif bhi pareshaN haal mera kya karey
Aashiqi kee de saza ya chhor de yuN hi mujhe

Meri fard-e-jurm ki tahreer aakhir hai kahaN
Ark peshani pe hai farmaan aakhir kya karey

Shama ka maqsad juda hai log chaahe kuch kaheN
Roop badle laakh isne aaj bhi ghar ghar jaley

Nakhuda ne bhi kinara kar liya kashtee se ab
Ab maiN huN majhdhaar meN koyee kinare le chale

Ho musarrat ya ho gham, fikr-e-qanaat wasf hai
Aalm-e-maanee huaa, imaan-o-deeN haasil tere

MuddatoN ki tishnagee maykhana le aayee ‘Chiragh’
MaykashoN ke beech baitha jitna chaahe tuu piye


Musarrat - Happiness
fikr-e-qanaat - satisfaction
wasf - character, quality
aalm-e-maanee - spiritual
Nakhuda - sailor
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«Reply #1 on: May 24, 2013, 09:01:23 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on May 24, 2013, 08:43:08 PM
Ab to munsif bhi pareshaN haal mera kya karey
Aashiqi kee de saza ya chor de yuN hi mujhe
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Meri fard-e-jurm ki tahreer aakhir hai kahaN
Ark peshani pe hai farmaan aakhir kya karey
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Shama ka maqsad juda hai log chaahe kuch kaheN
Roop badle laakh isne aaj bhi ghar ghar jaley
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Nakhuda ne bhi kinara kar liya kashtee se ab
Ab maiN huN majhdhaar meN koyee kinare le chale
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Ho musarrat ya ho gham, fikre-qanaat wasf hai
Aalme-maanee huaa, imaan-o-deeN haasil tere

MuddatoN ki tishnagee maykhana le aayee ‘Chiragh’
MaykashoN ke beech baitha jitna chaahe tuu piye


Mukesh bhai, aap to ghazab dhaa rahe haiN aajkal. Ye aapki lagaataar doosri ghazal hai jispe maiN soch meiN pad gaya ki kaise taa'reef karuN. Ek se badh kar ek she'r aur kya andaaz hai kehne ka. Laajwaaaaab aur bemissaaaaaaaaal. Meri dheroN mubarakbaad aur ek Rau bhi qubool kareiN meri taraf se.
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«Reply #2 on: May 24, 2013, 09:20:20 PM »
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Awesome mukesh ji. har sher khoob hai kiski tareef karoon aur kise chhod doon. bas tareef ke liye alfaaz nahi mil rahe. bahut bahut mubarak ho aapko.
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«Reply #3 on: May 24, 2013, 10:03:37 PM »
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WAAH WAAH WAAH MUKESH JI...
BAHUT BAHUT BAHUT UMDAA.. BAHUT KHOOB... Usual Smile

Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: May 24, 2013, 10:42:54 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on May 24, 2013, 08:43:08 PM
Ab to munsif bhi pareshaN haal mera kya karey
Aashiqi kee de saza ya chor de yuN hi mujhe

Meri fard-e-jurm ki tahreer aakhir hai kahaN
Ark peshani pe hai farmaan aakhir kya karey

Shama ka maqsad juda hai log chaahe kuch kaheN
Roop badle laakh isne aaj bhi ghar ghar jaley

Nakhuda ne bhi kinara kar liya kashtee se ab
Ab maiN huN majhdhaar meN koyee kinare le chale

Ho musarrat ya ho gham, fikre-qanaat wasf hai
Aalme-maanee huaa, imaan-o-deeN haasil tere

MuddatoN ki tishnagee maykhana le aayee ‘Chiragh’
MaykashoN ke beech baitha jitna chaahe tuu piye



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Bahut Bahut Khooob Mukesh Ji..Bahut Hi khoobsurat Ghazal..

Aur Har Ashaar Mein Gehrai Nazar Aayi..
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«Reply #5 on: May 24, 2013, 10:50:53 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on May 24, 2013, 08:43:08 PM
Ab to munsif bhi pareshaN haal mera kya karey
Aashiqi kee de saza ya chhor de yuN hi mujhe

Meri fard-e-jurm ki tahreer aakhir hai kahaN
Ark peshani pe hai farmaan aakhir kya karey

Shama ka maqsad juda hai log chaahe kuch kaheN
Roop badle laakh isne aaj bhi ghar ghar jaley

Nakhuda ne bhi kinara kar liya kashtee se ab
Ab maiN huN majhdhaar meN koyee kinare le chale

Ho musarrat ya ho gham, fikr-e-qanaat wasf hai
Aalm-e-maanee huaa, imaan-o-deeN haasil tere

MuddatoN ki tishnagee maykhana le aayee ‘Chiragh’
MaykashoN ke beech baitha jitna chaahe tuu piye



with rau to this gr8888888888888888 ghazal,sir
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«Reply #6 on: May 24, 2013, 10:56:34 PM »
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Bahaut khoob Mukesh ji ... Dheron daad
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«Reply #7 on: May 24, 2013, 11:35:15 PM »
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Mukesh ji, Kya kahoon . I am really stunned - ye sanjeeda kalaam ,
ye Khaalis Urdu ghazal ki zubaan , ye  khubsurat andaaz e bayaan .
I will just  say  'Hats off'  &  'Keep it up' . Lots  and lots  of
blessings .
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«Reply #8 on: May 25, 2013, 12:24:41 AM »
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Its Simply Superb.......
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«Reply #9 on: May 25, 2013, 01:32:54 AM »
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waa waa mkv ji ,........bohat bohat c daad,..........
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«Reply #10 on: May 25, 2013, 10:07:04 AM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on May 24, 2013, 09:01:23 PM

Mukesh bhai, aap to ghazab dhaa rahe haiN aajkal. Ye aapki lagaataar doosri ghazal hai jispe maiN soch meiN pad gaya ki kaise taa'reef karuN. Ek se badh kar ek she'r aur kya andaaz hai kehne ka. Laajwaaaaab aur bemissaaaaaaaaal. Meri dheroN mubarakbaad aur ek Rau bhi qubool kareiN meri taraf se.
Shukriya iftakhar bhai..
aapki purzor, intehaai taareef ne dil ko ghazab ka sukoon diya hi.
aapse guzarish hai ki mistakes ko bhi point out karte rahe..
khush rahiye
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«Reply #11 on: May 25, 2013, 01:22:31 PM »
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Mukesh Ji,

Waaah bahut khoob...din pratidin
aapke kalaam men nikhaar aata dekhkar
bahut achchha lagta hai...

Dili mubaarakbaad aur bhavishya ke
liye shubhkaamnaayen....

Raqeeb
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«Reply #12 on: May 25, 2013, 02:07:59 PM »
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dir ji behtareen, shayad aapki padhi sabse ahchi ghazal lagi ye mujhe, waise bhi gair muraddaf ghazaleN mujhe thodi jyada pasand haiN, kyuNki unme rawaangi laane me thodi mushkil hoti hai, par aapne bakhoobi nibhaaya hai ise, U made my day... Rau banta hai par sorry abhi available nahiN hai.... umeed karta huN aap apne kalam i roshani se yuNhi mehfil ko roshan karte raheNge...
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«Reply #13 on: May 25, 2013, 03:57:33 PM »
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Awesome   mukesh  bhai .....  Very   nice   ghazal ...
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«Reply #14 on: May 25, 2013, 04:46:38 PM »
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MKV Jee Aadaab...!


WaaH waaH waaH janab waaH kya kahne behad khooob aur behad umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne... Bade hi gehre aur pur asar ashaaroN se sajaya aapne is kalaam ko... Usual Smile


Har ashaar qabil e tareef hai janab... gazab ki gehrai aur dilfareb andaaz e bayaaN raha aapka... Usual Smile


Is umdaa kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile
Likhate rahiye.... aur aise hi umdaa kalaamoN se bazm ko roshan karte rahiye... Usual Smile

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile




Quote from: mkv on May 24, 2013, 08:43:08 PM
Ab to munsif bhi pareshaN haal mera kya karey
Aashiqi kee de saza ya chhor de yuN hi mujhe


WaaH bahut umdaa Matla kaha hai janab daad daad daad...


Meri fard-e-jurm ki tahreer aakhir hai kahaN
Ark peshani pe hai farmaan aakhir kya karey


Bahut khoob achcha sher hai daad...


Shama ka maqsad juda hai log chaahe kuch kaheN
Roop badle laakh isne aaj bhi ghar ghar jaley


Bahut umdaa janab bahut khoob... Kafi khayaaloN ke ghode daudaye haiN is dafa Usual Smile


Nakhuda ne bhi kinara kar liya kashtee se ab
Ab maiN huN majhdhaar meN koyee kinare le chale


Bahut khoob...


Ho musarrat ya ho gham, fikr-e-qanaat wasf hai
Aalm-e-maanee huaa, imaan-o-deeN haasil tere


Achcha sher hai janab daad...


MuddatoN ki tishnagee maykhana le aayee ‘Chiragh’
MaykashoN ke beech baitha jitna chaahe tuu piye


Bahut khoob achcha maqta hai daad....




Musarrat - Happiness
fikr-e-qanaat - satisfaction
wasf - character, quality
aalm-e-maanee - spiritual
Nakhuda - sailor
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