Kuch Kamzor The Umar Bhar Mere Bhi Kadam "Khwaish"

by khwaish on July 24, 2011, 01:04:50 PM
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Kuch Chirago Ko Bhujaya Inn Andhiyon Ne
To Kuch Chirag Inn Aandhiyon Mein Aur Jal Gaye

  Mujhe Gham Naa Tha Uski Judai Ka Kabhi!!!
Par Jab Dekha usse Ashq Aankhon Se Dhal Gaye

  Uss Shaks Ke Bahut Se Ehsaan Hai Mujhpar!!!
Par Ehsaan Jatane Se Rishto Ke Maayne Badal Gaye

Mitti Ka Putla Hi Hai Insaan Aur Kuch Nahi!!!
Chand Jazbaat Se Insaan Ke Mann Behal Gaye

Kuch kamzor The Umar Bhar Mere Bhi kadam!!!
Aur Kuch Raaste Bhi Bas Yuhi  Badal Gaye

"Khwaish" Patharo Ki Maar Se Jo Girre,Girre Reh Gaye
 Uthkar Jo Chalna Seekhe Woh Sambhal Gaye.....!!!

                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: July 24, 2011, 01:51:50 PM »
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khwaishji aapki to baat hi nirali hai.likhne ka andaaz bhi aisa hai ki vinod dua ki seedhi baat se kam nahin.
first two lines are excellent.
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«Reply #2 on: July 24, 2011, 05:38:37 PM »
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Khuch raaste aise huye ki raahe badal gayi
Baat khuch bhi na thi, phr bhi baat bigad gayi

Girte huye ko yakeen tha kisi k usse thaamne ka
Jab gir gaya to mehsoos hua ke sabki nazre badal gayi

hamesha ki tarah bahut khoob likha hai aapne...behad kamaal ...Sahi kha suresh ji ne...aapka andaaz sach mein nirala hai...
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«Reply #3 on: July 25, 2011, 02:05:54 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on July 24, 2011, 01:04:50 PM

Kuch kamzor The Umar Bhar Mere Bhi kadam!!!
Aur Kuch Raaste Bhi Bas Yuhi  Badal Gaye

"Khwaish" Patharo Ki Maar Se Jo Girre,Girre Reh Gaye
 Uthkar Jo Chalna Seekhe Woh Sambhal Gaye.....!!!

Kaafi behtareen lagi.
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«Reply #4 on: July 25, 2011, 03:28:47 AM »
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Pehli do lines sabse khoob rahi Khwaish dost..
Kya baat hai..Zindagi ki haqeeqaton ko darshati,
apki yeh nazm bhi dil choo gayi..
Bahaut khoob..
Applause Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #5 on: July 25, 2011, 06:13:25 AM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on July 24, 2011, 01:51:50 PM
khwaishji aapki to baat hi nirali hai.likhne ka andaaz bhi aisa hai ki vinod dua ki seedhi baat se kam nahin.
first two lines are excellent.
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Hahaha..Aapke Comments Bhi Humesha nirale Hi hote Hai Sureshji..

Thankyou Soooooooooooooooooo Much!!! Vinod Dua Ki Seedhi Baat Ka To Pata Nahi Par Haan Likhne Ka Andaaz Mera Bada Seedha-Saada Hi Hoga happy9

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«Reply #6 on: July 25, 2011, 06:33:59 AM »
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Khawahish Jee Aadaab!

Bade khoob khayaal pesh kiye hai janab..
Ashaar kafi gehre kahe hai ....

Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe , daad daad daad Usual Smile
Likhate rahiye....
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
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Quote from: khwaish on July 24, 2011, 01:04:50 PM


Mitti Ka Putla Hi Hai Insaan Aur Kuch Nahi!!!
Chand Jazbaton Se Insaan Ke Mann Behal Gaye

Kuch kamzor The Umar Bhar Mere Bhi kadam!!!
Aur Kuch Raaste Bhi Bas Yuhi  Badal Gaye

"Khwaish" Patharo Ki Maar Se Jo Girre,Girre Reh Gaye
 Uthkar Jo Chalna Seekhe Woh Sambhal Gaye.....!!!

                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

This are realy good ....
Keep it Up... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #7 on: July 25, 2011, 07:58:13 AM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on July 24, 2011, 05:38:37 PM
Khuch raaste aise huye ki raahe badal gayi
Baat khuch bhi na thi, phr bhi baat bigad gayi

Girte huye ko yakeen tha kisi k usse thaamne ka
Jab gir gaya to mehsoos hua ke sabki nazre badal gayi

hamesha ki tarah bahut khoob likha hai aapne...behad kamaal ...Sahi kha suresh ji ne...aapka andaaz sach mein nirala hai...

Ohoo!!!! Thankyou Sooooooooo Much Pooja For those Kind Words..Aur madam Ji, Aapka Yahan Aana kaise Ho gaya???Aapka Tehhhh Dil Se Shukriya.. Aur Sach mein Aapne Bahutttttt Khooob Likha pooja..Par Afsos iss Baat ka hai ke Aajkal Sirf Jisne Thread Shuroo Kiya Hai, Log  Uska Likha padhte Hai..Yeh Shayad naya Style Yoindia ka..Khair..Chaliye Aapka Jawaab Dete hai..

Hota Hai Aksar yeh Rishto Ke,
 maayne Badal jaane ke Baad

Kuch Baaki nahi Rehta Zindagi Mein
Apno Se Ruth Jaane ke Baad

Yeh Aaj ka Daur hai Koi Bhala Zamaana Nahi
Baatein Kaha Sulajhti Hai Bigad Jaane Ke Baad

Woh Jab Girra Koi Aas-Paas Naa Tha!!
Hota Hai Aksar Aisa, Apno Se Door jaane Ke Baad

"Khwaish" Gham ka mausam Bhi bahut Ajeeb Hai!!!
Ashq Tapak padhta Hai Aksar Muskurane Ke Baad
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«Reply #8 on: July 25, 2011, 08:07:52 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on July 24, 2011, 01:04:50 PM
Kuch Chirago Ko Bhujaya Inn Andhiyon Ne
To Kuch Chirag Inn Aandhiyon Mein Aur Jal Gaye

  Mujhe Gham Naa Tha Uski Judai Ka Kabhi!!!
Par Jab Dekha usse Ashq Aankhon Se Dhal Gaye

  Uss Shaks Ke Bahut Se Ehsaan Hai Mujhpar!!!
Par Ehsaan Jatane Se Rishto Ke Maayne Badal Gaye

Mitti Ka Putla Hi Hai Insaan Aur Kuch Nahi!!!
Chand Jazbaton Se Insaan Ke Mann Behal Gaye

Kuch kamzor The Umar Bhar Mere Bhi kadam!!!
Aur Kuch Raaste Bhi Bas Yuhi  Badal Gaye

"Khwaish" Patharo Ki Maar Se Jo Girre,Girre Reh Gaye
 Uthkar Jo Chalna Seekhe Woh Sambhal Gaye.....!!!

                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


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«Reply #9 on: July 25, 2011, 11:05:27 AM »
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Quote from: Navin Verma on July 25, 2011, 02:05:54 AM
Kaafi behtareen lagi.

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«Reply #10 on: July 25, 2011, 11:12:07 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on July 24, 2011, 01:04:50 PM
Kuch Chirago Ko Bhujaya Inn Andhiyon Ne
To Kuch Chirag Inn Aandhiyon Mein Aur Jal Gaye

  Mujhe Gham Naa Tha Uski Judai Ka Kabhi!!!
Par Jab Dekha usse Ashq Aankhon Se Dhal Gaye

  Uss Shaks Ke Bahut Se Ehsaan Hai Mujhpar!!!
Par Ehsaan Jatane Se Rishto Ke Maayne Badal Gaye

Mitti Ka Putla Hi Hai Insaan Aur Kuch Nahi!!!
Chand Jazbaton Se Insaan Ke Mann Behal Gaye

Kuch kamzor The Umar Bhar Mere Bhi kadam!!!
Aur Kuch Raaste Bhi Bas Yuhi  Badal Gaye

"Khwaish" Patharo Ki Maar Se Jo Girre,Girre Reh Gaye
 Uthkar Jo Chalna Seekhe Woh Sambhal Gaye.....!!!

                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


mujhe thaamne to badhe the kuch haanth lakin...!!!!
naa jaane hua kya unke khyaal badal gaye.....!!!!!


bahut khoob , bahut umda,very nice

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«Reply #11 on: July 25, 2011, 11:19:43 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on July 25, 2011, 03:28:47 AM
Pehli do lines sabse khoob rahi Khwaish dost..
Kya baat hai..Zindagi ki haqeeqaton ko darshati,
apki yeh nazm bhi dil choo gayi..
Bahaut khoob..
Applause Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!

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«Reply #12 on: July 25, 2011, 12:44:34 PM »
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bht hi umda peshkash khwaish ji.....
Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe.....
Very very nice....
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«Reply #13 on: July 25, 2011, 12:48:22 PM »
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mast mastam rachna....Kittu ji
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