Kuchh aur pilaa, saaqiyah, paanee key peistar!

by abdbundeli on March 21, 2012, 06:14:08 AM
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Kuchh aur pilaa, saaqiyah, paanee key peistar!
Dam bhar hi jilaa mousam-e-faanee key peistar!!

Murdah banaa huaa hun, shaam dhhal chukee hai ab;
So jaaun na beywaqt, kahaanee key peistar!

Aazaad kar, khumon mein qaid may ko, meyhrbaan!
Laachaar mua'azzin ki fugaanee key peistar!!

Mouzuun hai zaahidon key liye sharbat-e-kousar;
Peenee hai hamain jilleysubhaanee key peistar!

Naaseyh ki takreer kaa baazaar garm hai:
Utrey na nashah, khaam bayaanee key peistar!

Haathon sey abhi door hai paimaanah-e-labreyz:
Rab, kuchh na ho sougaat-e-kayaanee key peistar!

Ruk jaa lamhey key waasitey, ay meyree qazah, aaj;
Jeenaa hai mujhey shafaq-e-suhaanee key peistar!

Khushboo-e-khuld, aatish-e-tar, deed-e-saaqiyah!
Mushtaaq hun us cheez puraanee key peistar!!

Yaadon mein meyri aaj bhi hai khaak-e-rawaan zard;
Gumsum rahaa hun dour-e-jawaanee key peistar!

Muttahidah anaasir hain abhi, isliye, 'abd',
Jee luun lamhey kuchheik rawaanee key peistar!!

                  - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: March 21, 2012, 06:22:15 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: March 21, 2012, 10:03:28 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on March 21, 2012, 06:22:15 AM
Applause Applause Applause bahut khoob

Bahut-bahut shurriyah, Saini ji!
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«Reply #3 on: March 21, 2012, 11:11:29 AM »
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Abd Sahaab Aadaab!



Janab bade khoob kalaamoN se bazm ko nawaaz raheN
hai... Usual Smile kafi achchi kalaam rahi... sabhi ashaar
khoob rahe sahaab... Usual Smile


Hume khususi yeH ashaar behad khoob lage... Usual Smile
HUmari dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile




Naaseyh ki takreer kaa baazaar garm hai:
Utrey na nashah, khaam bayaanee key peistar!

Khushboo-e-khuld, aatish-e-tar, deed-e-saaqiyah!
Mushtaaq hun us cheez puraanee key peistar!!

Yaadon mein meyri aaj bhi hai khaak-e-rawaan zard;
Gumsum rahaa hun dour-e-jawaanee key peistar!
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«Reply #4 on: March 21, 2012, 11:42:46 AM »
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bahut khoob,janab.
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«Reply #5 on: March 21, 2012, 01:56:45 PM »
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behad umda ghazal Sirji--
bilkul hum bhi aajkal baht khus hain aapki ghazlon ko padh kar--
bas issi tarah khus hone ka mauka dete rahen aap Usual Smile
khus rahen
muskurate rahen
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«Reply #6 on: March 21, 2012, 04:17:08 PM »
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bahut khoob,... Usual Smile

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: March 22, 2012, 03:55:00 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on March 21, 2012, 11:11:29 AM
Abd Sahaab Aadaab!



Janab bade khoob kalaamoN se bazm ko nawaaz raheN
hai... Usual Smile kafi achchi kalaam rahi... sabhi ashaar
khoob rahe sahaab... Usual Smile

Hume khususi yeH ashaar behad khoob lage... Usual Smile
HUmari dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile




Naaseyh ki takreer kaa baazaar garm hai:
Utrey na nashah, khaam bayaanee key peistar!

Khushboo-e-khuld, aatish-e-tar, deed-e-saaqiyah!
Mushtaaq hun us cheez puraanee key peistar!!

Yaadon mein meyri aaj bhi hai khaak-e-rawaan zard;
Gumsum rahaa hun dour-e-jawaanee key peistar!


Bahut-bahut shukriyah, ParwaaZ ji!
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«Reply #8 on: March 22, 2012, 03:56:02 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on March 21, 2012, 11:42:46 AM
bahut khoob,janab.

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Siddiqui ji!
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«Reply #9 on: March 22, 2012, 03:57:12 AM »
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Quote from: sarfira on March 21, 2012, 01:56:45 PM
behad umda ghazal Sirji--
bilkul hum bhi aajkal baht khus hain aapki ghazlon ko padh kar--
bas issi tarah khus hone ka mauka dete rahen aap Usual Smile
khus rahen
muskurate rahen

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'sarfira' ji!
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«Reply #10 on: March 22, 2012, 03:58:00 AM »
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on March 21, 2012, 04:17:08 PM
bahut khoob,... Usual Smile

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Touhid ji!
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