Kuchh chhupaatee huyee Rooh sharmaa gayee!

by abdbundeli on February 03, 2013, 03:33:30 PM
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Muskuraaye wo, mahfil mein Eid aa gayee!
Roshanee jagmagaatee mazeed aa gayee!

Jis lamhey hamney unkee sadaayen suneen,
Us lamhey hamko auqaat bharmaa gayee!

Ham kisey kyaa bataatey anaasir huye?
Barq paakar naye abra lahraa gayee!

Har taraf zindagee gungunaaney lagee;
Unkey aaney sey har saans garmaa gayee!

Baad-e-mashriq liye khushbuoun kee lahar,
Daaman-e-reyshmee unkaa mahkaa gayee!

Ham huye is tarah aamney-saamney;
Kuchh chhupaatee huyee Rooh sharmaa gayee!

Un ney daalee nazar jis taraf bhi, 'abd',
Us taraf yuun lagaa rooh-e-deed aa gayee!!

                    - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: February 03, 2013, 06:22:05 PM »
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Abd Sahaab Aadaab!


Behad khoobsurat aur umdaa ahsaasoN bhari kalaam rahi janab..
sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe...

humari dheroN daad O mubbbarakbad kabul kijiye...


woH aaye mehfil meiN ke roshani chaa gayi
Aisa bana mahol jaise chaaNd raat aa gayi                   

Likhate rhaiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...                   
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«Reply #2 on: February 04, 2013, 01:22:03 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: February 04, 2013, 01:45:19 AM »
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waah waah Abd sir

pta nhi hume kya ho jata hai aapki ghazal padhkr
ek roohani duniya me kho jate hain hum--

thanx for this ghazal sirji
hats off
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«Reply #4 on: February 04, 2013, 03:33:06 AM »
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wah wah wah kya baat hai umda ghazal hai daaad qubool kareN
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«Reply #5 on: February 04, 2013, 04:10:44 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: February 04, 2013, 05:06:12 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
superb composition abd bundeli jee
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«Reply #7 on: February 04, 2013, 07:18:24 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on February 03, 2013, 06:22:05 PM
Abd Sahaab Aadaab!

Behad khoobsurat aur umdaa ahsaasoN bhari kalaam rahi janab..
sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe...

humari dheroN daad O mubbbarakbad kabul kijiye...


woH aaye mehfil meiN ke roshani chaa gayi
Aisa bana mahol jaise chaaNd raat aa gayi                   

Likhate rhaiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...                   

Namaskaar, ParwaaZ ji! Bahut-bahut-bahut shukryah!
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Quote from: nandbahu on February 04, 2013, 01:22:03 AM
bahut khoob

Shukriyah, 'nandbahu' ji!
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«Reply #9 on: February 04, 2013, 07:21:11 AM »
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Quote from: sarfira on February 04, 2013, 01:45:19 AM
waah waah Abd sir

pta nhi hume kya ho jata hai aapki ghazal padhkr
ek roohani duniya me kho jate hain hum--

thanx for this ghazal sirji
hats off

Loads of thanks, 'sarfira' ji!
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«Reply #10 on: February 04, 2013, 07:26:03 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 03, 2013, 03:33:30 PM
Muskuraaye wo, mahfil mein Eid aa gayee!
Roshanee jagmagaatee mazeed aa gayee!

Jis lamhey hamney unkee sadaayen suneen,
Us lamhey hamko auqaat bharmaa gayee!

Ham kisey kyaa bataatey anaasir huye?
Barq paakar naye abra lahraa gayee!

Har taraf zindagee gungunaaney lagee;
Unkey aaney sey har saans garmaa gayee!

Baad-e-mashriq liye khushbuoun kee lahar,
Daaman-e-reyshmee unkaa mahkaa gayee!

Ham huye is tarah aamney-saamney;
Kuchh chhupaatee huyee Rooh sharmaa gayee!

Un ney daalee nazar jis taraf bhi, 'abd',
Us taraf yuun lagaa rooh-e-deed aa gayee!!

                    - abd bundeli

waah waah bohat oomda magar khubsurat ghazal ,.........bohat c daad,.......
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Quote from: Aarish on February 04, 2013, 03:33:06 AM
wah wah wah kya baat hai umda ghazal hai daaad qubool kareN

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Aarish ji!
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Quote from: sksaini4 on February 04, 2013, 04:10:44 AM
Applause Applause Applause

Shukriyah, Dr. Saini ji!
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«Reply #13 on: February 04, 2013, 08:00:30 AM »
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boht khub boht umda likha hai waah
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Quote from: aqsh on February 04, 2013, 05:06:12 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
superb composition abd bundeli jee

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Aqsh ji!
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