Kuchh karo, yaar, kuchh karo jaldee!

by abdbundeli on March 04, 2013, 05:01:59 PM
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Kyoun hai mushtaaq sabra jaaney ko?
Kyaa karuun fir tujhey manaaney ko?

Guzar chukaa hai roshanee kaa qahar;
Neend aayi hai fir zamaaney ko!

Hijra kee shab hai, jaagtaa hun main;
Aa bhi jaao mujhey sulaaney ko!

Har sitaaraa naqaab audhhey hai;
Abra hee abra hain chupaaney ko!

Ley hawaa khushbu-ae-badan teyree,
Jhulaa rahee hai aashiyaaney ko!

Jag rahee saath titahree, ab bhee
Gaa rahee hai tujhey bulaaney ko!

Kuchh karo, yaar, kuchh karo jaldee:
Fir na chal duun sharaabkhaaney ko?

Nabz kyoun ho rahee hai sust, ‘abd’,
Har lamhey jor aazmaaney ko?

    - abd bundeli (Ram Prakash Garg)
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«Reply #1 on: March 04, 2013, 05:16:47 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on March 04, 2013, 05:01:59 PM

Kyoun hai mushtaaq sabra jaaney ko?
Kyaa karuun fir tujhey manaaney ko?

Guzar chukaa hai roshanee kaa qahar;
Neend aayi hai fir zamaaney ko!

Hijra kee shab hai, jaagtaa hun main;
Aa bhi jaao mujhey sulaaney ko!

Har sitaaraa naqaab audhhey hai;
Abra hee abra hain chupaaney ko!

Ley hawaa khushbu-ae-badan teyree,
Jhulaa rahee hai aashiyaaney ko!

Jag rahee saath titahree, ab bhee
Gaa rahee hai tujhey bulaaney ko!

Kuchh karo, yaar, kuchh karo jaldee:
Fir na chal duun sharaabkhaaney ko?

Nabz kyoun ho rahee hai sust, ‘abd’,
Har lamhey jor aazmaaney ko?

    - abd bundeli (Ram Prakash Garg)


naaaice-abd
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«Reply #2 on: March 04, 2013, 05:21:39 PM »
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naaaice-abd

Shukriyah!
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«Reply #3 on: March 04, 2013, 05:56:15 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on March 04, 2013, 05:01:59 PM

Kyoun hai mushtaaq sabra jaaney ko?
Kyaa karuun fir tujhey manaaney ko?

Guzar chukaa hai roshanee kaa qahar;
Neend aayi hai fir zamaaney ko!

Hijra kee shab hai, jaagtaa hun main;
Aa bhi jaao mujhey sulaaney ko!

Har sitaaraa naqaab audhhey hai;
Abra hee abra hain chupaaney ko!

Ley hawaa khushbu-ae-badan teyree,
Jhulaa rahee hai aashiyaaney ko!

Jag rahee saath titahree, ab bhee
Gaa rahee hai tujhey bulaaney ko!

Kuchh karo, yaar, kuchh karo jaldee:
Fir na chal duun sharaabkhaaney ko?

Nabz kyoun ho rahee hai sust, ‘abd’,
Har lamhey jor aazmaaney ko?

    - abd bundeli (Ram Prakash Garg)

wonderful ABD ji ,,,
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«Reply #4 on: March 04, 2013, 07:09:33 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob. Dheron daad.
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wonderful ABD ji ,,,
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Loads of thanks!
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Bahut bahut khoob. Dheron daad.

Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
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«Reply #7 on: March 04, 2013, 09:43:28 PM »
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lajawaab lajawaab Ghazal sirji
thanx for dis beautiful ghazal
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lajawaab lajawaab Ghazal sirji
thanx for dis beautiful ghazal
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Loads of thanks, 'sarfira' ji!
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«Reply #9 on: March 05, 2013, 03:33:51 AM »
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Abd Sahaab Aadaab!



WaaH waaH waaH janab waaH kia kahne aapke is khoob kalaam ke behad umdaa aur
behad khoob kalaam kahi hai aapne.. aik aik sher bus gazab dhaa raha hai.. Usual Smile

Gazab ke khayaal aur umdaa ahsaasaat ko bade hi khoobsurat lafzoN meiN piroya
hai janab... Usual Smile dil shaad ho gaya is khoobsurat kalaam se rubaru ho kar.. Usual Smile


Humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Aise hi umdaa kalaamoN se bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile


Quote from: abdbundeli on March 04, 2013, 05:01:59 PM

Kyoun hai mushtaaq sabra jaaney ko?
Kyaa karuun fir tujhey manaaney ko?

Guzar chukaa hai roshanee kaa qahar;
Neend aayi hai fir zamaaney ko!

Hijra kee shab hai, jaagtaa hun main;
Aa bhi jaao mujhey sulaaney ko!

Har sitaaraa naqaab audhhey hai;
Abra hee abra hain chupaaney ko!

Ley hawaa khushbu-ae-badan teyree,
Jhulaa rahee hai aashiyaaney ko!

Jag rahee saath titahree, ab bhee
Gaa rahee hai tujhey bulaaney ko!

Kuchh karo, yaar, kuchh karo jaldee:
Fir na chal duun sharaabkhaaney ko?

Nabz kyoun ho rahee hai sust, ‘abd’,
Har lamhey jor aazmaaney ko?

    - abd bundeli (Ram Prakash Garg)
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«Reply #10 on: March 05, 2013, 03:44:51 AM »
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yeh ashaar dil mein utar gaye bahut bahut khub
Abd baabu...

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Kyoun hai mushtaaq sabra jaaney ko?
Kyaa karuun fir tujhey manaaney ko?

Hijra kee shab hai, jaagtaa hun main;
Aa bhi jaao mujhey sulaaney ko!

Har sitaaraa naqaab audhhey hai;
Abra hee abra hain chupaaney ko!

Ley hawaa khushbu-ae-badan teyree,
Jhulaa rahee hai aashiyaaney ko!

Nabz kyoun ho rahee hai sust, ‘abd’,
Har lamhey jor aazmaaney ko?

    - abd bundeli (Ram Prakash Garg)


shad o aabaad rahiye

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«Reply #12 on: March 05, 2013, 09:14:24 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #13 on: March 05, 2013, 01:12:49 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on March 05, 2013, 03:33:51 AM
Abd Sahaab Aadaab!

WaaH waaH waaH janab waaH kia kahne aapke is khoob kalaam ke behad umdaa aur
behad khoob kalaam kahi hai aapne.. aik aik sher bus gazab dhaa raha hai.. Usual Smile

Gazab ke khayaal aur umdaa ahsaasaat ko bade hi khoobsurat lafzoN meiN piroya
hai janab... Usual Smile dil shaad ho gaya is khoobsurat kalaam se rubaru ho kar.. Usual Smile

Humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Aise hi umdaa kalaamoN se bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

Namaskaar, ParwaaZ ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
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Quote from: Shihab on March 05, 2013, 03:44:51 AM
yeh ashaar dil mein utar gaye bahut bahut khub
Abd baabu...
shad o aabaad rahiye

Shihab

Shukriyah Shihab ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah! KHUSH RAHIYE!
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