KYA BAAT HO........................................................IFTAKHAR

by Iftakhar Ahmad on February 18, 2013, 06:20:33 AM
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DostoN aur Seniors ko mera aadaab,

Kal mere office meiN ek Colleague ne mujhe ek she'r diya aur iss pe poori ghazal likhne ko kaha. Sher ye tha:

KitaaboN ke panne ko palat kar sochti huN
YuN meri qismat palat jaae to kya baat ho

Maine iss pe poori ghazal likhi hai aur ab aap ki khidmat meiN pesh kar raha huN, ghaur farmaaiyega:

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Dilruba  ka  rukh   palat   jaae   to   phir   kya   baat   ho
Lab  se  unke   haaN   nikal   jaae   to  phir  kya  baat ho

Dil  mera  kab  hi  se  hai   tujh   pe  fida  aye  jan-e-man
Dil  tera   bhi   ab   fisal   jaae   to   phir   kya   baat   ho

YuN   to   nazreiN   hai   milati   door   se   har    roz  wo
Aaj  baaNhoN   meiN   simat   jaae  to  phir  kya baat ho

MuddatoN se  raushani  ka   muntazir  baitha  huN meiN                      
ChaaNd  ab  baahar  nikal   jaae   to   phir  kya  baat  ho

MaiN kitaaboN ke ye  panne   ab   palat  kar  sochta huN
YuN  meri  kismat  palat    jaae   to   phir   kya   baat  ho

Bas  mohabbat  hi  paley ab  iss  jahaaN  meiN har jagah
Kash  ye  nafrat  hi  mit    jaae   to   phir   kya   baat  ho

Saath  tujh  ko  le  chaluN  main  uss  falak  pe ‘Iftakhar’
Ab  ijaazat   saaf   mil    jaae    to    phir   kya   baat   ho
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«Reply #1 on: February 18, 2013, 06:50:49 AM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on February 18, 2013, 06:20:33 AM
DostoN aur Seniors ko mera aadaab,

Kal mere office meiN ek Colleague ne mujhe ek she'r diya aur iss pe poori ghazal likhne ko kaha. Sher ye tha:

KitaaboN ke panne ko palat kar sochti huN
YuN meri qismat palat jaae to kya baat ho

Maine iss pe poori ghazal likhi hai aur ab aap ki khidmat meiN pesh kar raha huN, ghaur farmaaiyega:

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Dilruba  ka  rukh   palat   jaae    to   phir   kya   baat   ho
Lab  se  unke   haaN   nikal   jaae   to  phir  kya  baat ho

Dil  mera  kab  hi  se  hai  tujh  pe  fida  aye  jan-e-man
Dil  tera   bhi   ab   fisal    jaae   to   phir   kya   baat   ho

YuN   to   nazreiN   hai   milati   door   se   har    roz  wo
Aaj  baaNhoN   meiN   simat   jaae  to  phir kya baat ho

MuddatoN se raushani ka  muntazir baitha huN meiN                     
ChaaNd  ab  baahar  nikal   jaae  to  phir  kya  baat  ho

MaiN kitaaboN ke ye  panne   ab  palat kar sochta huN
YuN  meri  kismat  palat    jaae   to   phir   kya   baat  ho

Bas  mohabbat  hi  paley ab  iss jahaaN meiN har jagah
Kash  ye  nafrat  hi  mit    jaae   to    phir   kya   baat   ho

Saath  tujh  ko  le  chaluN  main  uss  falak  pe ‘Iftakhar’
Ab  ijaazat   saaf   mil    jaae     to    phir    kya   baat   ho


wah wah wah wah kya baat hai sabhi ashaar behad umda hain,

Bas mohabbat hi paley ab iss jahaaN meiN har jagah,

 Kash ye nafrat hi mit jaae to phir kya baat ho.

is shair ka to jawab nahi,daaad aur raU qubool kareN
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«Reply #2 on: February 18, 2013, 06:53:48 AM »
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wah wah wah wah
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«Reply #3 on: February 18, 2013, 07:05:14 AM »
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kyaa kehne Iftakhar ji... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!
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«Reply #4 on: February 18, 2013, 07:35:25 AM »
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waah Ahmad sahab kya khoob ghazal likhi aapne
maza aa gya ji
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daad daad daad
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«Reply #5 on: February 18, 2013, 07:39:43 AM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on February 18, 2013, 06:20:33 AM
DostoN aur Seniors ko mera aadaab,

Kal mere office meiN ek Colleague ne mujhe ek she'r diya aur iss pe poori ghazal likhne ko kaha. Sher ye tha:

KitaaboN ke panne ko palat kar sochti huN
YuN meri qismat palat jaae to kya baat ho

Maine iss pe poori ghazal likhi hai aur ab aap ki khidmat meiN pesh kar raha huN, ghaur farmaaiyega:

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Dilruba  ka  rukh   palat   jaae   to   phir   kya   baat   ho
Lab  se  unke   haaN   nikal   jaae   to  phir  kya  baat ho

Dil  mera  kab  hi  se  hai   tujh   pe  fida  aye  jan-e-man
Dil  tera   bhi   ab   fisal   jaae   to   phir   kya   baat   ho

YuN   to   nazreiN   hai   milati   door   se   har    roz  wo
Aaj  baaNhoN   meiN   simat   jaae  to  phir  kya baat ho

MuddatoN se  raushani  ka   muntazir  baitha  huN meiN                     
ChaaNd  ab  baahar  nikal   jaae   to   phir  kya  baat  ho

MaiN kitaaboN ke ye  panne   ab   palat  kar  sochta huN
YuN  meri  kismat  palat    jaae   to   phir   kya   baat  ho

Bas  mohabbat  hi  paley ab  iss  jahaaN  meiN har jagah
Kash  ye  nafrat  hi  mit    jaae   to   phir   kya   baat  ho

Saath  tujh  ko  le  chaluN  main  uss  falak  pe ‘Iftakhar’
Ab  ijaazat   saaf   mil    jaae    to    phir   kya   baat   ho



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«Reply #7 on: February 18, 2013, 08:36:47 AM »
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khoob , iftakhar saheb .
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Waah waah waah. Behad umda ashaaron se saji is khoobsurat ghazal par hamari dili mubarakbad ko qubool kare
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«Reply #9 on: February 18, 2013, 09:32:53 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: February 18, 2013, 10:25:57 AM »
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«Reply #11 on: February 18, 2013, 10:31:56 AM »
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Bahut khoob iftakhar bhai
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«Reply #12 on: February 18, 2013, 01:36:58 PM »
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Ifteqaar Sahaab Aadaab!


Kia baat hai janab, badi khoob kalaam kahi hai.... aap bhi kafi romantic
hero hai janab bahut khoob... Usual Smile

Achche ashaar rahe, Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Qalb Sahaab nice job... Qalb Sahaab ke reply bhi gaur talab hai Ifteqaar
Sahaab.. Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

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very good ji bhut khub likha ha ap naya
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